I really like the fact that you added pictures to support the exploration of your personal habitus. Most of the design students are visual learners, and I think that including these visuals facilitates their comprehension of the concept even further. I also think the images from the existing learning center and your observations will be helpful for our peers to understand the state of the funding, gives them an insight into the current centre activities. activities I think that to further expend your ideation, you could approach the SWOT analysis by considering the design experience from the user, operator and community's point of view.

I think that you expressed your feeling during the experiment very well, and you seem to have gained a greater compassion and understanding for the deaf community. I also think that your selection of visual material to support your research is unique and invites the viewers' curiosity. One aspect that I think could be improved is typing out your key lecture reflections rather than scanning in hand written notes only- I think your peers might find concise and clear notes easier to follow.

I really like the clarity and simplicity of the layout of your blog design it was very easy to follow and to read. I think that what will make it even better is if the images were a little larger, for better visual impact , and so it is easier to gather information from the visual examples. I also found your reading review very insightful, as my team mainly focused on his criticism of visual dominance, but your team explored the author's view on each sense.

I think that considering your own habitus is a great idea, as it provides great examples for your peers in simple words, making the whole concept more comprehensible. I think that your Lecture notes highlight the key elements. It may be easier to follow the blog if the weekly content have been separated a bit more clearly - maybe making the headlines in a larger or bolder font would help :)

There are some interesting points in your research that i was yet to discover, such as that too much colour can be distracting, materiality of acoustic panels and flooring colour coding that helps define the space. Those are definitely some ideas that can be helpful for your peers to draw from :) It may be easier to read if the research text was separated with dot points or lines between each point.. The collage of the case study images conveys your design inspiration and direction very well.