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  1. Nov 2022
    1. For more information on popular and scholarly sources, see Purdue OWL’s many guides, or the following video from SFSU’s Library.

      This video suggests the following steps for researching a paper using the sfsu database. 1. identify some keywords in relation to your topic 2. select a certain database on which to do your research such as onesearch of even google scholar 3. search the database using your keywords and filtering out unwanted results such as scholar or non scholar articles 4. capturing an article which suits your needs

  2. Oct 2022
    1. For example, we use mind maps for reading that your professor assigns you, for research and sources that you find, and for organizing your own original ideas in early stages of the writing process

      I like this idea that teachers and students alike rely on similar ways of writing and it isn't separate in this way

    1. Using Notecards or Sticky notes to Organize your Research

      I not usually very good at using visual representations for writing tasks but this sounds really interesting

    1. Yes, you can use Wikipedia…

      I love that wikipedia is slowly being de villainized as it is now a huge database full of very accurate and accessible research and information and does not deserve to keep this reputation of being shoddily constructed

    1. Who isn’t a part of the conversation so far? What voices aren’t represented by your search?

      This I think is often not thought of enough within the scope of research

    1. The more relevant the issue and/or the population is to you, the researcher, the more meaningful the reading, research, and writing process will be

      This is definitely true for me as I have a far more difficult time researching things which have no personal correlation

    1. I know that most of us do not enjoy presenting information in front of class.

      I am very much of this opinion, i love making presentations but not so much presenting them

    1. Why include counter arguments?

      I have often seen this in the french form of writing essays but not so often in the american education so it's interesting to see the two merge

    1. In college, you are often asked to make a persuasive case in writing by convincing your audience of your point of view. The persuasive essay, like all genres of writing, has a predictable logical pattern in writing.

      I wonder how different this is from what we had to write in high school

    1. Thus, by learning how ethos, logos, and pathos work, and recognizing them when you read, you will be able to use them in your writing,

      although somewhat familiar, I've never actually put these in practice when analysing essays so it would be interesting to know more about it

  3. Sep 2022
    1. a baffled lady observedthe shell where my soul dwellsAnd announced that I'm"articulate

      this reminds me immensely of the endless utterances of "your english is good for a foreigner" while I know that I would far surpass their knowledge of both their mother tongue and my own

    2. might pause the intellectual sounding flow to ask“Yo! Why dese books neva be about my peoples”Yes, I have decided to treatall three of my languages as equalsBecause I’m “articulate

      being articulate is a culmination of dialects which intertwine and should never be hierarchised because as soon as they are you lose their value and their use which are truly precious

    1. Read each paragraph out loud focusing on one paragraph at a time

      I do this, but also sometimes I find it useful to use the read aloud feature on pages to read it back to me. because often I will read it automatically without stopping to see what syntax is actually present in written form. and this feature allows me to hear immediately how tone and syntax actually flow

    1. High Order Concerns

      I think this idea of hierarchy in how to revise is one I haven't seen before but could be very useful in order to not get lost in the details

    1. I’ve found the best way to revise your own work is to pretend that somebody else wrote it and then to rip the living shit out of it.

      I think this is admirable but is also too harsh in some sense, i think by taking yourself out of the equation and treating your writing as if it was someone else could make it lose some of it's personal quality

    2. “Start writing, no matter what. The water does not flow until the faucet is turned on.”

      I think I really abide by this logic, more often than not I won't have a single idea about what I will tell in my essays till I am halfway through writing them, and yes sometimes that leads to having to make a lot of revisions but I also think it leads to my best work

    1. Accepting all offers means to be open to the feedback you are receiving, which you take and then evaluate it to see if and how you will use in your revision plan.  

      I think this is definitely very important but can also be difficult to do when you don't feel like the reviewers writing style matches your own I'd say

    1. Step 3: The Personal Storyline Project

      I have never seen this being done but I think it is quite an ingenious way to look at things although I am not convinced to its aid to the actual writing process

    1. take heed! Rebel against summarizing what you have already written. You have one paragraph left with your intended audience, so inspire them by making a call to action, relating the topic of your essay to an aspect of the world in which we live, or leaving them with something to contemplate or reflect on.

      I love this idea, because I always found the idea of summarising all the points you just made redundant, especially in a shorter essays, so I think I want to incorporate this idea into my writing.

    1. the steps writers take as they write for academic and professional purposes

      I of course have heard plenty about the need for outlines and drafts but I think I actually work better at least in narrative essays without this. I find I can connect much further with my work when not focusing on the structural aspect and then revisit that later

    1. If you still have difficulty figuring out this difficult section of the text, don’t despair! Struggling through these moments of understanding and solving these problems is where your growth will happen

      I think sometimes however especially when looking at dense scientific or literary works this can easily turn into frustration and it can be difficult to see it as a room for improvement instead of failure

    2. the way you read and annotate in a Literature class will vastly differ from the way you read, annotate, and probably take additional notes when reading a Biology textbook

      Yes but also both of these skills often build on each other in order to attain their goals, while the annotation might not the the same often there will be a similarity of if not in content in techniques or symbols

    3. The best way to increase your vocabulary, formality, or other skills, habits, and choices that professional writers make, for example, is by reading, and specifically reading in the discipline in which you wish to write.

      I think the first part of being a good writer is having that vocabulary available to you to best interpret your thoughts because precise vocabulary is key when getting your message across to other readers of your work

    1. pick up on their nonverbal cues, mannerisms, and conventions

      I think this adds an element to reading beyond the story which determines far more then people think. often if the writing style is too foreign to me or too jumbled even if the plot itself is wonderful it just wont stick

    1. taking notes by hand,

      for me this is a crucial step to understanding, even if tracing words on an ipad I need that tactile writing element to help my memory and understanding

  4. Aug 2022
    1. personal story or stories that have greater symbolism and/or meaning for how the author sees themselves and defines their identity

      I think at least in the way I see writing, this is crucial for me to truly engage with the topic

    1. When teachers recite a pre-scripted curriculum that doesn’t assess the students’ prior knowledge and appropriate level of challenge, students end up in the center—“the Comfort Zone”

      This can also lead to students getting false expectations for further learning

    1. “Reading and writing is not for them,” or “Literature is not my thing.”

      this is often just the fault of the education they've received about literature and not an accurate depiction of the enjoyment they could have

    1. . Testing effectively encapsulates what is “wrong” with traditional schooling in our view.

      it also puts children into the strict categories of good test taker and bas test taker, because while one kid might be able to regurgitate the knowledge for a quiz another kid might be able to actually show you how to put that knowledge into action but not do multiple choice so which is better in the end.

    1. the curriculum is framed around the students’ worlds, involves their real issues, desires, and needs

      I think to some extent this should be the basis for all education

    1. “Students are expected to do whatever they’re told, to accommodate themselves to a curriculum that was created by adults who never met them

      this mindset is often one I've encountered and is definitely so an effective strategy for learning in an intelligent way

    1. motivated by your connections, motivated by your passions and interests as students

      by connecting our work to our personal experiences I find it becomes far more motivating and relevant

    2. What is learning, and how do we learn best?

      this is a key question because it allows us to look not only at the material itself but how we as people perceive it

    1. ind the beauty and the truth behind the labels and own i

      labels are said to give you a platform to fight behind but in truth often further categorize and divide instead