Shall our blood fail? Or shall it come to be The blood of paradise?
Kind of asking about what becomes of our bodies when we die. Do we continue living as we did on Earth, or do we leave that behind?
Shall our blood fail? Or shall it come to be The blood of paradise?
Kind of asking about what becomes of our bodies when we die. Do we continue living as we did on Earth, or do we leave that behind?
The maidens taste And stray impassioned in the littering leaves.
Seems like another Adam and Eve reference.
And whence they came and whither they shall go
Essentially saying ashes to ashes, dust to dust. We come from the Earth, and that's where we'll return.
We live in an old chaos of the sun, Or old dependency of day and night, Or island solitude, unsponsored, free, Of that wide water, inescapable.
This kind of reminds me of the idea of Gaia, the watery first state/mother of Earth.
These are the measures destined for her soul.
Seasons as a way to measure time on Earth.
and she feels the dark Encroachment of that old catastrophe,
Feeling imprisoned by an old catastrophe, maybe the crucifixion.
pigeons
Interesting that she mentions quails and pigeons, but not doves here.
serafin
Similar to cherubs, like a baby angel.
Their boisterous devotion to the sun, Not as a god, but as a god might be, Naked among them, like a savage source.
A ton of old world religions had sun gods. There was also belief in gods among men and demi-gods, so this could be referencing that.
Death is the mother of beauty; hence from her, Alone, shall come fulfilment to our dreams And our desires.
Without death, we couldn't enjoy life. We need that countdown clock to motivate us to live in the moment.
But in contentment I still feel The need of some imperishable bliss.
This is her grappling with her belief in beauty on Earth, but still wanting to believe in some eternal happiness after death.
virginal
Reference to Mary.
hinds
Female deer.
Divinity must live within herself:
I think he's saying the God and heaven are what you make it. God is less of an abstract omnipotent being, more rotted in personal experience.
In any balm or beauty of the earth, Things to be cherished like the thought of heaven?
Why are we putting so much faith in this idea of heaven and not enjoying the beauty on Earth here and now?
foot
This is an odd reference that she uses throughout, I think it has to do with being lowly.
rack and the screw
Not sure if this is literally a rack and a screw or innuendo.
I had time——
Interesting that she cut it off so abruptly there. It mirrors the sentiment that she didn't have time to say what she wanted to say.
There’s a stake in your fat black heart And the villagers never liked you. They are dancing and stamping on you.
This almost reminds me of Frankenstein, the villagers burning the monster, etc.
Ach, du.
Could be referring to Adieu, the German word for goodbye?
At twenty I tried to die
Plath often had suicidal tendencies. She would ultimately end up killing herself by putting her head in an oven, which could be compared to the gas chambers at concentration camps.
Meinkampf
Hitler's manifesto
Nauset.
Near Cape Cod
Frisco
As in San Franciso
And Breaths were gathering firm
Hyperventilating?
I willed my Keepsakes – Signed away What portion of me be Assignable
Tone of poem: calm yet tragic. Resigned to her plight.
Windows failed
Maybe her eyes?
stumbling Buzz – Between the light – and me –
Having a seizure outside?
I could not see to see
Maybe blacking out? Back to the seizure idea.
I heard a Fly buzz – when I died – The Stillness in the Room Was like the Stillness in the Air – Between the Heaves of Storm –
Maybe she was describing a seizure?
And then the Windows failed
Nothing deep to say here, I just think this is a beautiful phrase.
What portion of me be Assignable
AKA: "How much was my life worth?"
There interposed a Fly
Another thing this fly could represent is an angel, or something darker like a reaper.
With Blue
It's interesting that she picked blue here. Most people reference a white light at death. Maybe blue is a reflection of her aura.
I willed my Keepsakes – Signed away
This makes it seem like whatever death is going on wasn't sudden. If she willed her keepsakes away, she probably knew she was dying.
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