218 Matching Annotations
  1. Last 7 days
    1. Full access to the

      remove

    2. Invitation to our

      remove

    3. We are here to walk alongside you on your journey as a trauma therapist. BRAVE is a space that helps you reignite the passion that brought you to this work and the courage to carve your own path. Come join us and experience what it’s like to Build Resilience Against Vicarious Exposure.It’s time to join a community that understands what you de

      shorten

    4. Here’s How You Can Join Us

      what you get swap with intro - this is a shorter, clearer description

    5. Hi, I’m Jenny,

      Put under name it

    6. The support you’ve been looking for to stay in the field you love is here.

      great, use higher up

    7. thrive together

      so they can keep doing the meaningful work they love

    8. Why our Members joined BRAVE:

      amazing testimonials

    9. The BRAVE Collective at a Glance

      change title, this is your how, your USP, your framework. title = why this works

    10. 24/7 Asynchronous Secure Consultation: Using the Signal App, know you have access to support and real conversations whenever you need it

      layout same on each half of page

    11. The BRAVE Trauma Therapist Collective is for you if

      swap with logo/membership intro

    12. And get this -

      remove

    13. You no longer have to pour from an empty cup because you have the support and skills you deserve to thrive in the work you love

      all great, shorten

    14. It’s impossible for us to not be affected by that!

      reword so it's not double negative

    15. a first class ticket to burnout.

      great, make it bold

    16. And

      remove

    17. Why This Matters

      change title to pain point

    18. Work With Me About Learning Hub Blog Contact

      hide for sales page

    1. A membership that will show you how you can

      Learn to

    2. teacher authors

      teachers, authors,

    3. IMAGINE IF YOU COULD...

      great, put after problem container

    4. LET'S BE REAL

      add testimonials above great

    5. MEET ADRIENNE.

      put after Let's be real

    6. PROBLEM #1

      don't need these headers

    7. STOP TREATING YOUR GOOGLE WORKSPACE LIKE A JUNK DRAWER

      remove - you use later

    8. GUARANTEE

      great

    9. MEMBERSHIP ONLY

      really clear

    10. give

      give you

    11. from a hot mess to a hub of productivity and peace.

      save time, focus on sales Add CTA button

    12. cross fingers

      love this

    13. GOOGLE WORKSPACE IS OVERWHELMING

      excellent

    14. if you think you're "not techy"

      love that you're describing your audience. A membership for ...

    15. INTRODUCING ...

      remove

  2. Jun 2024
    1. Ready to feel like yourself again?

      High level membership description

    2. JOINUSTODAY

      delete

    3. Real people.Real stories.

      put a testimonial in this container

    4. HERE'SHow We Help

      Change to high level membership description higher up

    5. 6-Step stepfamily success path to guide you through every stage and challenge in stepfamily life - exclusively available to our members and nowhere else!

      Differentiator - add container above about why this approach works

    6. Monthly Membership$49/per month

      layout as columns?

    7. Sound familiar?!

      move featured in banner

    8. Relieved and

      delete

    9. It’s time for more peace, tranquility, and happiness in your family. It’s time for more . . . After helping thousands of stepmoms just like you, I’ve developed a proven system to help you go from “fractured family” to “blended family” in a peaceful and stress-free way.

      lay out differently

      proven system - banner

    10. If

      if

    11. need

      to what?

    12. a stepfamily life you love.

      in banner

    13. -

      delete

    1. More Leads =

      delete

    2. successful

      and frustrated?

    3. show up consistently, save time, and grow their business

      Banner

    4. As a small business owner, I realized how important it was to be consistent with high-quality content, but also how difficult it was to do that alongside everything else on my plate. So I did what I do best - figured out how to make marketing systematically simpler.

      Pain point in container 1

    5. Chasing Simple Marketing

      Hyperlink

    6. a content-batching, time-saving, Disney-loving content marketing expert.

      Love this!

    7. learn, yes, but also to

      delete

    8. Everything included in the Pixie Dust tier.

      Plus

    9. marketing, build your network, and take ACTION

      You said people join for community Highlight main benefit What's the final impact on the biz: growth?

    10. INTRODUCINGSimplify

      Target customer pain point Desire Then introduce

    1. join us on this adventure

      main result, eg elevate your quilting or make those quilts you've been dying to make

    2. What makes this event unique

      Put below speakers

    3. a bit of what they know

      the skills you need to start doing FMQ yourself

    4. the struggle of trying to learn something new or paying for classes

      title: eg Learn new techniques or experiment with

    5. , c

      . C

    6. Everything that's in the Free ticket,

      remove bullet

    7. techniques

      ,

    8. our experts.

      the comfort of your living room.

