16 Matching Annotations
  1. Mar 2019
    1. chalk-white arrows

      Hopscotch, a children's sidewalk game, holds the abstract appearance of an arrow and in addition has a fixed direction from 1 to 10

    2. For the children, they mark, and the children, they knowThe place where the sidewalk ends.

      Repetition solidifies the idea of childhood/youthfulness being something that can be reclaimed by following the way children play

    3. walk with a walk that is measured and slow

      Returning to a measured journey rather than a quickly-paced one, or even a carefree pace of walking that is removed from any obligation to arrive at a set time

    4. Let us leave this place where the smoke blows blackAnd the dark street winds and bends.

      These lines seem to call for a return to a child-like nature opposed to "adulthood"

    5. where the sidewalk endsAnd before the street begins

      Lines possibly alluding to the "Twilight Years" of life, where the metaphorical path has ended but before death happens. These lines can also infer the ending of childhood, as the sidewalk ends at the curb which would normally be the boundary for a youths play area in the yard.

  2. Feb 2019
    1. punched holes into their skulls like useless jars or vases,

      https://youtu.be/Xxw8qEIj8-E Trepanning is an ancient form of surgery predating lobotomy. The brother punching holes in the skulls could serve as removing memories or feelings, or attempting to pacify or heal (and failing).

    1. salt cedar

      Salt cedar is an invasive species which lowers the water table and deposits salt in the soil. This makes the land uninhabitable for other things which depend on the water and balanced mineral content of the soil.

    2. he lived in our basement and sacrificed my parents

      The lack of capitalization both allows the piece to stand as a continuance of something prior, and thus unseen, but also allows the insertion of the title as its first line and beginning of the "narritive" of the piece.

    1. From pig balls, From the ferocity of pig driven to holiness,

      Implies humanity is pig-like, e.g. lives in refuse, unclean, uncultured, obese, etc.

    2. Out of burlap sacks, out of bearing butter, Out of black bean and wet slate bread,

      Double meaning of "bearing butter" as ball-bearing grease but also of having cooking butter. Central idea of surviving prior to the turn of the first stanza into industrialization.