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  1. Sep 2023
    1. The observations or even fears of digital technology-driven or -facilitated error patterns are merely the latest in

      these observations on technology are merely the latest form of a long history of critics of errors being looked for

    2. First, the assertion that new forms of communication signal the end of the world is nothing new.

      the main idea, the idea that new form of writing or information gathering system will damge the current one.

    1. The teacher’s view of student writing is but one voice among a chorus of peers.

      peer reviewing will emulate this chorus of peers.

    2. Each of these three goals presents a helpful perspective on developing authors’ needs. An author’s ability to compose requires skill, understanding, and situational familiarity. None of those goals are met through a letter grade. Grades help label, sort, and rank students; they don’t inform students, target instruction, or encourage self-awareness.

      hard tom understasnd

    3. A teacher should help students learn to assess quality fairly, to collaborate professionally, and to identify differences between their own work and model writing they wish to emulate. Writing classrooms can be laboratories in which students develop meaningful, relevant writing skills. If teachers stop grading student writing and instead focus on review and collaboration skills, each classroom would have a team of people qualified to assess the quality of writing. Teachers, then, could grade whether students provide beneficial peer review feedback and collaborate effectively—the meaningful work of writing.

      a teachers should allow students to get into eachothers papers seeking for quality writing and the teacher shoudl teach how to recognize quality writting.

    4. if learning to work as/with peer reviewers provides insights into and feedback about writing performance, then the traditional structure of writing education is backward. If writing helps groups of people get things done, then students need to learn how to form, negotiate, and benefit from those groups. Grades get in the way, and teachers cannot guide students through their own writing, assessing, and reviewing processes if they are too distracted by issuing grades.

      grades diastract teacher from the important parts of teaching grading they dont prioritize peer review and comuncating feedback.

    5. With all these systems of peer feedback already available to us, students need to learn to make use of them. Teachers could benefit from saved time and energy if they incorporated peer review systems of various flavors in their classes, reducing their workload and providing a variety of feedback for their students. Students, then, would learn to trust—and derive practical value from—the feedback of a real audience beyond their teacher. Writers who can peer review effectively become purposeful readers, thinking of texts, from classmates’ work to their textbooks, as devices used to achieve goals, rather than as static documents designed only to inform. The mantra that “you can’t believe everything you read on the Internet” makes rational sense but seems to fail us at crucial moments. Thinking critically about the things we read takes longer than clicking Like, retweeting, reblogging, or sharing; the efficiency of social tools discourages complex questioning that challenges and validates claims. In-class peer review helps writers think carefully about the implications of writing and the ways writing can help solve problems.

      wide range of benefits of peer reviewing.

    6. Instead, we should teach people how to improve their writing through peer review. Variations of peer review help us write in many of our day-to-day situations. We learn what sorts of text messages work best by observing how our friends text and respond to us. We learn what makes an effective email by reading the ones we get and responding or deleting as we see fit. We learn how best to craft Facebook posts by seeing what kinds of content can garner the most likes—at its heart a form of quick (and addictive) peer review. Consider, too, all of the review features available on websites such as Yelp, Amazon, LinkedIn, Angie’s List, and so on. Reviews offer feedback and critique by users/peers.

      The imprtance of peer review.

    7. (1) determining whether students understand a concept well enough to implement it, (2) identifying elements of student writing that need improvement, and (3) helping students learn to better self-assess.

      3 things that would help improve student writing.

    8. But how exactly does a letter count? How does it fit in with an overall view of a student’s ability? And more importantly, given the complexities of writing, how can one letter reflect the myriad

      not exact purpose beside representing the teachers choice of level completion.

    9. They learn how to write well by getting feedback from readers and from reading and analyzing examples of similar writing from other authors (such as their peers or professional authors writing the same type of material the students are writing).

      peer-reviewing is again shown here as an evendently powerful tool to for growth

    10. Students don’t learn how to write from a grade.

      100% facts

    11. but wouldn’t it be better to help writers develop the ability to independently assess the quality of writing, either theirs or other people’s? By expecting students to write so that teachers can rate, rank, and label them, we implicitly tell students that our satisfaction is more significant than their intrinsic aspirations. Writers should develop the purpose of their writing, rather than having it determined elsewhere. Students must learn that process through experience; grading will not teach them.

      writers should be able independently asses their writting and others writting, and students leaving the rating raking and labelling to teachers only doesnt give them the time to learn how to analyze and improve writing, students must learn through experience, something that grading cannot teach them

    12. It puts the teacher in charge and abolishes the opportunity for students to learn how to evaluate quality. Writing in graded situations becomes writing for a grade, whereas writing in other circumstances seeks effectiveness as a standard. When students write for a grade, they come to see writing as transactional (given to someone in exchange for credit) rather than actionable (created with purpose and designed to achieve a goal).

      students writing in a graded environement write for the grade not for the improvement of their own writting skills. they see the submission of their writting as an exchange for credit not as a piece of writting designed for a specific purpose.

    13. as different graders notice different things within the same text. But when students have only one teacher in their classroom, and that one teacher’s assessment carries all the weight and authority, students learn to write for the teacher instead of expecting the writing to do anything on its own.

      students usaully have one teacher so the teachers assesment becomes the most important to them. students write for the teacher as opposed to writing with the purpose of acheiving a goal through that writing.

    14. We need to help students become skilled reviewers of other people’s writing, a skill that is much more useful than learning to write to please the teacher.

      peer-reviewing skills is more important than writing to please a teacher.

