• Broaden the sampling or narrow the claims of representativeness. The bacterial collection was derived from only 12 floor-laid eggs obtained from four backyard keepers, rather than from commercial production systems. Although 50 isolates were identified and eight species were selected for detailed analysis, this sampling frame is insufficient to support broad conclusions about eggshell-associated microbial diversity or commercial egg processing. The authors should ideally include eggs from multiple commercial flocks or production batches. If additional sampling is not feasible, the study should be clearly presented as preliminary and the conclusions restricted to the isolates and backyard eggs examined.
• Clarify the detection limit and avoid equating loss of culturability with complete killing. PAW efficacy was assessed exclusively by CFU enumeration, yet the precise limit of detection is not reported. Statements such as “complete inactivation” should therefore be replaced with wording such as “no culturable cells were recovered above the assay detection limit.” The authors should report the exact detection limit and acknowledge that culture-based enumeration cannot exclude viable-but-non-culturable cells. An independent viability measurement, such as membrane-integrity staining combined with microscopy or flow cytometry, would strengthen the bactericidal claim.
• Validate PAW directly on eggshells. Despite the proposed application, the PAW experiments used biofilms formed on plastic microtitre plates, with SEM experiments conducted on plastic coverslips. The authors should test PAW against biofilms established directly on eggshell fragments or intact eggs, preferably incorporating realistic organic contamination and an exposure time relevant to commercial washing, which the manuscript describes as approximately 30 seconds. A comparison with an established eggshell sanitiser would further improve the practical relevance. If these experiments cannot be added, claims regarding application in egg production should be substantially moderated.