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  1. Oct 2024
    1. STILL HAVE QUESTIONS?Still have questions? Don’t worry, I have answers!Email me at hello@doublethestitches.comand I'll get back to you as soon as I can.Emails are typically answered within 24-48 hours.

      Put after FAQ

    2. Imagine a world where every stitch you make is celebrated,

      Replace with: concrete details of what's included, e.g. trainings, meet ups, archive, private community, patterns, discounts

    3. Have you ever found yourself yearning for a community that truly understands your passion?

      Love the emotion, empathy, describing the ideal scenario. Title - make it about the ideal scenario, e.g. "A place to..."

      Is this really the driving motivator to join the membership? Is this secondary. Is the main driver the help, tips, questions answered

    4. DOES THIS SOUND FAMILIAR?

      Love sentiment of banner, but use lower down. Replace with: what this is, who it is for, what it will enable them to do that they couldn't do otherwise + CTA button

  2. Sep 2024
    1. My mission is to bridge the yoga world and the neuroscience world by connecting scientists and yogis, replicating hands-on neuroscience experiments for learners, and sharing resources.

      Why? Structure: I am a x who does y I discovered a So, I'm offering this product

    2. making this an incredible library of knowledge. All presentations with down-to-earth scientists, yoga classes with top teachers, recordings of Q&A sessions, workbooks, experiments, and quizzes are available.

      Shorten: a library/archive of x that will enable you to y

    3. Build your library over time or apply your subscription fees toward Lifetime-Access Passes for continuing education credits.

      Confusing to me. Do I get everything now or just a section, then I upgrade?

    4. WITH EXPERTS FEATURED IN

      Great idea

      First: a section about the problem/frustration your target audience is facing, what they really want, then how this subscription solves that

    5. Neuroscience and Yoga Online Conference Subscription

      Better layout than previous sales page.

      Add: the tangible result people get from having this subscription (look at testimonials). What can I do that I couldn't do before? Who is it for Also see language at beginning of video: treasure trove, wide range

      Move line under, edit sub headline

    6. Workbooks and quizzes to guide your learning, and turn passive listening into active learning

      This kind of sentence for each feature. i.e. what does each feature enable me to do/give me that I didn't have before.

      Remove underlines (we think we'll click somewhere)

  3. www.wealthembodiedsummit.com www.wealthembodiedsummit.com
    1. Not only was I able to recreate my wealth, but I learned how to embody the frequency of wealth and how to live and breathe wealth.

      I was able to recreate my wealth by ...

    2. You know that you are innately abundant. You understand that abundance is who you are as a sovereign being.

      repetitive. what are you trying to say?

      [title] Feeling at ease about wealth takes a lot more than x You understand the key is in believing you're abundant But...

    3. Activate Wealth Consciousness to release scarcity and "not enough"

      You might be removing form. Make banner/tagline the end result, not the how

      scarcity & not enough - use in the problem container

    4. I am dedicated to helping you embody wealth consciousness and making the process as easy as possible. To help, you’ll hear about my Wealth Uplevel Program here and there throughout the event.    On the final day, one lucky (and engaged) attendee will be selected to win a full scholarship and have instant access to 9 powerful modules, Live calls, and group support to make embodying and creating wealth EASY.   Stay tuned for details and your chance to apply!

      central justify

      make the process I do that through my x program

    1. He received his Bachelor’s of Music in Music Education from Ohio Wesleyan University and his Master's of Music in Music Education degree with a Kodály emphasis from Capital University.

      delete or use later

    2. receive content-specific professional development that’s doable with your hectic schedule

      is it more bullet 2: ideas, strategies, resources that actually work And, what is 'work': engaged kids, less hours spent planning...

    1. If you still have questions, we encourage you to go ahead and sign up. What do you have to lose - Your ticket is FREE! 😁 Even learning one tip will be worth more than the cost (FREE) of admission. 🙌 Your questions will likely be answered during the event or in the Facebook community, which you’ll be able to join right away after grabbing your free ticket. However, if you need to ask us a question before registering, feel free to send us an email at mistymiller@tptsellertipsandadvice.com.

      formatting

    2. Learn how to get more eyes on your TPT store, and drive traffic that will help boost your sales during this free 4-day event for teacher sellers.

      good, clear How about: Get more eyes on your TPT store A free event to ...

    3. You don’t need another summit teaching you the basics of selling on TPT or ideas that will take you months to implement. The Teacher Seller GROWTH Summit was specifically created for TPT Sellers like you.

      central justfiy

    4. some of the things I've learned along the way.💡I believe in finding your passion. 💡I believe in conquering your fears. 💡I believe in being positive & persevering through what life hands you.

      intro why this particular topic & target audience, specific, under $2k, "I want this for you"

