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  1. Apr 2020
    1. A current under sea Picked his bones in whispers. As he rose and fell He passed the stages of his age and youth Entering the whirlpool.

      This passage is very intrugiing becasue it tells a fragmented story of Phlebas. His body is already dead, but the speaker speaks of his body as if it were still alive and moving forwarc in time, making him grow old in the process. His burial at sea suggests that he drowns alone, his memories lost as his body is picked apart by the currents. The speaker also leaves with a warning to whoever steers what I assume to be a boat to turn back or risk being swallowed by the whirlpool. The transition of time is a motif as well as the fragmented story of Phlebas, who is already dead by the start of part IV.

    2. man

      After looking up who Tiresias was, a blind ghost who lived as a woman for a couple of years. This can definitely be a motif for the living undead. What was most interesting to me though was the mentioning of "the sailor home from sea", which kind of delves back into the subconcious memories of the ghost as it walks down the streets of London. This reference to Tiresias as an Old Man with wrinkled breasts could be associated to the loss of innocence through the loss of life. Coming back to London as an Old Man remembering what everything used to be. Since the speaker is referenced as an Old Man and a Ghost it appears that there is a gap of time missing in what happened, which itself is another motif. As a result the speaker is left feeling exiled by humanity after wandering by himself for so long, which is another motif in itself. The speaker is a ghost, despite still being alive and they are left in exile looking at the last fragments of humanity through whispered memories.

  2. Mar 2020
    1. Your arms full, and your hair wet, I could not Speak, and my eyes failed, I was neither Living nor dead, and I knew nothing, Looking into the heart of light, the silence.

      Wait, did the boy drown? It would explain the hair wet and the Dull and empty sea. Her reaction also reveals that it must have been terrible sight to see. It would only explain that she was in shock or numb, on account of the fact that "eyes failed, I was neither Living nor dead"

    2.     Frisch weht der Wind                       Der Heimat zu                       Mein Irisch Kind,                       Wo weilest du?

      "To Home My Irish, child, Where are you?" Are the roots that are stretching out reaching for the child, the "son of man"? Could this be refering to a child's death?

    3. Bin gar keine Russin, stamm’ aus Litauen, echt deutsch.

      Copy and pasted this on google translate, it looks to be german translating to, "I'm not a Russian, I’m from Lithuania, really". I'm confused as to the reason why he decides to include this translated in german.

    4.   April is the cruellest month, breeding Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing Memory and desire

      So, spring is a bad time of year because life spurts from the grounds? Who exactly would even feel this way?

    5. April is the cruellest month, breeding Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing Memory and desire, stirring Dull roots with spring rain.

      While we may imagine spring as a great season, where life begins to bloom from the earth, who exactly would think the opposite? Why would spring be considered cruel?

    1. from imaginations which have no peasant traditions to give them character

      The young peasants are sold on grand tales that inspire greed. No aspirations, unwed,

    2. mountain folk from Kentucky or the ribbed north end of Jersey

      Ribbed, could be implied as rough, isolated peoples who differ from the lives American are usually accustomed to. These people west of the country live lives in a different manner, and the fact that they are isolated makes them appear unpredictable.

    1. sheet-anchor himself as Freddie Drummond, closer ties and relations in his own social nook were necessary. It was time that he was married, anyway, and he was fully aware that if Freddie Drummond didn’t get married, Bill Totts assuredly would, and the complications were too awful to contemplate.

      Drummond rejects the newly developed feelings of his alter ego. Could it. be that Drummond is trying to hard to maintain his facade. He finds enjoyment out of exploring the world through the eyes of Bill. He is able to let loose on his inhibitions, something that terrifies Drummond.

    2. Bill Totts liked the girls and the girls liked him, while Freddie Drummond enjoyed playing the ascetic in this particular, was open in his opposition to equal suffrage, and cynically bitter in his secret condemnation of coeducation.

      Bill Totts was more popular with women, the regular old Freddie wasn't

    3. “Big” Bill Totts he did a myriad things that Freddie Drummond would never have been permitted to do

      THe aesthetic of the working man becomes so abstract to the upper echelons of society that they become fetishised by them.

    4. Everybody liked Bill, and more than one working girl made love to him

      His alter ego perhaps is the root for all of his goals and accomplishments. He finds a way to achieve what he wishes within another identity he creates for himself out of desire and not

    5. angry and incoherently slangy

      Incoherence at this point still places him divided against the working man. In fact the failure to recognize the working man's vernacular, he further admits he does not belong in their group.

    6. tempered seed of his ancestors, who had been bookmen generation preceding generation; but at any rate, he found enjoyment in being down in the working-class world

      Alienation, using two identities to hide between his identities. Inditity becomes split by dualism

    7. but for the fact that it was the dryest, deadest, most formal, and most orthodox screed ever written on the subject. He was a very reserved man, and his natural inhibition was large in quantity and steel-like in quality. He had but few friends. He was too undemonstrative, too frigid. He had no vices, nor had anyone ever discovered any temptations. Tobacco he detested, beer he abhorred, and he was never known to drink anything stronger than an occasional light wine at dinner.