    9. .  Summit dates:

      remove

    10. This is

      remove

    11. beautiful free motion quilted designs.

      Why this summit?

    12. I bought a book and taught myself

      relate to your audience's frustrations and desires

    13. from anywhere

      remove

    14. actually works.

      doable

    15. help you

      elevate - find a different way of repeating this

    16. Learn

      Change one of these - what's the next result. Look at feedback from first summit

    17. finding a way to learn

      What's the final result, after learning. Confidence, enjoyment, better quilts

    18. a better way!

      help out there

    19. You're getting a lot of things right:

      You've dabbled/started out/experimented/interested in with x, but ...

    20. Get ready to be amazed!  Whether you're new to free motion quilting or you've got some experience under your belt, we have something for you.  The Free Motion Quilting Summit will take you on an adventure and inspire you on your free motion journey.  Our expert speakers will guide you, step by step, through video tutorials of free motion quilting designs and motifs.

      Move lower down. Shorten

    21. Summit 24 – Registration/Sales PageHomeSummit 24 – Registration/Sales Page

      Remove

    22. In this summit, you'll

      Remove

  3. May 2024
    1. 24 hour

      24-hour

    2. The main portion of the summit runs from July 17-19

      Are there other things going on?

    3. to be able to pass it on to the next generation

      highlight this higher up as a benefit

    4. for 30 days for free

      delete

    5. the opportunity to be a full member in

      free 30-day membership of

    6. other

      others

    7. that is

      delete

    8. great great

      comma

    9. a variety of ways and it continues to be.

      example, benefit or impact on you

    10. How would it feel to… Discover new areas of interest relating to your heritage? Share your heritage with your extended family and friends by learning new recipes and techniques? Connect with others who are also passionate about their Hungarian heritage? Grow in your knowledge about Hungarian heritage and culture and be able to share with your family members? Develop new skills and interests that connect you to your heritage?

      Section 5

    11. People all around the world are cooking heritage foods, studying the language, planning trips to Hungary (or former territories of Hungary) to see their ancestral villages, and learning all they can about Hungarian heritage. Our sessions are designed to help you learn more about those things that interest you most and introduce you to some things you might not be aware of!

      Section 5, but shorten

    12. How the Hungarian Heritage Expo came to be… For years I have been thinking about how to bring people together for an opportunity to learn more about their heritage. However, finding the space and coordinating attendees from around the United States and having the calendars line up for participants and attendees was a daunting task. In my work I meet so many amazing people who love their Hungarian heritage and are committed to passing it on. While we won’t be in person, we will have opportunities to connect with one another. And we’ll have the opportunity to learn from the presenters and be encouraged and inspired by them! #text-732941609 { text-align: center; }

      Remove. "In my work..." - add to bio "While we won't be in person..." - add to details re summit

    13. Are you… Searching for ways to dig deeper into your Hungarian heritage? Tired of feeling like you are doing this all on your own? Looking to connect with others to hear their stories and to share yours? Wondering if anyone in your family is paying attention to all of this “Hungarian stuff?” (By the way, they are!) Distracted by all the chatter and criticism on social media when people are just trying to make a connection to their heritage? Be a part of the Hungarian Heritage Expo!

      Section 4

    14. Let’s face it, growing up outside of Hungary means there are things we have missed out on. But that doesn’t mean we can’t learn about and incorporate these traditions into our lives! The Hungarian Heritage Expo is a great way to learn about a variety of things that relate to Hungarian heritage and culture. Pick those things that resonate with you and add them into your life — it’s not too late!

