Use a colon, not a semi-colon.

Please revise this sentence. I would suggest breaking it up into smaller sentences as it is not very clear.

Remember that ROM identifies the amount of movement the patient has around a joint but they could have a good ROM and the surrounding muscles may still be weak. There are many factors that affect the recovery process. Don't forget to mention this.

You should use a case study that will back-up the benefits of passive movements that you are mentioning.

I don't think this word is appropriate in this context. I'd rather say "to fix the problem".

Comma should go after this word.

Did this occur at the same time as the syndesmotic ligament tear? Are they related? Where did this injury occur? This sentence confuses this whole section so please try and make this more clear.

This should be in small letters.

Please double check your punctuation here.

I'd suggest replacing this word with "the ankle".

I'd suggest replacing this word with "or".

"...is located on..."

Which is also known as OR "...tear, otherwise known as, a..."

Please review the sentence structure. Maybe separate the ideas by saying, "This was his 9th injury; previously he has had X injuries..." I hope this makes sense to you.

"...missed out on competing in the..."

Did he play a specific game that was the highlight of his career?

I would recommend starting this line in a new sentence.

The last item on the list needs to be separated by the word "and".

Are you sure that the age is correct here? I can't find any information about Stindl joining a club at the young age of 3 - please double check that you haven't possible made an error here.

Also, I would suggest saying: "...3 AFTER joining the club..." Otherwise it implies that he only started playing football when he joined the club. You just need to clear this up, please.

I think saying that the only thing that differs is the severity/extent of the injury would sound better in this sentence. You are already making a claim that injuries will always happen so when you say it "depends on", it sounds as though you are sure at one point and then not so sure further on in the sentence. I would say, "...athlete's career, the only thing that differs is the severity of the injury."

"...athlete's..."

I don't fully agree with this statement because some athlete's sustain exceptionally bad injuries where that is the most prominent worry. I would suggest saying, "...not JUST because of the injury itself..." This allows the reader to identify that although the injury is traumatic, another traumatic experience is being on the sidelines.

Provide an example.

What is UBE?

Spelling error.

Again, please write out the word before using the abbreviation.

Please write out this word and put the abbreviation in brackets. You can then use the abbreviations further on throughout the essay.

Punctuation errors.

"...treatment IS 2-3 times..."

These two words mean the same thing - choose one for the beginning of this sentence.

Shoulder --> Should

"...restrictions IS painful..."

Please place the abbreviations for the words "acromioclavicular" and "sternoclavicular" in brackets after writing the words out before using the abbreviations later on in the paragraph.

Please explain in a brief sentence what this is.

Please check your sentence structure.

Insert colon after the word "importance".

Missing punctuation.

Spelling error. Addiction --> Addition

Comma to be used instead of a full stop.

Missing punctuation.

Comma should follow the word "overall".

A colon should follow the word "bones".

Punctuation is missing. This should also be in a new line with a colon following the word "anatomy".

This should be the start of a new sentence and please ensure that structure is correct.

Sentence structure here is incorrect. I'd rather say: "...which occurs 97% of the time in first time shoulder dislocations AND is caused by..."

The phrasing of this sentence does not make sense to me. Are you trying to say that postero-lateral dislocations are common due to trauma? Are they the most common type of dislocations? How does this relate to your athlete and his injury?

Place a comma after listing each item and only use the word "and" when listing the last direction.

"...injuries are..."

I would rather use "career-ending injury" if I were you. Otherwise, just be sure to insert a dash between the 2 words.

In what context was he the best player? Do you mean of the team?

He joined them.

"...into THE senior..."

Insert comma after "18".

As I mentioned before, I would suggest that you use the athlete's surname instead of describing him as "the player". Please have a look at your choice of wording as well. I would recommend that you say, "but started taking it serious as a career opportunity..."

This is what I was talking about in the review that I posted in the comments section. I would rather suggest that you give a brief summary about the athlete. You can mention the fact that they've been playing for X amount of years and that this injury has damaged/slowed down their career. You can say something about how you will design a programme that will help with their rehabilitation from the beginning of the injury until the point at which they can continue their activity, etc.

You don't have to mention the fact that this is an assignment. I would rather say, "This assignment is about ..." Also, don't forget about punctuation. A comma should be placed after the athlete's surname. "...Salah, an..."

Rewrite in your own words please.

Rewrite in your own words please.

Comma must be placed after Ibuprofen.

Comma must be placed after the word "required".

"Narcotic medications, such as codeine, may be..."

This must be backed up by a study.

Lack of punctuation is making the sentence difficult to understand. "The treatment of AN ACL tear can be surgical or non-surgical; non-physical treatment being..." Use this as a guideline to correct this sentence.

This should start on a new line.

This needs to be one sentence. You can't use AND as the beginning of a new sentence. How did the new information come to light? Were there further tests done or did the pain worsen for the athlete? This doesn't make sense and needs some clarification.

Specify that it appeared to be a normal knee injury.

Rather say the proposed time of healing. Time of injury does not make sense and gives a different meaning to your text.

If you write out the first letter of each word in capital, you can use the abbreviation ACL for the duration of your essay. E.g. "Anterior Cruciate Ligament (ACL)

"...had..."

You need to backup that he was "having a good time". What was he doing? How do you know this?

You also need to write PSG out fully because some people may not understand what it means. And they were, "...IN the lead."

Please revise the sentence structure here.

You have to backup the fact that you are saying he respects other players. That is a very personal opinion and unless backed up, you shouldn't mention this. I don't think this sentence is necessary for this section because it doesn't add any value to what you are trying to say. Performance prior to injury focuses more on emotional and physical state - previous injuries or a display of aggression, etc.

A better form compared to when? Are you saying that he was in a poor form at some point, or are you trying to say that in general he was in a good form for the duration of the competition? Please specify.

"... IN THE Coupe de France tournament; two of which he played full-time and the other two of which he was tagged in from the bench."

This sentence is unnecessary and the structure is incorrect. You could remove it completely or change the sentence structure.

"in May" -- NOT "on May"

You should use another word here. E.g. sustained, endured, suffered, etc. The word "got" is not the best for the sentence.

I would rather say, "The follow assignment mainly focuses on..." We already know that it is an assignment so you are just adding unnecessary words here.