What is one item, fact, detail, or example you can tell your readers that will help them better understand your claim/paper topic?
This is pertinent for me, as I was unsure on how to do a supporting evidence paragraph.
What is one item, fact, detail, or example you can tell your readers that will help them better understand your claim/paper topic?
This is pertinent for me, as I was unsure on how to do a supporting evidence paragraph.
Argumentative Paper Format
I felt as though this was the best outline, as it seemed to be the most condensed and to-the-point for me.
V. Concluding Paragraph
I think that this outline, in general, is a very helpful way to condense ideas for a research paper.
Generally, this takes the form of a paragraph that can be placed either after the introduction or before the conclusion.
I believe that placing the counterargument before the conclusion would be a good idea, as any possible counterarguments the reader may have from prior paragraphs would be fresh in their mind at that point.
This section of your paper gives the reader the basic information he or she needs to understand your position. This could be part of the introduction, but may work as its own section.
I think it would be helpful to present some background information on your position, as it might clear up some confusion for the reader.
the Sony walkman, built in 1978 by audio-division engineer Nobutoshi Kihara
My mother often remarks on how a simple cassette tape was so special back then, and how happy she was to get one.
In the US, the average annual inflation rate from 1900 to 1970 was approximately 2.5%. From 1970-1979, however, the average rate was 7.06%, and topped out at 13.29% in December 1979.
This is some crazy inflation. No wonder people were having a hard time in the 70's: their money just wasn't as valuable anymore!
The 1970s were perhaps the worst decade of most industrialized countries' economic performance since the Great Depression.[4] Although there was no severe economic depression as witnessed in the 1930s, economic growth rates were considerably lower than previous decades. As a result, the 1970s adversely distinguished itself from the prosperous postwar period between 1945 and 1973. The oil shocks of 1973 and 1979 added to the existing ailments and conjured high inflation throughout much of the world for the rest of the decade. U.S. manufacturing industries began to decline as a result, with the United States running its last trade surplus (as of 2009[update]) in 1975. In contrast, Japan and West Germany experienced boomtimes and started overtaking the US as the world's leading manufacturers.
This stunted economy could be why my mother's family was so poor. Perhaps there just wasn't any money to be made in the area they lived.
1973 oil crisis and 1979 energy crisis
I do remember my parents telling me about this. My mother told me that these events really limited the places their family could go.
In some ways, though, 1960s liberalism continued to flourish.
So, some of the ideals of the 60's carried into the 70's. I wonder if any of these affected my mother?
Even though very few people continued to support the war in Indochina, President Nixon feared that a retreat would make the United States look weak. As a result, instead of ending the war, Nixon and his aides devised ways to make it more palatable, such as limiting the draft and shifting the burden of combat onto South Vietnamese soldiers. This policy seemed to work at the beginning of Nixon’s term in office. When the United States invaded Cambodia in 1970, however, hundreds of thousands of protestors clogged city streets and shut down college campuses. On May 4, National Guardsmen shot four student demonstrators at an antiwar rally at Kent State University in Ohio. Ten days later, police officers killed two black student protestors at Mississippi’s Jackson State University. Members of Congress tried to limit the president’s power by revoking the Gulf of Tonkin resolution authorizing the use of military force in Southeast Asia, but Nixon simply ignored them. Even after The New York Times published the Pentagon Papers, which called the government’s justifications for war into question, the bloody and inconclusive conflict continued. American troops did not leave the region until 1973.
It seems to me that the 70s were generally filled with tension from all sides.
These activists mobilized against the Amendment and managed to defeat it. In 1977, Indiana became the 35th–and last–state to ratify the ERA.
Very interesting, as my mother was born in and has lived in Indiana all her life. I wonder if this focus on traditional gender roles affected her throughout her life?
In general, though, Nixon’s policies favored the interests of the middle class people who felt slighted by the Great Society of the 1960s.
In the era that my mother was born into, the middle class seems to have been put first and foremost in government policy. Not very advantageous for her, however, as she was born into a very poor family from what I understand.
