- Nov 2022
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github.com github.com
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<br><br><br><br> <br><br><br><br>
use css to position instead
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github.com github.com
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<h6>
This is a caption not a heading.
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servises
Use Grammarly or a similar app to catch your spelling mistakes
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clicable
Use Grammarly or a similar app to catch your spelling mistakes
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class="left"
this is the second class left on this page
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right
if you decide to change the position of this you will also have to change the name of this class and the associated css. Try using a name which is related to the content rather than position
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github.com github.com
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<h4>
Make this a paragraph rather than a heading.
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<h2>
this should be in article not main
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<h4>
I think this is a paragraph not a heading
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<h4>
These should be links
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github.com github.com
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div
use the p element instead of making a class paragraph
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</div>
The page needs a footer and remember to format with prettier. It makes the code easier to read
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</figure>
You need headings on your page for visual hierarchy and also seo and screenreaders
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<figcaption>
correct use of figcaption
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<br>
use css to position content on the page.
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- Oct 2022
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github.com github.com
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A NEW KIND OF BEAST </p>
I think this is more of a heading than a paragraph
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github.com github.com
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button
You can shorten this to btn
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<p class="two">A NEW KIND OF BEAST</p>
This is more of a heading than a paragraph
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github.com github.com
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<p>Below is a list of services we proudly offer.</p>
This seems out of place as there is no list that follows. It might be better to put it below the <main> and above the cuts where the list is.
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<span> 😀 </span>
I like your emoji
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github.com github.com
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As this is the root element you can put this code at the top of your css sheet
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github.com github.com
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<div>
I would use main and sections instead of div
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<div id="officeHours"> <p><strong>Monday</strong> ~ Closed</p> <p><strong>Tuesday</strong> 9:00am ~ 5:00pm</p> <p><strong>Wednesday</strong> 9:00am ~ 8:00pm</p> <p><strong>Thursday</strong> 9:00am ~ 8:00pm</p> <p><strong>Friday</strong> 9:00am ~ 5:00pm</p> <p><strong>Saturday</strong> 9:00am ~ 4:00pm</p> <p><strong>Sunday</strong> ~ Closed</p></div>
I don't think you need strong for the hours of operation. You could use to bold instead
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<small>If you're looking to make an appointment online, please do so here.</small>
Needs link as you are asking people to make an appointment here. Link is expected
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github.com github.com
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<h1>Welcome to Hairpins Boutique Salon</h1>
I believe you put the h1 inside the main tag
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width="50" height="50"
It would be nice if the picture could be larger and take up the full width of the page.
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github.com github.com
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<body> <!--F22 DGL 103 CVS1 - RENU GOPINATHA PILLAI - Assignment A --> <h1>Hello World</h1> <p>This is Renu Gopinatha Pillai speaking.</p> <img src="images/HTML.png" width="400" alt="HTMLCSS"> </body> </html>
Indenting the h1 and p elements makes it visually easier to read the code.
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- Sep 2022
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github.com github.com
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href="rpillai1@nic.bc.ca">rpillai1@nic.bc.ca
To create an e-mail link the href attribute value needs to start with mailto:"rpillail@nic.bc.ca
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<P>
Requires a lowercase "p"
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CSS,JavaScript
requires space between CSS and JavaScript
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.I
requires a space between the period and the I
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<hr> <!--The <hr> element is displayed as a horizontal rule that is used to separate content in an HTML page.-->
This is a really useful element that visually breaks up your page nicely.
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github.com github.com
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some
As you are referencing a list below, "these" would be a more direct choice of word. The word some is a more ambiguous (vague) one.
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Especially I
We don't usually start a sentence with the word especially. "I especially like" is less awkward a sentence and more grammatically correct.
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any website
Either a website or any websites Any suggests plural (more than one)
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<b>Yuki</b>.</p> <p>I was born in <b>Japan</b>
Excellent and correct use of bold
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came
The verb "come" in some circumstances requires a "to" following it, as it does in this instance. We talk about coming to a place, person or object = "came to" (a place in this instance)
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Canana
spelling mistake
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.But
but joins the two sentences so you need a comma rather than a period and the b is a small b.
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github.com github.com
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Yuki Onishi
I believe alt is a description of the image you have included, not your name. The purpose is to describe the image if it doesn't load properly or for accessibility, for example, for people who have difficulty seeing. It is also used for SEO (search engine optimization)
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