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  1. Nov 2016
    1. Bryant said, "Let's wait until you've tried out your scale in Seattle." His tone was interestingly merciless, and Rick Deckard noted it.

      seems like Bryant isn't too invested in Deckard's success

    2. Rick standing alon

      in the movie Rick is a lot more confident (?). he doesn't need the department but he department needs him because he is "that" good. here. In the novel we see that Rick needs money, he has financial and familial concerns. Movie Rick seems much more disaffected.

    3. duplicates the halcyon days of the pre-Civil War Southern states! Either as body servants or tireless field hands, the custom-tailored humanoid robot designed specifically for YOUR UNIQUE NEEDS, FOR YOU AND YOU ALONE —

      pretty heavy slavery reference there. I guess it's not racist if they are androids?

    4. "I bought some of the highest quality fertilizing plasma available in California,"

      this guy likes to brag. Also we now have a clearer idea of where they are and that there are other cities with people still alive

  2. Oct 2016
    1. "I notice you've

      honestly I'm so tired of this trope. I've heard it again and again. "You don't love me/I don't like your job" "yeah well you spend my money!". Is there another argument that can be explored?

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    1. Editing

      revising vs. editing. Revising seems to be about getting into the meat of the paper and involves large scale change or reshaping. Editing is more about cosmetic corrections for grammar, readability, or clarity.

    1. t crue

      here caring came under the disguise of cruelty. In which Kathy is so entrenched in the system she has no way to articulate anger against it and instead relies in a roundabout way to help Tommy with his anger and unhappiness.

    2. ests again that my logic of indi- vidual freedom, irrefutable as it seems, involves lite

      here he forwards the work by analyzing it through the lens of upward mobility and then applying that to real life adn the implications that message has to it.

    3. blinkering of awarenes

      in Never Let Me Go Kathy is concerned with her day to day problems and her relationship with Ruth and Tommy. She doesn't contemplate the injustice of her position nor theirs. In this way she acts much like a normal person who can't spend all their energy contemplating their position in the "Big Picture".

    4. ted with high statistical reliabilit

      so putting aside the medical implications of donors and carers the author is arguing that the class system perpetuated in Never Let Me Go is is a reflection of the society is exists in. In which the categories of donors and non-donors are replaced with economic class and race

    5. ry challenging - as challenging, her language suggests, as maintaining peace between hostile

      they don't take his reasoning far enough. They settle for mentioning that it is there and doing Something

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    1. naked

      interesting that one can also use the term naked to mean vulnerable or honest.One can say they are "naked" in reference to being emotionally vulnerable. Nude isn't used in this way

    2. the aim of academic writing should not be simply to prove how smart you are but to add to what can be said about a subject

      to me it seems that it would be easier to find the flaws in another argument rather than make an original one of your own.

    1. Angry Black Woman.

      I recently saw an example of this in a political cartoon that compared Michelle Obama to Melanie Trump with the caption "Make the first lady great again". The author drew Michelle as overtly masculine and angry as compared to the smiling slim and white Melanie.

    2. allowed

      she isn't allowed to talk about slavery or segregation because if she does she's accused of playing the "race card". As if race is no longer relevant to people's lives and bringing it up is in poor taste.

    1. Givenadescriptionsuchasthisonetendstomakecertainassumptions.Givenadescriptionsuchasthisonetendstolookne

      the author already addresses the assumptions she assumes the reader to have.

  5. Sep 2016
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    1. debate.

      this feels like a rather idealistic discussion on academic writing given the history and politics of some topics. I still think its a good ideal to have though

    1. It's likely women—just a pack of women—would have hung together like that! We all know women can't organize—that they scrap like anything—are frightfully jealous."

      this brings to mind Pisan and her assertion that men willfully believe false things about women as a group

    2. though it was not for all of them personally

      while Perkins celebrates motherhood and fertility with the holy births of Maaia she takes time here to acknowledge that motherhood is not for everyone. An interesting addition to the primordial mother goddess mythos

  7. Aug 2016
    1. When we speak, we combine a finite number of elements—the words of our language—to create an infinite number of larger structures—sentences.

      because of the generative property of language