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  1. Nov 2018
    1. “destroy our lives out here.” It was an incredibly sensitive subject. “It’s kind of a third rail among dairy farmers,” Nelson said. “Whenever I go to a dairy farm, I never ask about the immigrant-labor thing unless they bring it up themselves.”

      Metacommentary

    2. Could I really be sure that was the same guy and the same Yukon? A

      Structural tool, used to make the reader feel the emotions and thought process the author went through in that moment

    3. “If they come in town, then we have to talk about it, find out what’s going on, why, whether to participate, and make sure our town’s not disrupted,”

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    4. “We love Canada,” Trump said on September 18. “They cannot continue to charge us 300 percent for dairy products.” At a hearing on the issue in March, Nunes attacked Canada for “getting away with murder in their dairy industry.”

      MetacommentaryMetacommentary

    5. What if an article triggered an ICE raid? Was there even a story here, anyway?

      Structure, opening up questions in the readers mind which he will then address and answer

    6. And it helped explain the reaction I received in Sibley.

      Uses the events of previous years to provide context into the lives of the people in Iowa to explain why they have the reactions they do, not unjustified

    7. Not only was I being followed, but I was also being watched, and my sources were being contacted by NuStar.

      Continuing transition to the larger story, revealing more and more weird events to the reader

    8. “The Hispanic community are Iowans. They have the same values as Iowans. As far as I’m concerned, they’re Iowans with better food.” Advertisement - Continue Reading Below

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    9. “If I see something, I’m not going to report it to ICE,” he said. “It’s not my job.” He added, “That’s not to say that everybody in town that lives here is legal. We don’t go knocking door-to-door to say, ‘Are you, are you not?’ ”

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    10. Getty Images When I walked in the front door of the mayor’s office, I had noticed a mud-spattered white Yukon parked outside. As I was driving to my next interview, I looked in the rearview mirror and noticed the white Yukon again. I drove aimlessly, crisscrossing streets from one end of town to the other. Everywhere I turned, the white Yukon appeared. I was being followed. When I turned the tables and followed the car back, it raced off. We played cat and mouse like that for more than an hour until I finally got a good glimpse of the driver: It was a middle-aged woman with curly, red hair who had a cell phone stuck to her left ear. The cat-and-mouse game started to feel a little dangerous, so I left town for a couple hours. On my way back into Sibley, the same car passed me on the highway. This time, the chubby man from the Lantern was driving. He smiled and waved.

      This personal encounter is used as a transition from the lobster to the bigger picture story of the conspiracy type events in the town

    11. “Dairy farmers are very deeply patriotic and American, and yet here they are hiring these people who are not American,” he said. “And maybe they feel a little shame over that or feel like they are exploiting [people] and they don’t want that to come to light.”

      Metacommentary

    12. “It would be a disaster for the dairies,” he said. “They would suddenly have nobody to milk or feed the cows. I don’t know what they would do.”

      Metacommentary

    13. “They are immigrants and Devin is a very strong supporter of Mr. Trump, and Mr. Trump wants to shut down all of the immigration, and here is his family benefiting from immigrant labor,”

      Metacommentary

    14. Everyone’s got this feeling that in agriculture, we, the employers, are going to be criminalized,” the first area dairy farmer I had spoken to said. “I’ve talked to Steve King face-to-face, and that guy doesn’t care one iota about us. He does not care. He believes that if you have one undocumented worker on your place, you should probably go to prison and we need to get as many undocumented people out of here as possible.”

      Metacommentary, quotes and restatement

    15. “I’ve talked to Steve King face-to-face, and that guy doesn’t care one iota about us. He does not care."

      Metacommentary, and by putting it in big letters on the side it stands out more which is a structural strategy

    16. “People are going to go broke,”

      Metacommentary, this paragraph served as support and restatement of the the argument that dairy farms are dependent on illegal immigrant workers, so in a way the entire paragraph was a form of metacommentary

    17. “I just look at the document—Hey, this looks like a good driver’s license, permanent resident card, whatever the case is—and that’s what you go with,”

      Metacommentary

    18. “It would be great if we had enough unemployed Americans in northwest Iowa to milk the cows. But there’s just not. We have a very tight labor pool around here.”

      Metacommentary

    19. His name was Bailey. He was seventeen and he had died thirteen days ago. This was the first day the coffee shop had been open since his death.

      Before there were very long connected sentences but after revealing the death of her son the author switches to short fragmented sentences which adds to the readers reaction

    20. I was visiting the state just days after police found the body of Mollie Tibbetts, who was allegedly killed by an undocumented worker from a dairy farm, and everyone was talking about immigration. I

      Begining to notice the authors writing style has an excessive amount of long sentences connecting various ideas into one statement.

    21. more diversity than you might expect

      This is showing the preconceived notions the author has about the area before coming to the town, which may be similar to those of other people.

    22. “They said, ‘Our brother’s involved in politics and we’re not going to talk about it and that’s that,’ ” Nelson told me. “And I said, ‘Okay, we’re here to talk about dairy farms.’ ”

      Metacommentary

    23. presumably

      Either Author's voice or metacommentary, more likely authors voice because it is showing a more personal doubt than it is pushing that doubt onto the reader

    24. What is strange is that the family has apparently tried to conceal the move from the public—for more than a decade.

      This is indicating a shift from the smaller idea (like our Lobsters) to the bigger picture story

    25. “The cows are not far from his mind. He keeps in regular contact with his brother and father about their dairy farm.”

      Throughout this paragraph the author chooses to use many quotes, this is a shift from the tone of the previous parts of the article. The use of quotes from various well known sources adds to the credibility of the author even though the sources are not in support of his argument, but rather supporting his background facts.

    26. “worked and saved enough money to buy a 640-acre farm outside Tulare.” T

      Metacommentary, and structural choice. By adding a quote the author is supporting the picture they are painting for the reader and setting up a new point to be made (same as last quote)

    27. , “a fertile, sunny Eden,”

      Metacommentary, and structural choice. By adding a quote the author is supporting the picture they are painting for the reader and setting up a new point to be made

    28. a bona fide conspiracy theoris

      This is the Authors voice clearly showing through, the authors opinion on the matter is clear by the language used to describe who we can believe to be Donald Trump.