knew
italics
knew
italics
do
italics
What
italics
,
delete comma
man
italics in Crangle's edition
,
delete comma. It isn't in Crangle's edition
however
do we need this, considering there is already a "but" at the beginning of this part of the sentence?
—
inconstistent spacing
t—
inconsistent spacing
Collision and Cittàbapini
consistency: italics
a
roman-à-clef
The Sacred Prostitute and Other Plays by Mina Loy
If we want the subtitle in italics, The Sacred Prostitute needs to be in normal font and/or inverted commas
Poets at Play: An Anthology of Modernist Drama
italics
where
do we need "where"?
Sex and Character
italics
refer to the anxieties about masculinity and femininity both in biology and culture at the time
For better reading I would suggest: refer to contemporary anxieties about... I would delete "at the time" at the end of the sentence
look out:
look outside, onto the streets
(1907)
insert comma after (1907)
Fiorenza
italics
–the
spacing right here?
consciousness
perspective instead of consciousness?
also
do we need this?
The Creative Evolution
italics
s/of crest and claw/from/
see previous comments
/o
consistency: spacing and /
/o
see previous comment
rie/ of
consistency; spacing and /
d /
consistency issue with / and spacing throughout the notes: I suggest a space before and after /
s-
the dash should be longer and separated from magazines here
who
whom?
on
in?
parole in libertà
italics?
parole in libertà
see previous comment
parole in libertà
Italics?
D
small d: Salon d'Automne