      Make this section 3 under video

    15. Let’s learn together!

      Ticket button. Video

    16. The presentations will touch on

      shorten

    17. own

      delete

    18. spend a few days learning

      learn

    1. Presented by Emily Caroline from That Mom With a Laser .footer { background-color: #f1e3e1; } .footer, .footer__block { font-size: 16px; color: ; } .footer .logo__text { color: ; } .footer .link-list__links { width: 100%; } .footer a.link-list__link { color: ; } .footer .link-list__link:hover { color: ; } .copyright { color: ; } @media (min-width: 768px) { .footer, .footer__block { font-size: 18px; } } .powered-by a { color: #f1e3e1 !important; }

      good here

    2. 9:00 AM EDT

      date range

    3. Welcome to Laser Maker Con, Holiday Edition.

      delete

    4. HAVE QUESTIONS? WE'VE GOT ANSWERS.

      sentence case for questions (see last question)

    5. YOU'RE READY TO START PLANNING FOR YOUR MOST PROFITABLE HOLIDAY SEASON YET. You deserve to have access to the most crucial information for running and scaling your business. At Laser Maker Con: Holiday Hustle Edition, we're committed to providing you with the tools, strategies, and insights you need to succeed. Sign up now and let's make this holiday season your most profitable yet!

      Summit audience description, instead of this, do this

    6. !.

      extra period

    7. !. #section-1716232732236 .section__overlay { position: absolute; width: 100%; height: 100%; left: 0; top: 0; background-color: #b5dbdd; } #section-1716232732236 .sizer { padding-top: 20px; padding-bottom: 20px; } #section-1716232732236 .container { max-width: calc(1260px + 10px + 10px); padding-right: 10px; padding-left: 10px; } #section-1716232732236 .row { } #section-1716232732236 .container--full { width: 100%; max-width: calc(100% + 10px + 10px); } @media (min-width: 768px) { #section-1716232732236 .sizer { padding-top: 20px; padding-bottom: 20px; } #section-1716232732236 .container { max-width: calc(1260px + 40px + 40px); padding-right: 40px; padding-left: 40px; } #section-1716232732236 .container--full { max-width: calc(100% + 40px + 40px); } }

      extra period

    8. change

      chance

    9. THE  ECORE

      extra space, ENCORE

    10. like minded

      like-minded

    11. session  to

      extra space

    12. ,

      delete

    13. confident and ready

      great

    14. see exceed

      you

    15. embark on this journey together. Together, we'll

      delete

    16. So

      delete

    17. That's how That Mom With A Laser was born—a platform where I can share my knowledge and expertise to help others. Through my free resources, virtual community, online course, the Laser Launch Academy®, and encouraging content, I've had the privilege of guiding countless individuals on their laser journey, from beginners to seasoned professionals. /* flush setting */ /* margin settings */ #block-1716231862770, [data-slick-id="1716231862770"] { margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; } #block-1716231862770 .block, [data-slick-id="1716231862770"] .block { /* border settings */ border: 4px black; border-radius: 4px; /* background color */ /* default padding for mobile */ padding: 20px; padding: 20px; /* mobile padding overrides */ padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; } @media (min-width: 768px) { /* desktop margin settings */ #block-1716231862770, [data-slick-id="1716231862770"] { margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; } #block-1716231862770 .block, [data-slick-id="1716231862770"] .block { /* default padding for desktop */ padding: 30px; /* desktop padding overrides */ padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; } } /* mobile text align */ @media (max-width: 767px) { #block-1716231862770, [data-slick-id="1716231862770"] { text-align: left; } } #block-1577982541036_0 .btn { margin-top: 1rem; } Throughout my career, I've always dreamed of hosting a summit where I could provide all my knowledge in a detailed setting and interact with the community in real time. Now, with Laser Maker Con: Holiday Hustle Edition, that dream has become a reality.

      Nice to know, but not needed. Remove para 3, shorten para 2. e.g. through xyz I've been helping x do y and I noticed z

    18. I know firsthand what it's like to miss out on the holidays because I was too busy with work and overwhelmed by holiday orders. That's why I'm hosting the Laser Maker Con - Holiday Hustle Edition. This conference is all about helping laser engraving businesses prepare for the holiday rush so that you can not only have a successful Q4 but also enjoy the season yourself. Through comprehensive tutorials, hands-on projects, and expert guidance, the LMK speakers are here to support you every step of the way.

      Make this paragraph 2

    19. DURING LASER MAKER CON, YOU'LL LEARN HOW TO CLOSE OUT THE YEAR STRONGER THAN EVER BEFORE.

      Move into blue bar above & remove text in blue bar. In this section: refer to pain points & show the opposite.

