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  1. Oct 2024
    1. from a total of six standards: 0, 2, 4, 8and 16 percent sugar

      I don't think this is needed. The method should only state what you used.

    2. sugar

      Sucrose, be more specific

    3. measure

      Measured*

    4. graduated cylinder

      Should specify the volume

    1. Foremost,

      Unneeded. This could have started as: "The 50mL beaker was measured by an electronic balance."

    2. The cylinder

      What was its volume? What type of cylinder was it?

    1. with percent sucrose on thex-axis and density on the y-axis.

      This information could already have been interpreted from Figure 1

    2. There was a measurement of the initial volume and finalvolume.

      This should be stated before adding the metal rod in.

    1. To calculate the density of a metal rod, the mass and volume of the metal rod needed tobe found.

      Nothing should "need" to be found out, the methods section should state that it was found and how,