As you draft and revise your proposal, check for the following:
Follow this list when drafting and revising.
As you draft and revise your proposal, check for the following:
Follow this list when drafting and revising.
Most proposals follow a standard block format—one inch margins, single spaced text, skip one space between paragraphs, with no paragraph indentation. You also need headings and subheadings to identify and group areas of content and specific sections. The headings levels should contrast with one another, while remaining consistent throughout the document.
Standard proposal use block format. This section includes basics to formatting.
Although you will not find your exact situation/problem, you will find documents about similar problems. These documents should have similar populations, environments, workforces, etc.
The research will help to strengthen your proposal. Find similar situations where the problem was similar and how the solution helped.
Describe the audience of the final recommendation report (which may be different than the audience for the proposal, especially if the proposal is an internal document [requesting time and permission from someone within the organization] but the final report is an external document [the recommendation can only be put into action by someone outside the author’s organization]). You may need to discuss for whom the report is designed, their titles and jobs, their technical background, and their ability to understand the report.
Final report may be for a different audience than the proposal.
Most proposals include the following sections: Introduction; Description of the problem, opportunity, or situation; Background of the problem; Method and procedure; a Schedule; Cost and required resources; Benefits and feasibility; Conclusion; and References.
Basic outline for proposal writing. Things to remember.
request for proposal (RFP), request for quotation (RFQ), and invitation for bid (IFB) are common ways to solicit business proposals for business, industry, and the government.
Key terms
There are several aspects of the proposal that you need to determine before drafting. Identifying these factors are vital to creating a proposal which will be accepted—whether the proposal is written for internal or external readers, the proposal is solicited or unsolicited, and if the solution is known or unknown.
When writing proposal identify whether it internal / external, solicited / unsolicited, and known / unknown.
“a proposal” is it asks the audience to approve, fund, or grant permission to do the proposed project.
Proposal is asking for permission to do work, project, etc.
To write a successful proposal, put yourself in the place of your audience—the recipient of the proposal—and think about what sorts of information that person(s) would need in order to feel confident having you complete the project.
Consider the reader when writing proposals. Build confidence.
Most ethics violations in technical writing are (probably) unintentional, but they are still ethics violations. That means a technical writer must consciously identify their biases and check to see if a bias has influenced any presentation: whether in charts and graphs, or in discussions of the evidence, or in source use (or, of course, in putting the crucial O-ring information where the launch decision makers would realize it was important).
Bringing forward the O-ring data could have changed the outcome of the Challenger.
NASA engineers wrote about the problem with O-ring seals on the space shuttle Challenger. The unethical feature was that the crucial information about the O-rings was buried in a middle paragraph, while information approving the launch was in prominent beginning and ending spots.
The crucial information about the O-ring seals should have been presented to the reader in a fashion that was clear and evident that this was a crucial problem.
Titles that are so short and/or cryptic that they sound telegraphic are not useful.
Short titles can leave the reader guessing what the topics subject matter.
Your eye is impressed by novelty more than sheer size or color or any other visual characteristic.
I find this to be interesting, the ides that our eyes are drawn to new visions.
Five actions can help make your cover letter compelling: Make a list of your top ten strengths. Make a list of your top five weaknesses (areas you would like to strengthen). Decipher the job description to identify each separate skill and qualification. Compare the two lists to see if they are in alignment. Also identify the gaps—does the job description list something that you haven’t done? Highlight your top skills that align with the job description as you will use them in Other strengths and skills could include (in alphabetical order).
Five actions when to help when preparing a cover letter.
Here are some action verbs that may be helpful to use in your résumé sections.
Helpful for resume sections.
The application letter includes five main sections: 1) heading and greeting/salutation, 2) introductory paragraph, 3) middle paragraphs, 4) closing paragraph, and 5) complimentary close.
Formatting a business letter with these five main sections.
You can complete two prewriting steps before writing to decipher the job description: 1) List each skill and qualification on a separate line and 2) Group like with like. If communication skills are listed as important, in addition to giving presentations, list one after the other. An example of a job description and the deciphering process is given below.
