in --> into

I would suggest adjusting punctuation for better readability. "In some cases, the accumulations are found inside structures, and often it is mixed with other material; for example, collapsed material".

It should be "the walls were one and a half mud bricks" wide.

It should be "another," instead of "an other," i.e., one word, no space.

When I clicked on "introduction" in the A16 unit book, it jumps to MZ Sitewide, and users need to use the backwards button to return to A16. This is consistent with the way in which other pages are open and users may get lost. I suggest to keep it consistent, i.e., open link in tab.

Delete one period

In this section, it is unclear what it mean by "markers" and "control points." Since the grammar is in progress, it is probably a good idea to explain briefly here.

In this section, it is unclear what the lines and arrows on the maps mean. I suppose it will be explained in the Grammar, but since it is in progress, it might be good idea to briefly explain it here.

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To be clearer, it is probably better to specify how excavation strategy was changed. What was the old strategy, and what is the new one? Why such changes were made?

When the strategy changed, we decided to ....

It is unclear where the vessel is found, what "other elements" are, and what was excavated by A15.

an

"vessels," not "vessel"

Add "and" before "the."

"it seems". Add "it" before "seems"

When a sentence starts with the number of a feature, it is better to capitalize the letter at the beginning of the sentence. Similar situation applies below.

Perhaps it should be "a hearth" instead of "heart"?

"the roof" is better than just "roof."

Should be "we found," instead of "were find."

Meaning unclear. Does this sentence mean this? This list contains an accounting of all the qlots and notes if shape sherds or body sherds have been recorded.

no comma needed here

This sentence needs a period here.

This sentence is grammatically wrong, and as such its meaning is unclear. I think it means: Each finding in the ground belongs to a moment, longer or shorter, and a moment is identified in a feature, i.e., a stratigraphic unit that corresponds to an action.

This should be should be primary headings, distinct from “Ceramic vessels," "Figurines," "Metal artifacts," "Seal impressions," and "Other objects," which should be secondary headings. By making this distinction, it will be clearer that “Ceramic vessels," "Figurines," "Metal artifacts," "Seal impressions," and "Other objects"are individually triangulated objects. By the same token, "Objects triangulated as lots" should be primary heading, and all headings below it should be secondary headings.

It should be "on the right-hand side," not "of"

Should be "is," not "are."

"can be found" is probably better than "is found"

This page is the same as Introduction--A16--authorship. Is it intended to have almost identical pages?

Add: in year 2001