To ensure a smooth transition in this chapter, it might be helpful to briefly mention 두레생협, which carries on the spirit of 두레. In addition, a short introduction to how folk music such as 사물놀이 and other forms of traditional culture were later inherited and revitalized within Hansalim would add interest.

-> How about using 'Specialized Organization'? We are not simply supporting the Federation; we autonomously carry out our own research movement or energy movements within Hansalim movement.

The participation certification label is missing.

I’m not sure whether the term 'charitable' is appropriate. It has a strong activist character rather than that of a charitable foundation.-> How about just 'Hansalim Foundation'?

I’m not entirely confident about strongly insisting on my suggestion regarding capitalization, so let’s consider it together.

How about using lowercase letters? It seems necessary to distinguish between 생활 and 생명. When referring to 생명운동, it should be capitalized Life, whereas when referring to 생활협동조합 as a common noun, it would be better to use lowercase as life coop, I think.

-> Hansalim Moim (한살림모임) : Hansalim Manifesto was written by 한살림모임

-> and the Hansalim Nongsan rice store in Seoul a year later ; please add the exact location, otherwise readers would be confused.