Ways to decipher the job description, Group like for like; List skills and qualifications on separate line.
The immediate objective of your application letter and accompanying résumé is to attract this person’s attention. The ultimate goal is to obtain an interview. As you write your application letter, strive to complete three tasks: 1) catch the reader’s attention favorably, 2) convince the reader that you are a qualified candidate for the job, and 3) leave a lasting impression.
Objective is to attract the person's attention when writing application letter. Leave a lasting impression.
include a references page with your résumé, it may save an interested employer the trouble of having to ask in the first place; a proactive, impressive strategy would be to create a single-page document that includes the following information.
Time saver for the employer.
n a North American context, never include information like height, weight, or marital status, as this information is unrelated to your qualifications and might become a source of discrimination.
Exclude personal information like height, weight, or marital status.
Proofread your résumé several times, use spell check, and ask an exceptional proofreader to review it. Always assume that an error lurks somewhere in your résumé and review it until you find that error!
So important, I don't know how many times I feel something is error free only to send it off and then see the mistake.
To highlight skills and achievements rather than past employment/companies. To minimize a less-than-extensive work experience history. To emphasize other achievements, honors, and abilities. To de-emphasize gaps in employment or career mobility. To include categories like communication, teamwork, and leadership skills, as well as volunteer experience or athletic achievements.
Reasons one might choose a functional resume.
The functional résumé focuses on skills and experience, rather than on chronological work history. It describes responsibilities, accomplishments, and quantifiable achievements under categories in the skills section. The functional résumé typically opens with a brief summary/profile detailing strengths (one to three sentences) and demonstrates how you match the requirements of your potential job by including relevant achievements and accomplishments.
Functional resume organizes relevant skills and responsibilities into categories highlighting your qualifications.
listed in reverse chronological order (starting with the most recent positions/schools and working backward), and achievements/skills are detailed underneath each position
Chronological order lists most recent positions or schooling.
functional (or skills) résumé serves candidates who are transitioning between fields, who are shifting from a military to a civilian career, or who have gained skills in a variety of different settings (workplace, academic, volunteer).
Functional resume for those transitions between fields gaining skills in various settings.
The chronological résumé is the most common résumé format. It is best for candidates with a long/uninterrupted work history, in fields where the company worked for is of paramount importance. It is also well suited for those applicants who want to highlight their education, as many jobs will ask for a degree (e.g. BA, JD, MBA, MA, MD, PhD, etc.)
Most common format; Chronological resume highlights education and long work history in fields of importance.
example, perhaps you bullet point the following: Responsible for intake and outtake of approximately 1,000 books daily, resulting in 80% fewer lost books this year.
Good example of talking points; Using the numerical facts to showcase accomplishments or responsibilities.
technical and “soft” skills that will help you perform the listed job duties.
Employers want to hire someone that will work well with the team or environment. Having the soft skills to accompany your technical background is crucial.
Mentioning factual, numerical examples of praiseworthy attributes and skills will allow you to boast without sounding boastful
Back up strengths and abilities with numerical facts.
must hold attention long enough to propel your job search forward.
Key Tip: Keep audience in mind. Hold their attention.
Remember, as the most critical component of a marketing campaign in which you advertise your professional self, your résumé must be clear, concise, and error free. Most seasoned recruiters scan a résumé in about seven to twenty seconds
Key tip: Resume must be clear, concise, and error free. This is a way to stand out from the rest. It demonstrates right from the beginning that you are well put together. Giving a strong first impression.
You should aim for a full page as you are building experience and generating content.
Length of resume; 1-3 pages. Aim for a full page.
your résumé should have a format that is pleasing to read, efficient in its use of the English language, and very concise.
Tips for formatting resume.
make sure to change the name of the potential employer and company for each application; addressing a potential employer by the wrong name is the surest way to remove your materials from consideration.
Always important to do a good proof read to catch mistakes like company name or address mix up.
choose the functional (skills) résumé format to place more emphasis on a specific set of current qualifications and slightly less emphasis on your education or work experience
Ways to crafting tailor resume to different jobs.
