14 Matching Annotations
  1. Nov 2020
    1. She was arguing in favor of the kinds of insight that can emerge from fiction, with its tension between inner monologue and exterior drama, which can help us understand the complex dynamics of social situations and the hidden frailties or cruelties of other people.

      I like this passage because it helps me get an understanding of my book, Under the Harrow. The main character in UTH is woman named, Nora who came to visit her sister Rachel, only to find her murdered in her house> Nora then becomes delusion, sad, angry, all the emotions at once. What Wills is saying in this passage about inner monologue, compliments the book because it helps the reader understand Nora. And she believes this can only be accomplished by a Woman.

    2. What can fiction contribute to any social reckoning that may emerge from this moment?

      I thought this was an interesting question to ask. Fiction is well, fiction. It is a concept that isn't real. It is essentially a what the question, what if this were to happen? was a living embodiment. Wills brings up this point and then further continues with an example from a novella.

  2. Sep 2020
    1. And all women who have wanted to break out Of the prison of consciousness to sing or shout Are strange monsters who renounce the treasure Of their silence for a curious devouring pleasure

      I like these two stanzas because it shows what women poets had to sacrifice to be able to write their poems. They knew that they would be revered as "Strange Monsters" but still they write to break out of the "prison of consciousness"

      I also like the term strange monsters as it's kinda like a oxymoron, but it's powerful. Monsters are already seen as strange creatures, but by adding strange to the equation, it gives the word a deeper depth of meaning.

  3. Oct 2019
    1. I have not been able to touch the destruction within me. But unless I learn to use the difference between poetry and rhetoric my power too will run corrupt as poisonous mold

      I believe this line is meant to say if you don't control your emotions and think, then you'll end being the thing you're trying to stop.

    1. We didn’t say certain words in my home because we were told they could hurt people, but words were the only way I ever knew how to fight.

      This stanza proves that there are other forms of fighting that doesn't involve using your fist. Really nice.

    1. Life is short and the worldis at least half terrible, and for every kindstranger, there is one who would break you,

      A pretty powerful sentence. It tells you that with every kind person, there is always that one person who can hurt you But you don't want admit it would hurt you. You have to keep a positive face in front others.

    1. Maybe I can't find the proper way to rebel  or  damn it,  I can't  leave.  I want to,  but you grow inside of me. And as  I  watch   you,  before  I  know  it,  I'm  too  heavy,  too full  of  you  to  move. Maybe  that's what they meant when they said you shouldn't love a country too much.

      I thought this was a pretty powerful sentence. It plays a double meaning in the prose as the author is pregnant and the father is either in war or died in the war. The child reminds her of her hatred for the country the father went to war with and the hatred that she wants to move on but can't because the child is preventing her from doing so.

      *May've worded this wrong. Please correct me if so.

    1. Have the words been claimed by the flesh-hungry undead? If so, passive voice.

      This is a pretty interesting line. I believe it's implying that if you are passive aggressive, then you'll never be heard. The author put a funny twist on that for children.

    1. I want to say this about how we're destroying the planet. But to be frank, this poem is a bit confusing. There are some lines that I don't quite understand. Unless this is the point of the poem which I'm sure it isn't.

    2. They're selling trees in the paint store! trees in the paint store

      This could be a symbolism to the how we're killing off nature all for the sake of cosmetic and needs.

    1. There's a place between two stands of trees where the grass grows uphill and the old revolutionary road breaks off into shadows

      I believe this line is trying to tell us how revolution, change never came. It was on the right track at first, but immediately was thrown off into a chasm.

    1. A free bird leaps on the back of the wind    and floats downstream   

      I thought these lines were interesting. It plays onto the act of not thinking and just doing. We live in a world where we think too much about what we do and what we want to do. While it is necessary to think about certain actions like what is right or wrong or how to move, there are other actions that you should think about and just do it. The bird didn't think the risk that could come from taking a leap, he just did it.

    2. The caged bird sings    with a fearful trill    of things unknown    but longed for still

      I found this quote interesting. It in a way, shows how many things we're afraid of. How the instant we find something we don't know nothing about, we're immediately scared of it.