73 Matching Annotations
  1. Nov 2022
    1. <!DOCTYPE html>

      I think your having a hard time styling due to the HTML being laid out the way it is. I could be wrong I am sure Cat will have some more ideas about that. I found this assignment very difficult that is why I reached out to Claire finally.

    2. Find out how we can help you</h5>

      This is not fitting in the box. I used the same styling on all my call to action buttons "that is what I called them. It is not an H5 but a button.

    3. <div id="image1">

      not sure why you used an id, class may have been easier to work with the ID's. I would consider changing it to logo not image as it makes reference then to what it is related to.

    1. <article class

      I had thought about using article, but after doing more reading thought section was more appropriate. Are they articles? article forms an independent part of a document, are they independent. This is still the line that is confusing to me between using article and section.

    1. <article

      I am new at this so am unsure but I wonder if sections would of been accurate. If not for all I would take Cat's suggestion for the one where your image is.

  2. Oct 2022
    1. </main>

      I really like your layout and focus, well done. Not sure if its just the annotate program, but I cannot view your long sentences. I suggest asking Claire what is an appropriate length and revisit breaking up the long sentence structure.

      As for Code usage, from my, not so experienced eye I cannot see any fault in it. WELL DONE

    2. <p>The site and its individual pages have a confused sense of purpose. I believe the shop is for glass working tools and supplies but none of the pages clearly spell this out or how to utilise the site to purchase these tools or supplies.</p>

      check the formatting between this P and figure.

    3. Following that, I will provide several suggestions that will improve on these criteria and demonstrate my proposed layout with a low-fidelity wireframe vi

      The sentence seems long I would suggest checking the word count.

    1. and owner, Staysea Brown has been overwhelmed by the success Hairpins has received over the past 10 years and

      Could try adding some breaks within the p to have it not so long.

    2. <p>Offering talented stylists with varied personalities, outgoing customer service, and an eclectic, fun atmosphere,

      same here I think the

      should have a space between it and the text

    1. these break lines-->

      I am not sure what you mean it is a list? By the way didn't I annotate on this already? Did you send me an invite twice. I didn't see any annotations though maybe someones else made the same comment.

    2. <footer>

      Hi, well I cannot really find anything wrong, your format and styling looks great. I actually found this helpful to understand class which has been difficult for me.

      One thing I am wondering is should the footer be so far from section in the coding format?

    3. </section>

      I am totally new to all this so will give what I can.

      t looks good to me except right here the styling looks like it needs to be formatted. Its a large gap between section and footer in the coding.

    1. <link

      I am wondering where all the other font styles are for the the other cards as they use more then the one applied or did you find some within the same family that matched.

    2. <article class="card-three">

      I see you were having some trouble with this card as well, looks great now and It may help me with mine as it is still not quite right and I could not get the dots.

    3. width="360px">

      I agree with Abbey regarding the P element but leave in the div, and add h3 along with the p. I had some help from Claire , Use the div class for both p and h3 right after the image code.

    1. mours grow; Downing Street Christmas party cancelled; warning Scotland's R number cou

      You may want to consider using breaks in this area so its not one long line as it is not a paragraph.

    2. <h2 id="live">Live</h2>

      Id works here, but I would consider using a div with the article that is already there. Live Breaking UK is not a H2 Heading it is actually P element.

    1. a list anyway, and it would make more sense than all these break lines-->

      not sure what you mean by this as it is a list? Also do you have the background photo element anywhere am I missing it in one of the HTML pages? Looks great to me!

    1. ase call us at 250-338-7467 (

      It looks good, I like your notes all good ideas. Have you used any of the formatting tools like the extension prettier. You can also try shift alt f

    1. <p>Contact us today to book an appointment! (add link to contact page)</p>

      Did you miss this? you need the link to the contact page Otherwise it all looks great even the style format

  3. Sep 2022
    1. <p>M

      It looks good to me, what I did notice and some of these areas have spaces

      my and others don'

      between the writing. Not sure if it matters code wise but makes it easier to view with space.

    1. </html>

      As for your coding, personally I cannot find anything wrong with it, I am new though and could be missing something. I enjoy your writing it just needs a bit of polish in the grammar area "which I am also not great at, but know a little"

    2. I spend alot of time playing video games listening

      you might want to think about using some comma's such as after games, music, hanging out with my girlfriend and our three dogs.

    3. This is actually my third time attending <strong>North Island College</strong> as

      I think the sentence would sound smoother if you remove actually, put a period at the and of College and remove as.

    1. thing"

      Being a title of the image this might be best with the first letter capitalized. *I admit I am unsure about this as I don't believe it shows up except in the coding.

    2. <h1>Hello World</h1>

      Nothing wrong here that I can see, but I am personally wondering is it best to enter the code in between this many lines instead of one after another?