he tuition fee was reasonable
Vague. Adding a comparison to other tuitions or evidence from an ancient text would be stronger.
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In order to take part in trade and politics, the demand of skills in reading and writing arose
Oversimplifying. Literacy served as an asset to not just trade and politics but also private affairs and culture.
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through the practical perspective, education in literacy was the most important among the three disciplines
"Most important" is a strong claim, and works if there is an explanation as to why it is the most important. Soften the claim, or expand.
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Old Education lacked heavy structure and only featured schooling up to the elementary level.
Define "Old Education". Needs sourcing.
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this claim is now accepted by most scholars.
"Most scholars" is vague. Adding recent citations or specifying whom these scholars are would strengthen the claim.
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The ancient Greeks believed that Troy was located near the Dardanelles
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The war is one of the most important events in Greek mythology
Subjective claim. Who says so? Needs a source to add backing, or remove altogether.
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