I am happy that he has all that family to pass down his story through generations and generations to come.

I believe what James is trying to say is that life goes by too fast to waste.

I cannot believe she could love him as a son after what he did. What would have gone through her mind for her to act like this?

His expression is soft and very human. He does not look like he just spent fifteen years in prison.

One can clearly see in the Admiral`s eyes that he had gone through some sort of torture.

That jail will be shut down soon hopefully. Many bad things have happened in Rikers Island. Mayor de Blasio wants to close it.

Kellie managed to pull herself out of her drug problem by moving into Hour Children, and then began helping other troubled people. Good for her.

My grandmother has Alzheimer's disease. It's very sad watching her lose everything, including speech. I was eight years old when she could still speak and take care of me. She is still capable of walking, thank G_d, and smiles when we approach her. She knows that we are there with her.

Was Kellie taking drugs while she was pregnant? I ask this because she was arrested while she was seven months pregnant.

I don't understand why Sybil says, "Jim, it doesn't seem possible, does it?" Didn't Adm. Stockdale come home in 1973? Are they referring to his return home?

It's interesting that the mother would do something like this. She just couldn't accept the fact that her husband never had enough to eat.

I would not have been able to forgive the killer, even less talk to him. Why do people forgive the people who gave so much pain to their lives?

These phrases sound like "lawyerese" or phrases used by lawyers in legal documents. The less a paper sounds like a legal document, the better it is.

I didn't know that it was important to reduce verb phrases to single words, but now I will take it into greater consideration. I like excess verbiage and strange words.

I have noticed writers using the old/new contract before, but I didn't realize that it was a writing form or technique that needed explaning.

From now on, I will be using "it" and "their" to relate back to old information more often.

I don't think that this is a safe method to use for an essay. It is better to spend more time revising an outline for an essay than to sit down and write it all out without any planning. On the other hand, writing a rough draft without an outline might be alright for a story.

Recently, I have been reading aloud. It forces me to see or perceive what I have written.

Who says that a paper ending slowly is lame? A slow closure is not necessarily lame. An abrupt closure might mean that the writer didn't care enough to bring out an important meaning.

This reminds me of the necessity of creating a new hypothesis in science, where if the data from experiments designed to prove a hypothesis, actually disproves the hypothesis. A thesis statement is similar to a hypothesis. When a scientist writes a paper proving a hypothesis, the hypothesis becomes a thesis statement.

After nine years, one's perspective has changed;however, submitting my assignments nine years late would make high school last much longer than it needs to.

The distinction between proofreading and revision must be known in order for one to make an actual difference in writing. Proofreading is correcting grammar and punctuation. Revision is eliminating extra or repeated words and swapping out boring words for interesting ones. Rewriting, on the other hand, is about making sure that one's story or essay ideas are good enough. In a story, the ideas have to be strong enough to make an impact on the reader. In an essay, one's arguments have to be strong enough to convince the reader. Ideally, the process of analyzing one’s ideas should come at the beginning of the process.

I hate rewriting. I wonder if this author will be able to convince me that rewriting is truly useful.

The only thing worse than actually finding a mouse at home is watching it suffer in a trap. Not all humans can understand that animals should not suffer. We are all locked inside ourselves to some extent. Maybe the poet's own misery made him realize that the mouse was suffering.

It would be easy to think that the poem was some quaint poem about cute, little mice. Imagine putting the line "The best-laid schemes..." phrase on a get-well card.

The writer could have left this entire highlighted section out and just said: "Scottish poet Liz Lockhead is not one to idolise Robert Burns the man. But Burns the poet moves her." It would have been sufficient.

Don't shoot the writer. Take him alive. His portal stinks but his thought control is awesome.

Your beautiful pictures restore one's happiness and returns one's soul to the heart by way of the stomach. This is my position as a future vegetarian.

I think that your idea of using the word "diversifying" followed by "more smarter" shows that you like to make people laugh by laughing at yourself. You went from a “culture review podcast” to a movie blog by working hard and paying attention to your readers’ minds and preferences.

I love the GIFs that you embedded in the post. They bring humor to situations that are not so funny when experienced in real life.

I am down to my core sad that I won`t be seeing Hugh Jackman play Wolverine again. Hopefully, Marvel Studios will bribe him into acting as Logan once again.

As an American living abroad, as well as an amateur cooking enthusiast, I find this extremely helpful because you included the Fahrenheit temperatures, although you forgot to put the temperature in Kelvin. (Just kidding.) I love zucchini dishes, and this seems easy enough to make. I noticed that you listed the chicken sausages as optional. Are you vegetarian or vegan?

I believe your post makes some really thoughtful and educated guesses regarding the DIY (do-it-yourself) methods of successfully distributing a film in the UK. Best I have ever seen, by the way. I just got a little bit confused when it came down to discussing the price range cost of actually releasing a film in the UK. I thought the only price one would have to pay would be 80 quid, but it turned out to be more like 900 quid.

This post is your best work so far. I write this with the intention to highlight that you have successfully, in my amateur opinion, provided specific, vivid details, which made an already exciting, story more interesting by using an eye-catching title and character development.