    20. Welcome to Laser Maker Con, Holiday Edition. /* flush setting */ /* margin settings */ #block-1716228379200_3, [data-slick-id="1716228379200_3"] { margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; } #block-1716228379200_3 .block, [data-slick-id="1716228379200_3"] .block { /* border settings */ border: 4px black; border-radius: 4px; /* background color */ /* default padding for mobile */ padding: 20px; padding: 20px; /* mobile padding overrides */ padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; } @media (min-width: 768px) { /* desktop margin settings */ #block-1716228379200_3, [data-slick-id="1716228379200_3"] { margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; } #block-1716228379200_3 .block, [data-slick-id="1716228379200_3"] .block { /* default padding for desktop */ padding: 30px; /* desktop padding overrides */ padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; } } /* mobile text align */ @media (max-width: 767px) { #block-1716228379200_3, [data-slick-id="1716228379200_3"] { text-align: left; } } #block-1577982541036_0 .btn { margin-top: 1rem; } Presented by Emily Caroline from That Mom With a Laser

      Use later

      Add button here & in other places indicated in template

    21. This is what to expect from the virtual  Laser Maker Con experience...

      If you're referring to above content, reword & move above. e.g. This is what you'll get from x event

    22. Own

      Make the most of? Optimize/Leverage?

    23. Image

      ?

    24. What if you could create a business plan to ensure every Q4 is better than your last?

      Good, clear

    25. skyrocket your Q4 profits

      great

    26. join over

      learn from, hear from?

    27. Unlock Your Profit Potential

      Great

    28. 58 DAYS 19 HOURS 06 MINS

      Great!

    29. MORE

      how this summit will help you x

      Video is AMAZING!

    30. 9:00 AM EDT

      Date range

  4. Mar 2024
    1. You’ll get the motivation, tactics and strategies that work for creating your dream online business.

      lower

    2. Rise Above: The Ultimate Online Business Empowerment Summit was created to bring both knowledge and experience together. Providing actionable steps, growth mindset tools and a flight path to success.What are you waiting for?Sign up now, you’ve got zero to lose and EVERYTHING to gain!

      What makes your summit different?

    3. both knowledge and experience together. Providing actionable steps, growth mindset tools and a flight path to success.

      Use in banner

    4. If you’re ready to create your dream online business and Rise Above your own expectations, then sign up now because I cannot wait to share all of this with you andSee you fly! SIGN UP FOR FREE

      lower down

    5. A new approach

      not necessary

    6. Dream

      use in copy higher up?

    7. Hello there

      name

    8. You'll learn to

      good

    9. Are you... <img loading="lazy" decoding="async" width="200" height="200" src="https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1.png" class="attachment-large size-large wp-image-124 lazyload" alt="" srcset="https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1.png 200w, https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1-150x150.png 150w" sizes="(max-width: 200px) 100vw, 200px" /> Looking to design a business around your life rather than the other way around <img loading="lazy" decoding="async" width="200" height="200" src="https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1.png" class="attachment-large size-large wp-image-124 lazyload" alt="" srcset="https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1.png 200w, https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1-150x150.png 150w" sizes="(max-width: 200px) 100vw, 200px" />Tired of jumping on the latest trend for growth only to fall at the first hurdle <img loading="lazy" decoding="async" width="200" height="200" src="https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1.png" class="attachment-large size-large wp-image-124 lazyload" alt="" srcset="https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1.png 200w, https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1-150x150.png 150w" sizes="(max-width: 200px) 100vw, 200px" />Lacking in self-belief and constantly battling imposter syndrome <img loading="lazy" decoding="async" width="200" height="200" src="https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1.png" class="attachment-large size-large wp-image-124 lazyload" alt="" srcset="https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1.png 200w, https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1-150x150.png 150w" sizes="(max-width: 200px) 100vw, 200px" />Overwhelmed with the possibility of scaling, and have no clue where to start with the numbers <img loading="lazy" decoding="async" width="200" height="200" src="https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1.png" class="attachment-large size-large wp-image-124 lazyload" alt="" srcset="https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1.png 200w, https://theriseabovesummit.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/02/sun-1-150x150.png 150w" sizes="(max-width: 200px) 100vw, 200px" />Wondering just how others seem to make it all look so easyThen THE RISE ABOVE SUMMIT is for you!

      You dream of finding a way to [SUMMIT GOAL] that’s doable with your hectic schedule, and actually works. [GET CREATIVE - replace “doable with your hectic schedule, and actually works.” with the objections or concerns your audience has about not being able to achieve the summit goal]

      How would it feel to….

      [LIST OF DESIRED OUTCOMES]

      This is exactly what you’ll experience at [NAME OF SUMMIT]!

