The same principle carries over into the writing style:
I think this could be much shorter. A description of your writing style is a bit overkill or? But go off Mr. Hemingway
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Essential derivations are contained within the main text, without reference to appendices. For a more interlinked reading experience, the thesis is also available in an online form at https://redeboer.github.io/phd-thesis, the source code of which can be easily reused and extended.
Also deine Motivation für deine Arbeit ist es die Arbeit in nem geilen Format zu schrieben so dass es jeder versteht?:D Ich würd das vielleicht eher auf das Framework verallgemeinern? Also deine Motivation war es ja nen Framework zu bauen was self-documenting workflow hat.
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The first three chapters—1 Hadron physics, 2 Scattering theory, and 3 Helicity formalism—set the stage by introducing hadron spectroscopy with emphasis on symmetries, quantum numbers, and nucleon excitations, and by developing the theoretical framework of amplitude analysis. The following chapters—4 Computational techniques and 5 The ComPWA project—present the methodological contribution of this work, namely new computational techniques based on symbolic representations and high-performance computational implementations. Finally, 6 Experimental set-up and 7 Application to data turn to the experimental situation and demonstrate the methods with real data from the BESIII and LHCb experiments. The closing chapter offers a summary and points to future developments, notably the implementation of more advanced amplitude-model parametrisations using symbolic expressions and the exploration of new optimisation techniques that array computing makes feasible.
Sowas ist doch eher Abstract statt Motivation? Würde ich woanders hinpacken. Und man hat mir mal gesagt, dass in den Abstract keine Referenzen (zu Kapiteln oder so) sollen.
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These techniques are validated through two case studies—nucleon excitations in charmonium decays and polarimetry in Λc decays. The remainder of the thesis is organised to first establish the physics background and then develop and apply this methodological framework.
Gehört sowas in die Motivation? Ist das nicht eher Zusammenfassung?
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intricate theoretical description of hadron physics
Es gibt ja nicht eine methode um Hadron physics zu machen oder? Also würde nochmal speziell auf Scattering theory approach und partial wave decomposition eingehen.
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experimental data
Would write a sentence on where to put amplitude analysis in this picture. It is essentially a method to process and detangle experimental data.
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different
Different to what?
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much as atomic spectra reflect underlying electron configurations
But doesn’t Hadronspectroscopy then reflect the underlying quark/gluon (strongly interacting components) configs? Vorher hast du aber gesagt, dass die innere Zusammensetzung nicht beachtet wird.
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unify
Boah I guess the term unify could be a bit missleading here. Because Grand Unified Theory of forces is something of its own.
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another side
I it really „another side“?
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tools
Maybe mention where in this realm amplitude analysis is placed. It has no prediction power like lattice. It employs principles from scattering theory to detangle experimental data. Oder sowas…
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Hat Chad das geschrieben?
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we
I don’t know but should you write the word we? Doesn’t it imply that didn’t do the work on you own?
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Understanding these excitations
I don‘t know if I would mention excited here in particular. Would start with the things you mention later: the framework is tested on excited light baryon resonances… Else it kind of implies that excited hardon state are more important.
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spectrum
Isn’t a spectrum already a classification?
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provides a systematic framework
I wont call Hadron spectroscopy a systematic framework. Or? It is more of an umbrella term for a multitude of methods (PWA, Lattice …) with the goal to classify hadrons into spectra. These methods are then realised many different computer frameworks?
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