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knew
italics
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do
italics
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What
italics
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,
delete comma
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man
italics in Crangle's edition
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,
delete comma. It isn't in Crangle's edition
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however
do we need this, considering there is already a "but" at the beginning of this part of the sentence?
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—
inconstistent spacing
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t—
inconsistent spacing
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Collision and Cittàbapini
consistency: italics
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a
roman-à-clef
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The Sacred Prostitute and Other Plays by Mina Loy
If we want the subtitle in italics, The Sacred Prostitute needs to be in normal font and/or inverted commas
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Poets at Play: An Anthology of Modernist Drama
italics
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where
do we need "where"?
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Sex and Character
italics
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refer to the anxieties about masculinity and femininity both in biology and culture at the time
For better reading I would suggest: refer to contemporary anxieties about... I would delete "at the time" at the end of the sentence
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look out:
look outside, onto the streets
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(1907)
insert comma after (1907)
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Fiorenza
italics
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–the
spacing right here?
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consciousness
perspective instead of consciousness?
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also
do we need this?
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The Creative Evolution
italics
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s/of crest and claw/from/
see previous comments
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/o
consistency: spacing and /
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/o
see previous comment
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rie/ of
consistency; spacing and /
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d /
consistency issue with / and spacing throughout the notes: I suggest a space before and after /
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the dash should be longer and separated from magazines here
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who
whom?
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on
in?
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parole in libertà
italics?
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parole in libertà
see previous comment
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parole in libertà
Italics?
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D
small d: Salon d'Automne
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