    10. Are you ready to grow your online businesses and Rise Above?Whether you’ve been in business for years or you’re just starting out, I’m guessing you’re here because you want to grow your online business.You’ve got the theory, but just how are you going to build your online business in practice?The RISE ABOVE SUMMIT will show you how. A two-day event designed especially for course creators, membership owners and coaches.

      Maybe right now you….

      [LIST OF PAIN POINTS AND FRUSTRATIONS]

      There has got to be a better way!

      GET YOUR FREE TICKET

      See below container

    11. Your one-stop event for all the motivation, tactics and strategies thatActually Work... /*! elementor - v3.19.0 - 28-02-2024 */ .elementor-widget-text-editor.elementor-drop-cap-view-stacked .elementor-drop-cap{background-color:#69727d;color:#fff}.elementor-widget-text-editor.elementor-drop-cap-view-framed .elementor-drop-cap{color:#69727d;border:3px solid;background-color:transparent}.elementor-widget-text-editor:not(.elementor-drop-cap-view-default) .elementor-drop-cap{margin-top:8px}.elementor-widget-text-editor:not(.elementor-drop-cap-view-default) .elementor-drop-cap-letter{width:1em;height:1em}.elementor-widget-text-editor .elementor-drop-cap{float:left;text-align:center;line-height:1;font-size:50px}.elementor-widget-text-editor .elementor-drop-cap-letter{display:inline-block}Advice and insight from people who have built successful online businesses, and who know what they are talking about.A two-day event designed especially for online businesses

      [REACHING SUMMIT GOAL] takes a whole lot more than [ASSUMPTIONS ABOUT REACHING SUMMIT GOAL]. [GET CREATIVE WITH THIS - customize with examples from your niche]

      You’re getting a lot of things right: You’re doing [GIVE EXAMPLES OF THE THINGS THEY ARE DOING RIGHT RELATED TO SUMMIT GOAL].

      But… [DESCRIBE FRUSTRATION THEY’VE EXPERIENCED WHILE TRYING TO ACHIEVE SUMMIT GOAL]

    12. businesses

      owners. More specific? Solo, small, medium, industry, gender?

    13. Join the ultimate event for growing your online business and making it more profitable

      x day virtual event for target audience

  5. Feb 2024
    1. All

      Add section: Upgrade your ticket for a VIP experience worth over $[####], including bonus resources, live sessions, courses, and toolkits to help you [SUMMIT GOAL] [Customize as needed to reflect what’s included in your aap package]

      Get the [UPGRADE NAME] now!

    2. Conference Schedule

      On reg page, not all access pass page

    3. UPGRADE OPTIONS

      Move higher

    4. Do

      Add section: two boxes: [for two tiers] IT’S YOUR CHOICE BETWEEN:

    5. students who upgraded in the past have

      past students had to say

    6. What

      Add section: You’d pay over $[####] if you bought each of these bonuses individually. But you can get it for just a fraction of that.

      Get the [UPGRADE NAME], including $[####] worth of premium bonuses from our expert speakers for just $[##]!

    7. what comes with upgrading

      Look/here's what you get when you upgrade

    8. 25

      Plus

    9. YOU'RE IN

      PROGRESS BAR

    10. Live-Access Pass or Lifetime-Access Pass o

      Upgrade your ticket for exclusive access to live sessions during the week of the summit and over $[####] worth of resources to help you [SUMMIT GOAL] [CUSTOMIZE AS NEEDED BASED ON WHAT’S INCLUDED IN YOUR AAP]

      Not to mention ongoing access to the summit presentations so you can revisit them whenever you need to and implement the strategies on your time!

    11. Dive deeper

      Goal of summit

    12. As a thank you for joining, we offer an early bird discount.

      $[####] worth of resources, live sessions, courses, and toolkits [CUSTOMIZE AS NEEDED] to help you [SUMMIT GOAL]

      Just $[##] through [DATE]!

    13. UPGRADING

      If you’re excited about[SUMMIT NAME], you will love [UPGRADE NAME]

    1. FAQs

      Box of 2 options

    2. We know you’ll love the upgrade.

      title: What past attendees had to say. Move up

    3. OFFERs

      categories/order

    4. Included

      to help you ...

    5. better

      Upgrade your ticket for exclusive access to live sessions during the week of the summit and over $[####] worth of resources to help you [SUMMIT GOAL] [CUSTOMIZE AS NEEDED BASED ON WHAT’S INCLUDED IN YOUR AAP]

      Not to mention ongoing access to the summit presentations so you can revisit them whenever you need to and implement the strategies on your time!

