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  1. Feb 2018
    1. Little did 1 know when Aaron first crossed my path that the lessons from this child would continue throughout a lifetime

      This is a great lesson for both current and future teachers. We must pay attention to our students and be open-minded to the things they may teach us. This is one valuable lesson that can create great teachers.

  2. Apr 2017
    1. God, how she wanted these things

      The author is expressing Sasha's desire to improve her lifestyle. To me, this makes me feel empathy for her because she understands that what she does is wrong but it's such an addiction that she really cannot stop.

    2. green wallet

      Green is said to symbolize respect, so this is ironic since Sasha stole the green wallet, which is not at all respecting someone's belongings.

    3. Sasha tipped back her head to look at him. She made a point of doing this now and then, just to remind Coz that she wasn’t an idiot

      She is aware of the consequences, and how it affects the other party yet, she continues to do it. These are signs of a major addiction.

    4. “O.K.,” she said. “Steal it.”

      At this moment, it is first suggested that Sasha does understand that she has a problem. This was the first time that she admitted to what she is actually doing, which is stealing, not just taking from someone.

    5. I live in a city where people will steal the hair off your head if you give them half a chance, but you leave your stuff lying in plain sight and expect it to be waiting for you when you come back?

      Seems like Sasha felt obliged to steal the wallet.

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  4. Mar 2017
    1. shiny wing-top shoes

      I wonder what the author's purpose was in writing in that the bank robbers we wearing shiny wing-top shoes, as well as blue business suits. It is very unexpecting.

    2. “Oh, that’s nice,”

      After rereading, I realized at this moment that there really is a lot of sarcasm in the story, and it's not only coming from Anders.

    3. The bullet smashed Anders’ skull and ploughed through his brain

      Really strong word choice here using "smashed" and "ploughed". This gives off some pretty vivid, yet distrubing imagery.

  5. Feb 2017
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    1. To the wind she says, “They have eaten me alive.”

      Looking at the syntax of this line, I initially thought that with a statement like this one, the words would usually be placed differently. However, this placement makes the poem end of really well by concluding it with such a strong statement. It helps to understand what this poem is ultimately about.

    2. She sits in the park. Her clothes are out of date. Two children whine and bicker, tug her skirt. A third draws aimless patterns in the dirt Someone she loved once passed by – too late to feign indifference to that casual nod.

      The first two lines are end-stopped lines. They make you read at a slower pace, so at this point the poem seems very relaxed and mellow. The following lines are enjambed, which speeds up the pace and makes it feel rushed. This could go along with the anxiousness that the woman might have felt as someone she used to love walked by.

    1. [I Shall Forget You Presently]

      This is an English, or Shakespearean sonnet. It has 14 lines and 10 syllables per line. It follows the rhyme scheme, abab cdcd efef gg, three quatrains and a couplet.

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    1. As at a signal and like an enormous swarm Of monarch butterflies

      This is figurative language, being that this is a simile comparing the large group of young people to a swarm of butterflies. However, comparing the young people to butterflies gives off a different tone than the one in the first stanza, since it uses words such as beery, animality, weak, and disport, to describe the young people.

    1. [What lips my lips have kissed]

      I believe this is an Italian sonnet because it is comprised of 14 lines, and each line has 10 syllables. The first 8 lines follow the rhyme scheme, abbaabba, and the remaining 6 lines is a sestet.

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    1. He hears the Haitians sing without R’s as they swing the great machetes: Katalina, they sing, Katalina, mi madle, mi amol en muelte

      This is Spanish, but it is mimicking how Haitians sing without their R's, which are replaced with L's. So, the actual saying in Spanish is "mi madre, mi amor en muerte", which translates to "my mother, my love in death".

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    1. But I am a mainland

      The dictionary definition of mainland is, "a large continuous extent of land that includes the greater part of a country or territory, as opposed to offshore islands and detached territories." She is literally using two contrasting concepts to express how men prefer something that she is the total opposite from.

    1. I kept waiting for the thud of your crash as I sprinted to catch up,

      This could relate to how parents, to an extent, want their children to be in need sometimes. Therefore, they can have the satisfaction of being the ones to help or rescue them. I think the speaker was waiting for their child to fall because it is like a moment to cherish, when you can still help your child when they are in need, because there will come a point where a child becomes an adult and won't need a parent's help anymore.

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    1. bale it like dirty laundry

      Here is where the speaker starts to talk about the snow much differently. It was once so clean and beautiful, and now it's being compared to dirty laundry. It reminds me of a saying that goes something along the lines of "Beauty doesn't last forever". That was the kind of vibe that I was getting off of this at point of the poem, but I don't think it has anything to do with the bigger meaning of the poem.

    2. All day the snow sets its table with clean linen, putting its house in order

      This is personification, in which the writer is portraying the snow, which is an inanimate object in a way that seems like it has human-like actions. At the same time, this line is giving off vivid imagery of a bright, white sheet of snow.

  11. Jan 2017
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    1. those numbers will fill his days the way water fills a bath

      I really like this comparison, opposed to saying something very cliche, like an hourglass.

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    1. when my children need my help.

      I love how she is so determined to know the English language just so that she can help her children when they need it, despite the fact that they laughed at her when she was trying to learn, opposed to helping her.

    2. I will be deaf

      I really like this comparison between being deaf and not knowing what people are saying, because if she doesn't know or understand a word that anyone is saying, it's so similar to what people feel if they are deaf.

    3. embarrassed at the laughter of my children,

      This sparks some emotion for me as a reader because it makes me upset that her own children laugh at her rather than helping their mother learn. You would think that home is where she could feel more included and a little less isolated.

    4. They speak English. At night they sit around the kitchen table, laugh with one another. I stand at the stove and feel dumb, alone.

      Here is where that sense of disconnection becomes more evident. Her children speak English now, and she does not.

    5. My Spanish isn’t good enough.

      This instantly makes me feel like the speaker probably feels disconnected. I know how it feels to be around people who are fluently speaking another language that I know little or none of.

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    1. Welcoming him in.

      This is pretty thought provoking. This woman is in his house, which makes you think that she is a family member. However, if that is the case, shouldn't the woman have been happy to see that he had come back home, and been more nurturing and comforting, rather than simply welcoming him in? On the other hand, "Welcoming him in" could give off the impression that he is being welcomed in for the first time. So maybe the things that he had been "remembering" about "his house", weren't actually real.

    2. The first Thing he must do, now that he is home, is decide who This woman is, this old, white-haired woman Standing here in the doorway, Welcoming him in.

      Initially, I thought that maybe this old woman was his wife. However, shouldn't his wife had been with him to bring him home from the hospital?

    3. The peculiar screeching of strings, the luxurious Fiddling with emotion

      "screeching of strings" and "fiddling" makes me think of the violin, which is an instrument that definitely sparks a ton of emotion, but what types of emotions are being referred to here?

    4. his mind rattling like the suitcase, swinging from his hand,

      Because of this comparison between the man's mind rattling, and the suitcase, swinging from his hand, I instantly knew that there were items in the suitcase.