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  1. Apr 2024
    1. Target 4.3:

      It would be interesting to see a gender breakdown for this as well.

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      You can use this as a guide for outlining your presentation. Remember to add your evidence with citations in your presentation. You will need to use narrative citations so the audience understand where the information comes from.

      https://hyp.is/go?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.hamilton.edu%2Facademics%2Fcenters%2Foralcommunication%2Fguides%2Fcitations&group=world

      Check the above link for an example of how to include your evidence in your speech.

    1. Tips for Organization of the Bod

      This will be important to consider as you have only 2 minutes here. What is the point and the example with evidence? This could be 100 words/1 minute here. Think about how you make your points relatable to your audience. Idea 3 from Chris Anderson video.

    2. Organizing Conclusion

      Consider point 4 from Chris Andersons TED talk video. How will this solution OR solving the problem benefit everyone, beyond the audience or community.

    3. Organizing Main Points in the Body

      We've talked about this for #organisation when organising an paragraph/essay. Your essay is problem solution, however you may also choose to write about main causes and effects of the problem to highlight the importance of it.

    4. Explain the importance of the topic to the audience. People listen when they hear something of value to them. Expressing why they should listen (without saying “you should listen to me because…”) can hook an audience for the rest of the speec

      Remember this is point 2 from the Chris Anderson Ted Talk video from LP34's pre class work. Your introduction is only 30 seconds, but there is a lot you need to do. 100 words is about 1 minute speaking. So about 50 words is all you need for your introduction.

  2. Jan 2024
    1. importance

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    2. Technical communication vs. technical writing

      Click on the text above "Technical communication vs. technical writing" Read the 4 paragraphs from "We use the term ...technical writing includes so much".

      From this text, can you think of ONE key concept that you will learn about this semester for technical writing? Discuss the ideas in a small group.

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  3. Aug 2023
    1. We continue to live in a world of rapid technological change that constantly engenders economic and cultural transitions. New technologies steadily transform the way we live. We are starting to see this with artificial intelligence, and the world has already been revolutionized by the internet. In the 20th century, what we might now see as more prosaic inventions like refrigeration, air conditioning, and motor vehicles changed how we ate, where we lived, and where we worked. The positive impacts of science and technology are obvious and integrated into our lifestyles. The negative impacts are often subjects of denial; the links of cigarettes to cancer, fossil fuels to climate change, and air travel to COVID-19. A billion people smoke, and last year 7 million died from smoking. The extreme weather due to global warming predicted by turn-of-the-century climate models has arrived. While the COVID-19 pandemic has receded, the health impact was massive, and we are still experiencing the economic and psychological impacts of the pandemic. These elements of our changing world are not seen as change by young people, but simply as the way the world works. This is the world they have always known. Many of them are frightened and even depressed by the world they are inheriting, but those attitudes of concern are the bedrock of the perceptions that will likely save the planet from complete degradation
      • Skim read this text quickly.
      • What key words do you see? Highlight them.
      • What is the main cause of change according to this text?
      • What are the positive changes and negative?
      • Read the last sentence. From your understanding of this sentence, how are young people going to make an impact in the coming years?
  4. Apr 2023
    1. The SDGs build on decades o

      For Fall 23, I would like to focus the ENG 140 course on Sustainability as it is the key topic for the essay assignment that involves research of the sustainable development goals globally. This material can act as model input for research material that would be used by students in the second half of the semester. It also can align with learning activities such as reading approaches, note taking and paraphrasing.