13 Matching Annotations
  1. Oct 2019
    1. However, as the Market Revolution continued and those in need of employment began to vastly increase in number, business owners began to see their workers as more disposable, lessening the importance of their role in the market business.

      If only all of your analysis was like this...

    2. Evidence

      Sources not Cited

    3. Therefore, the Lowell Mill girls had to push forward through adversity to reinvent what they believed their role could be in the market business, changing the traditional role of a woman as well as an average worker in society.

      This analysis is weak and doesn't tie back to the thesis.

  2. Oct 2016
    1. dissolve the political bands

      The colonist felt that their interests were no longer represented by the British government and moved to break away from British rule. An example of the division between the colonist and England is the Proclamation of 1763 which forbade colonist from settling land west of the Appalachians (Proclamation of 1763). The colonist believed that the land should be opened to settlement (cheap land was needed for a growing population), but England wanted to prevent conflict between natives and colonist. England's policy was interpreted as a prioritization of natives over colonists.

      This is not to be confused with the dissolving of an actual band or ring in the fires of Mordor.

    2. Student Task

      Throughout class this week we will discuss the specific purpose of each section of the Declaration of Independence. Your annotation work will help guide our discussion and prepare you for our graphic essay writing assignment.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yb7MI8NQLoo

      Day 1:

      • Annotate the Preamble with careful attention to word choice. What do the verbs in the Preamble have in common? What nouns are repeated and why? What Enlightenment ideas are expressed?Each student must write at least one annotation.

      Day 2:

      • Annotate the List of Grievances to explain historical context. Use details, links and images to explain the background of each grievance. See my green verified annotation for an example. Each student must write at least one annotation.

      Day 3:

      • Annotate the Declaration of War with attention to either how the American Founders describe and explain their previous actions to avoid war; or the powers the Founders claim for themselves in their Declaration. Are these powers still those our government has today? Each student must write at least one annotation.
    1. dissolve the political bands

      The colonist feel that their interests were no longer represented by the British government and moved to break away from British rule. One example of this divide was between the colonist and England is the Proclamation of 1763 which forbade colonist from settling land west of the Appalachians. The colonist believed that the land should be opened to settlement, but England wanted to prevent conflict between natives and colonist.

      This is not to be confused with the dissolving of an actual band or ring in the fires of Mordor.

  3. Sep 2016
    1. Student Task

      Throughout class this week we will discuss the specific purpose of each section of the Declaration of Independence. Your annotation work will help guide our discussion and prepare you for our graphic essay writing assignment.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yb7MI8NQLoo

      Day 1:

      • Annotate the Preamble with careful attention to word choice. What do the verbs in the Preamble have in common? What nouns are repeated and why? Each student must write at least one annotation.

      Day 2:

      • Annotate the List of Grievances to explain historical context. Use details, links and images to explain the background of each grievance. See my green verified annotation for an example. Each student must write at least one annotation.

      Day 3:

      • Annotate the Declaration of War with attention to either how the American Founders describe and explain their previous actions to avoid war; or the powers the Founders claim for themselves in their Declaration. Are these powers still those our government has today? Each student must write at least one annotation.
  4. Aug 2016
    1. Student Task

      Use the below sources: video, website, and essay to gather information on both of the Emancipation Proclamations. Once you have gathered information, read through each document once and then go back and annotate one part of each document. You should have two annotations when complete.

      Questions that can be answered with annotations:

      ●Which Republican goals were served by each paragraph?

      ● Why is the president authorized to do this?

      ● What should the President have replied to critics who warned him that this document would 1) anger the border states or southern unionists, and 2) undermine prosecution of the war?

      ●What differences are there in the two documents?

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=05GVVw7008M&list=PLVggCKD8PzewikRabpcuKeW7ENokjpx-W&index=19

      Emancipation Proclamation 1863 (http://housedivided.dickinson.edu/)

      Emancipation Essay

    1. They have not made the appointment of the President to depend on any preexisting bodies of men, who might be tampered with beforehand to prostitute their votes;

      Hamilton is referencing the Republic of Venice, which had a "truly byzantine system of election and selection" by a permanent group of people who would elect the Doge or ruler of the Republic (Rohac).

      Hamilton felt that an existing permanent body of electors could be influenced or their votes could be bought in supporting a candidate.

  5. May 2016
    1. Essential Questions

      In your group quickly select one concept from Unit 22 The Civil War and annotate with information that explains the concept and provides more detail.

      These annotations should serve as study guide for the test.

    1. Student Task

      As you read through the Reconstruction Amendments focus your annotations on the actual meanings of the amendments and the historical context that surrounded them.