Company, organization and government web sites: Visit the employment section on websites of companies you admire; search federal, state, county, and city websites for government job postings.
This can be an easy way to find jobs with in companies or organizations that you trust and are well known.
The trick, if there is a trick, to your weaknesses lies in your plan to strengthen them. Having a plan to strengthen a weakness is impressive, especially if you have already taken steps to do so.
How to handle weaknesses; Having a plan to strengthen them. This is great to keep in mind. Having the self awareness to recognize weakness and finding ways to strengthen and develop them will allow for true self growth.
The introduction references background information and informs the purpose of the message. The body, consisting of one simple paragraph or multiple paragraphs, communicates the message. The conclusion expresses the action expected of the recipient. The conclusion could consist of one paragraph or several, or it could be simple sentence that asks for the recipient to contact the sender if there are questions.
Main parts of memo.
useful for short exchanges,
Use text for quick updates. Choose words and terms that will deliver a clear message.
It tends to be written from a one-to-all perspective (like mass communication), broadcasting a message to multiple recipients, rather than a single individual. A memo must be concise, well organized (following the guidelines given in the next section), and addressed to specific audiences with standard subject lines.
Memo must be concise and well organized; One-to-all perspective.
When closing, end with something brief but friendly: Thank you, Best wishes, See you tomorrow, or Regards. For a very formal message, such as a job application, use the kind of closing that you might see in a business letter: Sincerely, or Respectfully yours. If you do not know the reader well, you might also consider including your title and the organization you belong to, for example:
Leave a polished closing with name and title. Find appropriate ending depending on the audience.
cut and paste any relevant text (for example, computer error messages, assignment prompts, segments of a previous message, etc.) into the email so that the reader has a frame of reference from which to answer.
I find this is helpful when transferring information. It ensures the information stays consistent. Especially with serial numbers or equipment specific information.
never use the title Mrs. as you cannot assume a woman is married.
Never assume gender based off the name.
Especially when an individual is on the receiving end of an angry email, anger may seem like the appropriate response. However, such a step is unprofessional and may have serious ramifications. Avoid flame wars. When tempted to send an emotional response, always wait; instead, consider holding off until the message can be phrased in a more objective, professional manner.
Good reminders; Hold off sending emails when triggered or emotional.
If you do include others in the Cc:, however, you will may want to draw attention to that fact in your email, so that the respondent does not overlook the carbon copied individuals due to high email volume.
I like this statement, A good way to ensure everyone is circled in.
One-word subjects such as Hi, Question, or FYI are not informative and may undercut the message’s importance. Overly long or rambling subjects may result in a similar problem.
When dealing with large amounts of email, having a clear heading helps when searching or grouping conversations. This can help with organizing your inbox. Using generic titles like "Hi" or "FYI" make it difficult when searching for specific emails.
message could be forwarded to other people without your knowledge.
Many times emails will be forwarded throughout a company or to clients. Remain professional and act with integrity.
being careful to avoid a demanding tone or the underlying assumption that your request will be granted.
Things not to do; avoid demanding tone or underlying assumptions. I would like to see some examples of this.
Use headings and lists. Readers can be intimidated by dense paragraphs and “walls of text” uncut by anything other than a blank line now and then
The use of headlines can break up the text making it easier for the reader. Understanding your audience will determine which decisions to make.
Eliminate excess words and phrases; state ideas as simply as possible while still providing necessary detail.
15-25 word sentences; reduce word count by 20 % when editing. Cutting out unnecessary details helps sentence clarity.
Revise to use more active verbs, and less be verb phrasing.
More active verbs.
Passive voice is where one switches the location of the subject and object in a sentence. A simple, active sentence such as “The boy threw the ball” becomes the wordy, passive sentence “The ball was thrown by the boy.”
Passive voice become wordy and can be hard to understand.
People seem to read with more confidence and understanding when they have the big picture—a view of what is coming, and how it relates to what they have just read.
Strong introductions give the reader insight into the topic of discussion.
Strengthen transitions and key words.
Transition words help to continue or add to the previous thought.