      In this sense he is the alien entering into a different society, the fact that it is a member from the better off side of the Slot is what makes this piece modernist. Everyone from the least ideal side of the slot seeks to venture towards the better side. Seeing a man who would purposelfully attempt to coexist with them, who is from the upper echelon of society is a contrast of the norms they have come to accept.

    8. As he said, in the preface to his second book, “The Toiler,” he endeavored really to know the working people, and the only possible way to achieve this was to work beside them, eat their food, sleep in their beds, be amused with their amusements, think their thoughts, and feel their feelings.

      Drummonds goal in this case was to fully emulate the aesthetic of the working man. He wants to speak their language, wear their clothes, engage in their activities etc.

    9. developed into a very good imitation of a genuine worker. He was a natural linguist, and he kept notebooks, making a scientific study of the workers’ slang or argot, until he could talk quite intelligibly.

      This guy sounds like an undercover cop that gets sent to dig up dirt on organized crime

    10. essayed to carry two boxes of fruit at a time

      Instead of being on the working man/woman's sidehe finds ways for the workers to instead work harder, and continues to call them lazy. He is on the owner/factory/industry's side in this debate.

    11. malingering on piece-work, generalized about the inherent laziness of the unskilled laborer, and proceeded next day to hammer out three dollars’ worth of boxes.

      This failure to connect allowed him to make false generalization of the working man, which is then published and used to influence workers

    12. By the third day he was able to earn the same. But he was ambitious. He did not care to jog along and, being unusually able and fit, on the fourth day earned two dollars. The next day, having keyed himself up to an exhausting high-tension, he earned two dollars and a half. His fellow workers favored him with scowls and black looks, and made remarks, slangily witty and which he did not understand, about sucking up to the boss and pace

      This moment Drummond is described as failing once again to connect with the working man and lost in his own greed and ambition.

    13. generalized much and often erroneously

      Implying he only had general knowledge, hinting at the ability to leave this circumstance, therefore not recognizing the working man completely.

    14. namely, he was a man who had seen better days, very much better days, but who was down in his luck, though, to be sure, only temporarily.

      The working people assume something is wrong with Drummond. No one in their right mind would do something like that and not be down on his luck.

  3. Feb 2020
    1. It is better to present one Image in a lifetime than to produce voluminous wor

      Better short and sweet then overdone and lost in what it’s intended meaning was

    2. s on a wet, black bough.

      After looking up what a black bough was I initially notice to correlation between nature and industrialization. The brightness of the petals contrasts heavily between the deep dark color of the branch the petals sit upon. The vibrant petals stand out.

    3. he apparition of these faces in the crowd

      After looking up the definition for 'apparition', I believe that the person looking at the faces in the crowd is having a surreal moment recognizing individual faces in the massive crowd revealing the many lives that revolve around a packed metro.

    1. moaning for release

      This line words this desire of love as just being a need of sexual release? Could Millay mean that many men confuse the feelings of love with lust?

    2. lack of love alone.

      What does it mean to be without love according to the poem? Does it reduce the value of the life that you live, would life be therefore incomplete as a result of this?

    3. Love can not fill the thickened lung with breath, Nor clean the blood, nor set the fractured bone;

      Love doesn't provide any function to the body, Millay uses proper comparisons when comparing true necessities to the feelings of Love. It isn't important, yet many are doomed to forget this?

    1. ear of sorrow and weariness, Anger, discontent and drooping hopes? Degenerate sons and daughters, Life is too strong for you– It takes life to love Lif

      In these final lines the speaker, who may be Lucinda Matlock, reflects on her long life, the marriage to her husband, and her children who passed. In these lines it almost feels as if the speaker is exhausted yet grateful for the life she lived

    1. The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, And miles to go before I sleep, And miles to go before I sleep.

      The speaker in this poem is traveling through the night with purpose. He is heading somewhere and cannot afford to wait. This poem gives a glimpse of the weary traveler by describing in detail the enviorment around and in the personification of the horse’s internal monologue.

    2. He is all pine and I am apple orchard. My apple trees will never get across And eat the cones under his pines, I tell him. He only says, “Good fences make good neighbors.”

      Apple Tree and Pine Tree could be referring to difference of identity in segregation.

    3. Oh, just another kind of outdoor game, One on a side. It comes to little more:

      It could be alluding to hunting as a sport, where the sacrifice of life is belittled and often taken advantage of. It could also be referring to nature as a whole.

    4. The work of hunters is another thing: I have come after them and made repair

      What would this look like? Is the speaker bringing life back into nature? Who exactly is the speaker?

