comma after "sparkle"

This is a straight quote for some reason. Actually, as far as I can tell, I think they're all straight quotes in this one.

comma after "icon"

move period inside quotation marks

I think this "from" is the wrong font. Honestly, I think I missed this first sentence entirely when we had those issues with the character styles.

This word needs italics.

I could be crazy. Is this period bolded?

I might say "and has been recently . . ."

This also needs to be italicized.

I think for the stories this is italicized. I think this is how it is in the poetry template.

What a cool poem!!

I can't see this PDF in book format, so I'm going to assume this is an extra page before poetry.

I'd probably put a period after "shame" since it looks like we're ok with using periods throught the stanzas in the poem.

comma after "home"

comma after "cultures"

comma after "fantasies"

probably comma instead of a semicolon here

comma after "empire"

comma after "writing"

comma after cottagecore

Spacing here.

I don't think "for" should be capitalized. It could be the font though.

Spacing between periods in this ellipse.