But Grete’s words had immediately made the mother very uneasy. She walked to the side, caught sight of the enormous brown splotch on the flowered wallpaper, and, before she became truly aware that what she was looking at was Gregor, screamed out in a high pitched raw voice
As Gregor adapts to his metamorphosis, his climbing on the walls of his room draws the attention of his mother and sister Grete to arrange his furniture. Johnston’s interpretation of their acknowledgement of Gregor by entering the room together for the first time is significant in that it emphasizes the process of Grete’s growing influence in the family. First and foremost, while Muir describes Gregor as a ‘mass’, Johnston calls him a ‘splotch’, which effectively lowers his status and value but also denotes the insignificance shown towards him in the scene. He is equivalent to a mere speck on the wall. Johnston’s translation treats Gregor and the situation like a foreign subject that his mother and Grete are unable to empathize with or understand. The tone and mood of Johnston’s translation are more tense and filled with anticipation; it is obvious that fear and confusion are very present as the main theme of his novella. In the first line, Muir’s word choices focus on Grete’s impact on and relationship with her mother. Through Muir’s use of the word “succeeded,” it makes it seem that Grete intentionally aimed to frighten her mother. Muir’s translation makes Grete sound manipulative while Johnston’s translation does not imply a correspondence between Grete and a continuous intention to exert control. Interestingly, Johnston’s use of the word ‘raw’ to describe the mother's scream makes her sound barbaric, while Muir's use of “loud, hoarse voice’ makes her seem as if she had been straining herself through the difficult time period of Gregor’s metamorphosis. Johnston’s choice of wording might have been for the intent to highlight the paradox between Gregor’s increasing dehumanization despite his steadfast love for his family members, versus the increasing vitality of his family despite their lack of genuine love for Gregor.<br> (Julia M., Joy L., Alessandria G., Kiara C., Erisha B., Katerina H.)