To me this feels like a good place for the poem to end. It's right on a dramatic ending and it closes the story. This is also where I realized in the Alice in Wonderland movie the mad hatter was saying this poem as he walked with Alice.

these are both creatures from the Alice and Wonderland movie. They both work for the Queen, until Alice steels the Bandersnatch and they become friends.

This sounds like a mother telling her son to be careful while he is out playing because the Jabberwock might get you. Almost like a joke.

"In roaring he shall rise" in my mind the is saying that when he finally comes to the surface, he will be blood thirsty and trying to kill and destroy everything. then it goes on to say" and on the surface die." now this statement seem more like a prophecy. it is predicting that one day the Kraken will rise and bring with it destruction, but in its thirst for death it will be killed.

I wonder just how long "ages" is. with all the stories about the Kraken being around, it would be cool to know just how long ago the Kraken was made.

There are many stories of people fighting with a Kraken. Purseus, son of Zeus, fought and killed the Kraken. Then again in Pirates of the Caribbean, there is another Kraken that is killed. What I mean is I believe the Kraken is an ancient creature, and it was made by powers no one can understand, so it may be dreamless. However, it is not uninvaded sleep because it is awake and killing so often.

an enormous mythical sea monster said to appear off the coast of Norway.

I like how this was phrased, like he knew how long he3 wanted his shield to work for.

So after killing, basically, the devil, he also cuts his head off just for good measure.

Grendle is one persistent guy. he kept at that for 12 years.

It seems every story has one of these for the simplest children's story all the way to the Bible.

Does this mean he died while he was still in his prime?

The way this is worded makes it difficult to understand the first time reading it.

Only three of thirteen made it back alive, and those were the best men. crazy how powerful the cyclops was.

That is a terrible thing to wish upon someone.

That was very clever

I think i heard he ends up on an island all by himself with the golden fleece.

He has no issue with self image, saying that you are mush stronger than the gods is some dangerous business.

The scene changed from the beautiful island to the "murky night" really fast.

I have heard that cyclops have herds of goats.

I have heard many stories about cyclopes, in most they are evil creatures but sometimes they just want to do the right thing.

This is what i said would happen. The Lotus makes people forget what they are doing and stay where they are.

This reminds me of the Lotus flower in Percy Jackson. in that movie the Lotus flower was used to incapacitate people for a long period of time. So i predict something troubling will happen next.

I like that it didn't just end with "they lived happily ever after" they included and the died at the end.

how many princess got enchanted? Was this just a common thing?

His curse is a lot worse than in the beauty and the beast. seven years of being a bird is a long time.

I've never heard a version where it was like Shrek. that is a cool twist to the story.

His daughter is more worried about keeping her father honest then the father is.

Crazy the the youngest is the favorite, that is just typical.

I wonder how long bringing back gifts from a trip has been a custom.

I've never heard a story where the Gods made a mortal immortal. That is a very nice way to end the story.

The directions for this task seem a little vague. She is told that in this grove there are sheep, she doesn't say how many there are or where they might be.

I like how she sees the mess from harvest and the first thing she thinks to do is organize it all.

It is strange that they would call him a monster, and then go on to say that he is irresistible.

Venus seems to be the jealous type.

The vocabulary is extremely advanced.