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Breathing Problems:

Please reformat your breathing problems questionnaire, specify how to complete it.

Treatment:

1. We noticed that we regards to ICS Adherence there is comment 'not applicable', however, the patient is on ICS (please see section Management Options: Patients on inhaled steroid in combination with LABA), therefore, it seems inconsistent with the comment related to inhaled therapy outlined in the section Management Options.
2. So the question is: Is the patient actually on ICS?
3. Drug list is inconsistent with Management Options considerations.

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'Medicines and treatment', please put in grey as a section heading. Please remove the second duplicate 'Medicines and treatment'.

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'Future plans and goals', please put in grey as a section heading

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Question about breathlessness:

forth point: instead of 'yards', use metric system.

Can the questions be numbered?

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Label the scale from 1 to 100 for question about the cough.

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Questions 2 and 3.

'Thank you for taking the time to complete this questionnaire.' repeated twice.

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Should there be a section in grey 'Thinking about your cough'?

Currently, it just goes right after the section about flare-ups and treatment.

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Thinking about the treatment you received for your flare-ups in the past year:

1. Underline 'in the past year'. We just want to make sure that they do not miss 'the last 12 months'.
2. Question 1 in the same section: Are you referring to how many times they 'received' the treatment or how many times they 'took' the treatment?

Overall, it looks wonderful.

We would all want a report like that!

Lung Function:

Sinthia's comment: Strictly speaking it should just be PEF, not PEFR, because flow is a rate.