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  1. Mar 2016
  2. Oct 2015
    1. 6th paragraph : Here are some of the things that we believe should be done to achieve our education goal. Improve, update and form curricula, texts, pedagogy, and examination and evaluation techniques. The government has now fixed better primary education as a national priority, and a new $150 million credit from the International Development Association will help improve schools in one of the areas that needs the most help, the diverse and heavily rural North-West Frontier Province. With this program, all four of Pakistan’s provinces will now have an IDA-backed primary education system in place. Literacy in the province is below 22 percent, 40 percent of kindergartners don’t go on to finish the fifth grade and only 22 percent of schools are girls schools. And severe inequities exist in education between districts, rural and urban areas and between males and females. The credit will help Pakistan to get more children in-and through-primary schools and to improve the overall quality of their education. The five-year program is expected to increase primary enrollment by about 886,000 new students, more than 40 percent of whom will be girls. Educating girls is a key focus of the project-as it is in most of the Bank’s education work-because worldwide research has shown it to have broad side benefits. It promotes child health and reduced fertility, for example, particularly important given Pakistan’s high population growth rate. Sixty percent of the program’s 23,000 new classrooms will be for girls. locating schools where there is a community demand for enrollment, consolidating schools with low enrollment;- promoting coeducation schools in receptive communities, increasing the supply of female teachers by training and recruiting women;- subsidizing private schools catering to low-income areas and rural girls. The project will also improve the learning environment by: strengthening textbook development and subsidizing production so that all students have access to high-quality, affordable books;- providing all classrooms with a standard set of instructional materials and improving teacher education and providing them with academic support.

      Could you format this so that it doesn't create confusion because I got confused with the different sentences outside of the paragraph.

    2. we

      Make sure to not use these

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      Make sure to include the global goal number in the introduction for the paragraph 1

    4. Must be 6-8 sentences check echo for what your paragraph must be about (Delaney)1st paragraph:

      Make sure to delete this because it doesn't let it flow if it has these on every paragraph

    1. we

      Make sure not to use We

    2. Israel’s policies are trying to make peace with Iran. They have not successfully done that, but they are working on it. The reason they can not do that is because Israel’s leader wants to go by his rules. If Israel wants to live in a peaceful society, they need to take steps that will reduce tensions. Israel’s “dangerous violations” make it imperative for the Palestinians to go to the Security Council soon to seek a resolution calling for an Israeli withdrawal.

      You should try to talk from the countries point of view not yours because it sounds like you're talking from a citizen's point of veiw