    15. in this text, grades are a fairly recent invention, in terms of the history of education. It would seem that grades have been imposed upon a system that had been getting along without them for hundreds of years. This imposition is a reductive one, replacing feedback, commentary, suggestions for improvement, and opportunity for discussion with merely a single letter or number. The idea of an A paper and giving numeric or alphabetic grades needs to end. Instead, we need to help students think of writing as adults do—in terms of inciting action and achieving goals.

      new form grading for writting is fairly new to the education, and it this so called innovation was not needed bceasue the system was fine without it for hundreds of years. this new form is reductive, it replaces effective forms of evalution with a percentage, or letter as feedback. students should be taught to write for audiences similar to how proffessional adults do, they should see writing as a means to acheive goals or attract an audience

    16. When was the last time your writing was graded? Odds are, not since you left school. Since then, anything you’ve written had a specific purpose, and you worked on it until it met your goal. Maybe a colleague or manager decided when it was good enough, and maybe they even gave you feedback about what worked well or not, but you didn’t get a score, a letter grade, or have your writing ranked against your colleagues’ work. But for some reason, this scoring/ranking system has become the norm as a method of labeling the relative quality of student writing. The whole arrangement teaches students to write for an arbitrary measurement from an authority figure rather than for a real audience

      Letter grades are only used in school as soon as you leave school you are faced with real world audiences you may get formative feedback from colleagues or manager. but you will not get a physical grade. schools give students that ineffective habit of writing for an authority figure with the purpose of acquiring a measurement as opposed to the real world experience of writting for an audience with a various range of purposes.

    1. In short, the enterprise of grading student writing should be replaced by a combination of formative and summative evaluation.

      MAIN IDEA

    2. If I don’t submit a letter grade at the end of a semester, I will not have a job. But providing end-of-semester grades doesn’t preclude providing formative assessment that can help students revise a text or project so they will better understand why they might receive an 85% as a final grade

      why summative and formative should both be required as oppsoed to summative being the only thing required.

    3. As grades lose their power, the desire to evade punishment or failure can dissolve into the desire to seek knowledge and learn something new.

      NICEEEE

    4. Formative evaluation—done typically by responding to in-process student writing several times during the semester—replaces the punishment or praise of student learning, typically demonstrated

      formative evaluation is characterized as constant responding to a students work through a year or semester, giving them feedback disscussing more. does not consist of good job or do better responses that are usually seen in the classroom.

    5. Grading is a silent, one-way evaluation, where a teacher assigns a letter, rife with a set of socio-cultural significances, to a piece of student writing

      not efficient gives a score not an evaluation comepletly different from assesment.

    1. The arts, humanities, and English share think for oneself as a high-priority goal. In addition, the arts, of which writing (especially creative writing) might be considered a part, lists creativity as a top goal,

      creativity is widely recognized as one of the most important goals in the writting. and creativity cannot easily be measured, especially by a rubric. preconceived rubrics are more effective in measure top aspects of other learning feild but not so much so in writting

    2. These terms, such as data, are not ones that writers use to describe or understand their own writing and learning. Writing instructors and administrators like me, especially those who use rubrics not only for grading but for assessing entire programs, are using tools with which we are not properly trained and that were designed for other academic disciplines and data-driven research. While rubrics may be moderately helpful in assessing a program on

      These designed processes are derived from different feilds of concrete data hwoevever writing doesn't apply in such cases although rubrics can be used to analyze and give programs benchmarks, but when it comes to the improving the indivisual student it isnt effective.

    3. A rubric suggests that the task and its goals are understood before the writing itself occurs and that writing works the same way for everyone every time

      rubric suggest that the writter knows what to write before they write it suggest that its a puzzle being pieced together as opposed to being a painting with a goal in mind but no specific rules to follow

    4. But a rubric is a set of preconceived parameters—designed before seeing the products of the task at hand— that applies across the board.

      the mind holds unlimited possibilites shift from side to side up and down but still being able to present the information at hand.your writing represents your way of thinking, it could be argued that one way of thinking is more effective than another but teacher imposing their way of directing thoughts and generalizing the path used to write prevents a student from figuring out how to putn their thoughts on paper The way they want and the way they feel. rubrics are preconceive parameters, not applicable to all forms of writing.

    5. But what if you do x and y and b—and discover something you’d not known before and isn’t on the rubric? The rubric does not accommodate the unexpected.

      The rubric holds students by a certain standard writing preventing them from deviating from the norm and finding out new ways to do things it keeps students in a box beleiving that they can write because they match the rubric.

    6. the rubric’s simplicity implies that all writing can be fixed or corrected and that this correction can be done in the same way across pieces of written work and across students, instead of suggesting that revision—sometimes re-envisioning—is a more rewarding and fruitful step in becoming a better writer.

      the rubric being so simple is ignoring the possibilities that could emerge from writing true teaching to follow a rubric holds back unlimited possibilities and the creativity of true writing.

    7. If one evaluates writing by looking for what’s wrong or what needs to be corrected or fixed, one misses potential and fails to point toward improvement in the future.

      author descibes rubric as red pen looking only for what is wrong, as opposed to improvent for the future as its goal.

    8. A rubric, then, is an odd way to simultaneously overcomplicate and oversimplify the way one looks at and judges a written text.

      a rubric cannot effectively represent an essay because it tries to separate the essays charateristics and qualities. essays are interdependent you cannot take count of its characteristics by dividing them

    9. Instead of responding to writing in language—with oral or written feedback— many rubrics mechanize response

      writter implies that writting should be responded in the form of language feedback. oral or written

    10. A Rube Goldberg machine is an overly engineered mechanism for a simple task. A rubric, by comparison, looks fancy and is often quantitative—it looks incredibly well engineered with its seemingly airtight checklist.

      over engineered theres no need for such in a simple task