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    1. In our current environment, the ad plays as an extension of, or maybe a companion to, the idea that artificial intelligence — or what travels under that name — can take over the production of art:

      This paragraph serves as the "Kairos" of the essay—addressing why this ad matters right now. Holmes uses the broader cultural anxiety surrounding AI as evidence to explain why the public reaction was so visceral. She connects the physical "crushing" in the video to the metaphorical "assault" on creative labor. By weaving in this context, she elevates the essay from a simple review of a commercial to a timely commentary on the "exploitation of labor" and the "devaluation of the individual."

    2. But these are not practical items to begin with. Nobody owns a piano because it's practical;

      Holmes performs a brilliant rhetorical pivot here by redefining the "value" of the objects. Apple’s ad views a piano as a "tool" that can be digitized and compressed. Holmes argues that a piano is an "experience" and a "memory." By shifting the definition from utility to humanity, she exposes the "folly" of Apple's logic. This serves as the emotional anchor for her entire piece, moving the argument from a tech critique to a philosophical one about what art actually is.

    3. The ad — which Apple has since apologized for — is meant to communicate, I suppose, that this tiny, thin iPad can contain what is important from all these things. It can replace them all. You can make your music with it. You can paint with it. You can play games on it. You can take your photos with it. And it suggests this means you can finally destroy all those things that have been so burdensome, like massive pianos and messy paint.

      Holmes uses a "pro-con" or "concession-refutation" structure here. By stating what the ad is "meant to communicate", portability, efficiency, creativity in one device, she demonstrates an objective understanding of Apple’s marketing goals. This makes her subsequent "But..." in the next paragraph it is much more powerful. She isn't just complaining; she is arguing that Apple’s rhetorical intent failed because it ignored the cultural resonance of the objects being destroyed.