How do you want to be remembered mom?
Asking someone about their legacy and what they want to leave behind can also be a good way of understanding how they tick and why they do the things that they do.
So mom, how do you understand ALS? What is that illness?
Asking someone how they understand something, rather than a clinical definition, can be a great way of getting to understand how it has affected them.
Do you like the person you are today because of that?
I believe that asking someone a self-reflecting question such as this is a great way of understanding what someone has taken away from the experience they are being interviewed for.
What went through your mind when I said, do you want to come to work with me and visit with some seniors?
This is a very detailed question that helps get the interviewee thinking. For me, at least, it generates more thoughts in my head and things that I could say than, "How'd you like visiting the old people?" for example.
So, what was your proudest moment?
This is a great question, as it asks him about who he is at the core. Asking him about his proudest moment lets us see what he feels is important.
Tell me about your childhood in Mexico.
By asking her father something he knows and is comfortable talking about - his childhood - she is opening up him up for later, which allows her to ask deeper questions.
After you left the room, I began to say: ”I just hugged the man that murdered my son.” And I instantly knew that all that anger and the animosity, all the stuff I had in my heart for 12 years for you–I knew it was over, that I had totally forgiven you.
This makes me wonder. How would I feel if someone killed my mother, for example? Would I be able to forgive them? Would it make me any lesser of a person if I didn't? Would it be expected of me to forgive? I don't know how to answer these questions. These are questions that I hope to not have to answer.
Just to hear you say those things and to be in my life in the manner that which [sic] you are is my motivation. It motivates me to make sure that I stay on the right path. You still believe in me. And the fact that you can do it despite how much pain I caused you–it’s like amazing.
I think it's nice how he's sort of taking the place of her son, kinda acting like the thing he took away from her. It's definitely awkward, but it also seems noble, in a sense.
In the hospital, here I was walking into the nursery to see my beautiful baby, and there were other mommies and daddies seeing their babies, and here I was in this big orange jumpsuit and shackles. And I was really, really, embarrassed.
That's rough. I can't imagine how that walk of shame felt. I can really sympathize with that. This reminds me of a saying my dad always told me, "Good people can do bad things." I don't think the mother did anything "bad" to land herself in jail. I can tell by how remorseful she is over what happened that she is a good person at heart.
But then mommy kind of got out of control with them and I wound up getting arrested.
OK, I can see where she is coming from. I myself deal with back pain on a daily basis due to Scoliosis, and it can suck. I don't take medication for it, but sometimes I wish I did just to ease the pain a little. The allure to make life a little less painful is definitely real.
“You may be better off just considering your father dead and gone.”
That's pretty rough! How old was this person when they were told this? That seems like an awful lot of negativity that can damage a person for years. I'd rather have hope for his return than confirmation that he was dead. This is a glass-half-empty mentality if I have ever seen one!
At one point while dad was gone, mom decided that we would not take any family pictures. She just said it one night at supper and we nodded knowingly as if that made sense. And she decided that she would buy no new clothes until dad came home. There was also a point at which she decided that we should always have a small bowl of rice for supper and that’s all, to sort of share dad’s meager existence.
It sounds to me like the mother wanted to show solidarity with her husband. Perhaps the kids were too young to understand this concept. This reminds me of how wives in Germany during WWI would give their gold wedding bands to the government to support the war effort.
Oh yeah. It wasn’t the easiest life back in them days. Mother died when I was four. And it was a tough life.
Oh. That gives us a perspective on why the guy seems so chill all the time. He's already had such a hard life, so any challenge he faces nowadays seems rather small in comparison to the strife he's lived through. It's the, "At least it can't get any worse!" mentality.
My grandma, everyone referred to her as like a spicy meatball. She swore a lot, but she looked so innocent that no one ever expected her to say the things that she said.
This is sort of how everyone describes my grandmother, too. No one expects a little old lady to have a potty mouth.