Looking into a phenomenal perspective, hitters always call their sets,
Revise opening statement to describe how you have observed hitters calling their sets. This would give first-person context to what is being discussed and act as a segway into your interviews as you try to figure out why calling out is always in this manner.
more time to think about any essential parts to the game
This would be a good point to then transition into talking about how you have observed behaviors on the court that require more investigation. Otherwise, this and the rest of the paragraph about being on the bench should probably be cut.
, we can question, “Why do the hitters repeat the ‘set’ three times in a row?”
Cut. Replace with a more direct statement on what the conclusion is, and how it was made.
However, it is certain that after observing shoppers on such as small scale, the mundane chore or buying supplements has been affected at some scale,
This sounds like a conclusion to a prompt about complexity theory. Conclude by talking about customer interactions and behaviors in more depth.
shipment
All the photos need annotations like these to give context to what's being presented.
how GNC customers interacted with the store and the sales associate within.
one or two paragraphs may be necessary to flesh-out this idea. What actions by customers can help to draw the conclusion that actions have been changed?
smallest action
Actions such as?
Posts Posted on April 6, 2020GNC Phenomenology Study Phenomenology can be understood as the ways that people know and experience things within their lives. In thinking about phenomenology it can be useful to study other people’s personal experiences with the environment they interact with. This could be the way that people attach meaning to certain places or how they gather the knowledge that may influence action in that place. According to Pauline Couper, one way geographers can get at the essence of human experience is to examine the “unexceptional things we take for granted” (Couper 93). In this unique time of the COVID-19 virus pandemic, people may be experiencing the ordinary differently to be sure. For this case, phenomenological ideas were used to evaluate how GNC customers interacted with the store and the sales associate within. Notably, these interactions took place after a stay at home order was issued to the state. The fact that these customers came in to begin with may suggest something about how they are experiencing the pandemic. Most customers entering the store had a heightened sense of awareness when shopping. They seemed mindful of touching products or doing the smallest action. It is hard to say whether it was because they were trying to be protective of their own health or wanted the sales associate to see that they understand the gravity of the situation the world is in and they are adjusting their behavior accordingly. However, it is certain that after observing shoppers on such as small scale, the mundane chore or buying supplements has been affected at some scale, especially for high risk customers.
Providing brief descriptions for all of these, like you did for the bottles, would give context to what's being presented.
However, it is certain that after observing shoppers on such as small scale, the mundane chore or buying supplements has been affected at some scale,
This sounds like an intro to complexity theory. A statement tying back to phenomenology would work.
Employee 2
The use of names, even if they were fake, would really help in following this section
even if you’re looking at it blindly
Cut, it's kinda fluff
In Target, there are yellow tapped lines that indicate where a person stands.
What is the effect of this policy? Descriptions of the amount of people and their mood could provide a window into other people's attitudes to self-quarantine.
Most of the people in my home
How many people? Which rooms do they use more often? Providing details like this would provide more in-depth details about the effects of the self-quarantine.
the streets they deem as popular but being from Fredericksburg and working in downtown I know the most diverse and busiest street is William street.
Draw conclusions between the physical geography of William Street and why it is so popular. That would make this statement stronger.
spoken to on campus and at home that want to pursue an education degree and the majority of these people were females.
What do your mother and brother think? Tying them in would be a good way to conclude.
I believe that my county tends to be more on the conservative side,
What leads you to believe this? Just something brief to back up the claim.