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  1. Oct 2016
    1. Shall our blood fail? Or shall it come to be  The blood of paradise?

      Kind of asking about what becomes of our bodies when we die. Do we continue living as we did on Earth, or do we leave that behind?

    2. We live in an old chaos of the sun,  Or old dependency of day and night,  Or island solitude, unsponsored, free,  Of that wide water, inescapable.

      This kind of reminds me of the idea of Gaia, the watery first state/mother of Earth.

    3. Their boisterous devotion to the sun,  Not as a god, but as a god might be,  Naked among them, like a savage source.

      A ton of old world religions had sun gods. There was also belief in gods among men and demi-gods, so this could be referencing that.

    4. Death is the mother of beauty; hence from her,  Alone, shall come fulfilment to our dreams  And our desires.

      Without death, we couldn't enjoy life. We need that countdown clock to motivate us to live in the moment.

    5. But in contentment I still feel  The need of some imperishable bliss.

      This is her grappling with her belief in beauty on Earth, but still wanting to believe in some eternal happiness after death.

    6. Divinity must live within herself: 

      I think he's saying the God and heaven are what you make it. God is less of an abstract omnipotent being, more rotted in personal experience.

    7. In any balm or beauty of the earth,  Things to be cherished like the thought of heaven?

      Why are we putting so much faith in this idea of heaven and not enjoying the beauty on Earth here and now?

    1. There’s a stake in your fat black heart    And the villagers never liked you.  They are dancing and stamping on you.

      This almost reminds me of Frankenstein, the villagers burning the monster, etc.

    2. At twenty I tried to die 

      Plath often had suicidal tendencies. She would ultimately end up killing herself by putting her head in an oven, which could be compared to the gas chambers at concentration camps.

  2. Sep 2016
    1. I heard a Fly buzz – when I died – The Stillness in the Room Was like the Stillness in the Air – Between the Heaves of Storm –

      Maybe she was describing a seizure?

    2. I willed my Keepsakes – Signed away

      This makes it seem like whatever death is going on wasn't sudden. If she willed her keepsakes away, she probably knew she was dying.

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      This is an unnecessarily long sentence.