    5. tired of not getting views on your products .sqs-block-image .sqs-block-content { height: 100%; width: 100%; } .fe-block-97270c560e8b220c877c .fluidImageOverlay { position: absolute; top: 0; left: 0; width: 100%; height: 100%; mix-blend-mode: normal; opacity: 0; } trying to do some marketing but not really sure what you’re doing .sqs-block-image .sqs-block-content { height: 100%; width: 100%; } .fe-block-cf3e4b6415e70ae30b0f .fluidImageOverlay { position: absolute; top: 0; left: 0; width: 100%; height: 100%; mix-blend-mode: normal; opacity: 0; } frustrated that you’ve been stuck with the same revenue month after month

      try to make same length - unsure what marketing you should do - frustrated your revenue is the same every month

  4. Aug 2024
    1. that you can easily teach inside your limited weekly sessions…  that students will be inspired to try

      delete inspired to try (you use it below) mention short sessions - this is a differentiator

    2. I love collaborating with expert educators in the world of “student success strategies” and am super psyched about our first annual Art of Motivating Students Summit!

      what you learned/discovered/what was the aha moment & therefore why you created this summit

    3. As a coach or tutor, you’re getting a lot of things right: You have a deep love for helping students succeed and you’ve collected a toolkit of strategies that you know will help your students (if only they would follow through. sigh); But… Your students are quickly losing steam as the school year progresses. Disappointing grades and mounting overwhelm is killing momentum. Learning disabilities require specialized strategies and accommodations you haven’t been trained in. It doesn’t help that students are facing anxiety and depression like no generation before!

      excellent

    1. On your next trip to Yellowstone, you could just miss out on one-in-a-lifetime photo opps. Or you could sign up for Eavesdropping on Wild Conversations and let the animals tell you exactly where you need to be for the sighting of a lifetime.

      use idea for last hurrah, but make generic

    2. You’ll start to notice the signals the animals have always been putting out and start to understand the natural world in a way that was lost to you before. You’ll feel confident as you’re able to easily understand wildlife. Your friends will ask how you got that photo of a lifetime and you’ll be able to tell them, “The crows told me where to stand.” Even if you’ve never been hiking or you're an experienced birder or photographer,  Eavesdropping On Wild Conversations can deliver the ancient ability to understand animals.

      use in copy higher up, it's not his bio

    3. You’ll also get to see real pages from sketchbooks, hear the exact bird call in question, examine actual photos to pinpoint the signals you’re looking for, and review real video examples of communication unfolding so you’re confident that you understand what you’re observing.

      put higher in product description

    4. If you're ready to finally develop an intimate understanding of wild animals, this course is for you.

      Good header I want the how, or proof, or why this works vs other things

    5. Decoding the Secrets of Animal Language for Ultimate Wildlife Encounters

      What will I feel and be able to do after the course that I couldn't do before? Make it a sentence, not a subtitle Gain x so you can y with our z

    6. Animals are communicating around you, all the time. This is the only program that shows you step by step how to tune into what they’re saying, join the conversation, and transform your relationship with wild animals and the natural world.

      use in course intro

    7. You want to know their movements and habits. You want to feel connected to nature and be at home in the wild. You want to understand animal behavior and what they’re telling you.

      reads like a list, make it more narrative

    1. Your Montessori Hub for Parents & Educators to equip you with practical and high quality Montessori resources to help you nurture the limitless potential of every child.

      Feel empowered & confident ... Don't repeat concept of potential

      Elements: who it's for what transformation they get

    2. Are you feeling alone in your quest to navigate challenging behavior, and effectively support your child’s holistic development? Are those moments of doubt creeping in, making you wonder if you’re truly doing the best for your children or students?I understand the frustration of not having easy access to quality Montessori resources and the feeling of isolation in this journey. But it doesn’t have to be this way.

      Shorten and use in first container

    3. Start with a $7 trial to get full access to our Montessori resources and community. This brief period allows you to fully experience our support and educational materials, ensuring it’s the right fit for your family‘s journey.

      Make separate box

    4. The Childhood Potential Club is here to support you to help your children thrive!

      The main transformation: empowered, confident, supported.

      Name The club which empowers you to x so you can y High level features: extensive library, live coaching, supportive community

    5. Access a Wealth of Montessori Resources:

      Make subtitles consistent. Just pick 3 - 4 (use others later

      Make sure this section paints picture of what parents & educators want their environment to look like, vs what it's currently like. Physical tangible, end transformation And emotional experience

    6. Watch this video

      Excellent content & language. Good structure. Shorten but keep: challenges (empathy), why membership exists, physcial & emotional benefits, features, CTA

      Put testimonials lower

    1. Kick off call Sunday October 6th              Day 1 Sessions: Mon. Oct. 7th                  Day 2 Sessions: Tues. Oct. 8th.                  Day 3 Sessions, Webinar & Closing Call: Wed. Oct. 9th

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    2. Monday August 7th: The 6 presentations are available starting at 7 AM EST for 24 hours. Tuesday, August 8th: Day 1 presentations are replaced by the 8 day 2 presentations. Day 2 presentations will be available for 24 hours. Wednesday, August 9th: Day 2 presentations are replaced by the 6 Day 3 presentations. They will be available for 24 hours.

      not necessary

    3. Too many so-called health experts keep on promoting overly restrictive diets that never work long-term. Leaving women feeling hungry, irritable, and even desperate to find a solution that really works

      remove - use elsewhere