This is certainly something we will need to grapple with collectively as we struggle to find the right balance between ensuring the protection and well-being of individuals while maintaining liberty and independence.
Good conclusion, but I think you could re-write this to be more concise. Using both liberty and independence may be a little redundant.
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Very nice example here
All this considered
I think the you could find a better transition here, but nice examples
Much
I like the structure so far, but I think you could use a better word here