    6. The

      HIT YOUR GOALS EVEN FASTER WHEN YOU UPGRADE YOUR TICKET.

    1. 80% of people who receive coaching report increased self-confidence, and over 70% benefit from improved work performance, relationships, and more effective communication skills. 86% of companies report that they recouped their investment on coaching and more

      Swap these around (lead with benefit to the oganization

    2. Investing in your high-achieving talent not only reinforces your belief in them as individuals but is also proven to financially benefit your business:

      Move this higher or use the concept of this benefit in the banner

    3. live happier, more fulfilled lives

      Could this be more focused around the benefit to the business?

    4. Help Your High-Achievers Thrive

      Could this be even more specific about the measurable benefit to the organization?

  6. Jan 2024
    1. February 27-March 1 with pre-party sessions happening the week of February 19th.

      be consistent with dates

    2. moms

      and dads?

    3. or latest claimed magical cure,

      delete

    4. ;

      delete

    5. Presentations

      Potential categories: - For the kids - For the parents - For the home

    6. A

      delete

    7. how to heal your family naturally

      Can you reword? Holistic, comprehensive?

    8. &

      and

    9. moms

      and dads/parents

    10. Or, that any one modality is the only way to heal.

      delete

    11. This isn't just another MLM company "party" telling you their products are the only way to go natural

      :)

    12. There are  scholarships up for grabs!

      delete

    13. available

      delete

    14. 2

      two

    15. &

      and

    16. natural minded

      natural-minded

    17. 27th-

      space

    18. 10 year old

      10-year-old

    19. KNOW

      Non caps

    20. appointments

      Add line: How would it feel to:

    21. sick-care trap

      what does this mean?

    22. drug store

      one word

    23. popping the latest and greatest protein powder into your smoothie each day. Or loading that fancy diffuser up, so the good smells permeate your home.

      :)

    24. video

      Great smile & tone. Make clear whether the toolkit is the same as the evergreen ticket. And whether FB group is for upsell only or all attendees Shorten explanation of the upsell - go into more detail about that on the all access pass page

    25. Feb 27- March 1st

      Be consistent on how you write dates

    1. Your free ticket is on its way to your inbox!But wait …If you’re excited about theKnit Happy! Summityou will love the VIP All-Access Pass!$300+ worth of knitting workshops, courses, your ticket to the VIP-only Stitch Sessions on Zoom, knitting patterns, and amazing resources that will help you take your passion for knitting to the next level!

      Great intro and well done on following the template!

      Are you able to add a progress bar at the top of the page?

      Could you get even more specific on your summit goal here, rather than "next level"? See some of your copy lower down. Is it about: skills, professionalism, doing things they thought they couldn't, confidence... You have great copy on the page, and next level is fine, but a little generic.

      What about something like "become the confident knitter you've always wanted to be"

    2. for the next 30 minutes!

      Are you able to add a countdown timer?

    3. multiple businesses

      Are you adding bonuses from other speakers?

    4. $[####]

      update with $ value

    5. Presentations are free for 48 hours to keep us all taking action together and to keep the feel similar to an in-person event where you’d have to attend live.

      I really like this wording!

    6. $[####]

      update with the total $ value

    7. February 14

      As per other box: just check all your dates are consistent

    8. February 14th

      Check your dates are consistent across the page

    9. If you need help filling in this form or you have questions, contact our team at knithappy@doublethestitches.com

      You noted a question about having the checkout with 2 payment options in 1 thrivecart checkout. I'll just focus on copy here, so please go ahead and ask this Q on Slack or on a call :)

    10. On the Saturday evening of the Summit, we’ll have a live Knit Night on Zoom where you’ll have a chance to hang out and virtually knit alongside Summit Speakers and fellow VIP attendees. When you upgrade your ticket, you’ll receive your exclusive Zoom link to join us. Connect with fellow passionate knitters from your favorite comfy knitting spot in your most comfy clothes!

      Shorten this - you mention the full details of how to access above so just something like "Come hang out and virtually knit alongside summit speakers and fellow VIP attendees from your favorite comfy knitting spot."

    11. February 14 -

      I think you wrote Feb 15 above?

    12. is

      as

    13. UPGRADE MY TICKET NOW!

      Add the reduced price (full price in strike through) either in the button or above it