Even if the mother works full-time, she is usually left to handle most of the burdens of family-life. Stay at home moms are often bashed for "not working" or supporting the family, when in fact, if she did not stay home and do that domestic labor the family would have to spend tens of thousands of dollars a year on child-care, food, and cleaning. It's also a 24/7 job with no breaks. A parent who works outside of the household may be working very hard, but they still get to leave the home, maybe listening to their choice of music or podcast during their commute, have conversations with fellow adults that don't revolve around their children, and get a 30-60 minute, un-interrupted lunch break.

People turn a blind eye to rape, world wide.

A daughter is not seen as equally cherished or valuable as a son. But, this isn't inherent to their gender. The divide is caused by the gender roles assigned to boys and girls that makes boy more "valuable"

Girls are not seen as valuable for anything other than marriage and reproduction.

Barbaric methods of controlling women's sexuality is still preformed around the world under the guise of tradition.

Thousands of women a year are murdered by their own families in order to "restore honor"

Connecting sentences can make the writing easier to read / flows better.

You DON'T have to always start the sentence with the subject. Sometimes it is more effective to start with an adverb, prepositional phrase, or verb.

Avoid choppy, repetitive sentences in your writing.