    1. And yes, there was a shop-worn brotherhood About them; but the men were just as good, And just as human as they ever were

      In this stanza the speaker of the poem reflects on the prior youth of the older men who worked in a store for the entirety of their lived. Them being good reveals that that much time and experience made them great men.

    2. are but the clerks of Time, Tiering the same dull webs of disconte

      I think this stanza is primarily focused on the fear of growing old. It approaches the youth who have a fear of their own mortality and tells them the only people who live forever is kings and poets, suggesting that the words and ideals presented by them will forever exist within history.

    1. It is the same woman, I know, for she is always creeping, and most women do not creep by daylight. I see her on that long road under the trees, creeping along, and when a carriage comes she hides under the blackberry vines. I don’t blame her a bit. It must be very humiliating to be caught creeping by daylight! I always lock the door when I creep by daylight. I can’t do it at night, for I know John would suspect something at once.

      Is this phantom woman meant to be a reflection of the nameless narrator's innermost desires? Is she the reason why the narrator begins to behave according to her impulses? This lack of association between the phantom and the narrator, refuses to acknowledge the existence of woman who act on their own impulses, and only acknowledge a woman like Jenny who accepted her role within the status quo

    2. He said I was his darling and his comfort and all he had, and that I must take care of myself for his sake, and keep well.

      John is manipulative by guilt tripping the narrator over all of the "sacrifices" he does for her.

    3. He is very careful and loving, and hardly lets me stir without special direction

      Men often times are viewed as the leader of the household, mainly for being recognized as a provider. He is in control of his household and stern in his affection. In YW John appears as an ideal husband, but refuses to listen to his wife's grievances. Can we as the readers really consider this as an ideal spouse? The connotation on the word "Careful" also suggests that the nameless female narrator is delicate and requires the help of a man to pursue a goal.

    4. housekeeper

      In this passage, Gilman reminds the reader of the status quo of women in this age, and how this mindset prohibits a woman from seeking any sort of intellectual stimulation. As a result the nameless female narrator feels unworthy to John, despite searching for validation from him.

    1. It was the ideal of “book-learning”; the curiosity, born of compulsory ignorance, to know and test the power of the cabalistic letters of the white man, the longing to know.

      The allusions to literature as the promised land promised by Moses gives a lot of praise towards curiosity

    2. The Nation has not yet found peace from its sins; the freedman has not yet found in freedom his promised land. Whatever of good may have come in these years of change, the shadow of a deep disappointment rests upon the Negro people,—a disappointment all the more bitter because the unattained ideal was unbounded save by the simple ignorance of a lowly people.

      Even though a vast amount of time has passed since emancipation very little progress has been made.

    3. a world which yields him no true self-consciousness, but only lets him see himself through the revelation of the other world

      This sense of realization must be anxiety inducing. The paranoia sets as you aren't aware who views you as an actual person, and not just a problem.

    4. . Just how I would do it I could never decide: by reading law, by healing the sick, by telling the wonderful tales that swam in my head,—some way

      In this sentence it almost feels as if the author was detailing how he would perform a heist, suggesting the path of success for a colored man was way less likely.

    5. Then it dawned upon me with a certain suddenness that I was different from the others; or like, mayhap, in heart and life and longing, but shut out from their world by a vast veil.

      I could only imagine the confusion and disappointment experienced, when a child just wants to play along it is especially jarring to be treated as an outcast. It forces the child to compare himself to the other white classmates.

    6. How does it feel to be a problem?

      This question speaks volumes and doesn't really require an answer. In each and every way it can be stated, it still leaves a sour taste.

    7. All life long crying without avail, As the water all night long is crying to me.

      Really fond of the personification of the streams waters are explained as being tears always pouring on. Its continual existence speaks volumes on the mood the author was going for.

    1. He had even published a dozen volumes of American history for no other purpose than to satisfy himself whether, by severest process of stating, with the least possible comment, such facts as seemed sure,

      One could have all the facts on a particular subject but may be ignorant if they don't seek to interpret what they learn

    2. Before the end, one began to pray to it; inherited instinct taught the natural expression of man before silent and infinite force

      This passage struck me differently because of the allusion of machinery as something that should be praised. If you think about it there is some truth to it. While we may not openly worship the technology we have, we definitely rely on it enough. Theres a resemblance of reliability that is apparent in technology that hasn't been discussed much before.

    3. Nothing in education is so astonishing as the amount of ignorance it accumulates in the form of inert facts.

      This is such a powerful statement. It's clear to say the author doesn't agree with education the way it is done, because it worries more about results then it does about getting the material across.

  4. Jan 2020
    1. They Feed They Lion

      This title is extremely interesting because at first it doesn't seem to make much sense at all. Upon closer reading the title and it's references in the poem I assume that the Lion is meant to be a being that nourishes itself upon the darkness and injustice of human kind.

    2. Earth is eating trees, fence posts, Gutted cars, earth is calling in her little ones, “Come home, Come home!”

      Could this be an Allusion to Global Warming or the effects of pollution upon the earth?