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  1. Apr 2015
    1. And yet, to wish away the resentments of white Americans, to label them as misguided or even racist, without recognizing they are grounded in legitimate concerns – this too widens the racial divide, and blocks the path to understanding.

      In this and other paragraphs, Obama does a good job of breaking down the "two-extremes". Cross explains that most propaganda presents a situation with only two possible approaches or solutions: one right and one wrong, one good and one bad. Obama tries to prevent people from claiming these extremes: that one race is "right", and one "wrong", by addressing the legitimacy of everyone's concerns.

    2. I am the son of a black man from Kenya and a white woman from Kansas.

      Obama uses plain-folks appeal to relate to his audience on a deeper level. His diverse backstory mimics that of many other Americans.

    3. unyielding faith in the decency and generosity of the American people

      Obama is stroking the American reader's ego. ("Stroking" a term used by Cross)

    4. to continue the long march of those who came before us, a march for a more just, more equal, more free, more caring and more prosperous America.

      I can see Orwell rolling his eyes at this "stale metaphor" which is further weakened by the repetition of the comparative "more". Cross would point out that justice, equality, freedom, and "caring and prosperous" are all glittering generalities.

    5. stained by this nation’s original sin of slavery

      This nuanced statement has a huge impact on the reader. For one, it sounds good. The alliteration of stain, sin, and slavery catch the ear. It also pairs a biblical allusion of, perhaps, the biggest mistake ever with slavery: the "home of the free"'s deepest historical regret. Obama brings this history to the present with the word "stained", and he shows that the impacts of slavery haven't ended yet. Both Orwell and Cross would approve of this statement's simple language and almost subconscious affect on the reader's thought process.

    6. America’s improbable experiment in democracy

      This is original wording to liven up a common concept. Orwell would approve.