Add examples to help readers understand. Examples are one of the most powerful ways to connect with audiences, particularly in instructions
Examples help reader to further understand.
Omit unnecessary information. Unnecessary information can also confuse and frustrate readers—
Less is more, in some cases. too much info can mean important details can be overlooked.
Add information readers need to understand your document. Check to see whether certain key information is missing
Double check for missing information.
(older residents are often on a fixed budget; younger residents may think speedbumps are a nonissue), political preference (some could be against infrastructure spending), and other qualities.
expenses and costs are usually a deciding factor along with safety concerns.
Corporate culture is created by the employees and how they interact.
The environment set by the staff.
could annoy users with more knowledge
I find that sometimes the formate or the way the information is presented / organized can be frustrating.
may need to do some research on the individual (if available), the company or organization they work for, or even the industry your audience is a player in. Determining these characteristics will help guide your document creation
Research your audience, gather information when available, this will help with creating a document.
If you believe the document will likely be used by multiple audiences or you are unsure who the primary audience is, you can then write the document so that all the audiences can understand it.
Both audience should be considered when writing a technical document. Even when the audience is unknown.
There are several types of audiences, including experts, technicians, executives, gatekeepers, and non-specialists (laypeople). However, most documents you create will have multiple audiences: often, a primary audience—the main audience for the document—and a secondary audience—other audiences that are likely to read the document, but who are not the main focus. In addition to the type of audience, you should analyze the audience to identify other factors that can affect how the document is received, including background, needs and interests, culture and values, and demographic characteristics.
List of audiences examples; experts, technicians, executive, gatekeepers, and non-specialist. Primary audience- main secondary audience- not main focus but likely to read. Things to consider; background, needs & interests, culture and values, abd demographic characteristics.
Each of these focal points has unique patterns in various cultures, and the differences in nonverbal communication behavior may have deeper cultural meanings. Some cultures may avoid eye contact out of respect; their high-context nature means direct confrontation is discouraged. Other cultures tend to judge low eye contact rather harshly, as either dishonest, disinterest, or indicating low self-esteem. In many Western cultures, punctuality is valued strongly. Other cultures simply do not understand the Western love affair with the hands on the clock.
Each culture interprets body language and personal space differently. This is important to be aware.
Low-context cultures are often described as more action-oriented, practical, direct, and precise.
Low-context; action oriented and direct.
High-context cultures are described as more relational, collectivist, intuitive, and contemplative. This means that people in these cultures emphasize interpersonal relationships; developing trust is an important first step to any business transaction. High-context cultures may emphasize group harmony and consensus over individual achievement.
High-context cultures description; relationship based. maybe less direct and straight forward.
example of a high-context exchange. If you and your friends have a routine of watching football every Sunday, saying “I’ll see you guys this weekend for the game” implies that the “when” and “where” of the game is so ingrained that it does not need to be explicitly stated.
High-context example
The academic writer’s purpose may be to write an assignment, a story, a letter, etc. These works may or may not have a reader outside the classroom. However, technical writing is always much more concerned with articulating a clearly defined purpose with a specific, known reader. Regardless of the number of stakeholders, and the variety of people who may encounter and read your documents, it is important to have a clear idea of your primary reader.
Academic vs Technical writing. Academic; assignment, story, letter, etc. Technical; clear articulation, define purpose, specific known reader.
Study books, articles, reports, websites related to the product Review product specifications: What the product is supposed to do, how it is designed Interview subject-matter experts (SMEs): The product specialists, developers, engineers Attend product meetings during the development cycle Participate in live demonstrations of the product Become familiar with similar, competing products Experiment with working models of the product Ask subject-matter experts to review work for technical accuracy and completeness
Strategies used to ensure technical accuracy of work.
Technical communication is the delivery of technical information to readers (or listeners or viewers) in a manner that is adapted to their needs, their level of understanding, and their background. Most technical documents are also written with a respect for the audience’s time, meaning sentences are written as efficiently as possible and content is arranged and displayed in a way that allows the reader to quickly locate relevant information.
Description of technical communication. Cater to the audience level of understandings and needs.