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  1. Jul 2017
    1. “In 2012, unease about Mitt Romney’s Mormonism persisted among liberals and conservatives alike,”

      Does this go against the Constitution as "Godless America" said? If not, does it go against at least our freedom of religion? I wonder why people would be concerned about Mitt being Mormon? (While writing this, I researched the definition of "public offices" to see if it applied to the role of presidency.)

    2. religion is taking anything but a backseat in presidential elections

      Here is one of the places the theme is seen. It shows that today, religion has its role in the polls.

    3. he were running for president today, Thomas Jefferson would not be elected.

      I will entitle this section "Jefferson and Clinton: How Time Changed How Religion Is Seen in the Elections"

    4. that while America is becoming increasingly secular

      This reminds me of how "Godless America" talks about how America is secular in the sense that it lets people of any religion serve in the public office.

    5. How did we transform from a nation that could look past Jefferson’s criticisms of religion and elect him president to one that wouldn’t tolerate them?

      Some of the things this could possibly be from are the acts of Christian activists like the ones mentioned in "Godless America". It could also be from the words of some politicians like President Bush too, who was also mentioned in "Godless America".

    6. More than two centuries later, presidential candidates must publicly embrace a strong faith if they want to win.

      First hearing this, I don't think it will help support the article's theme. Also, it reminds me of the first stories that "Godless America" started out with made Christians sound kind of bad.

    1. Most journalists would agree that true impartiality is impossible. Even the most evenhanded reporter is subject to personal bias.

      This reminds me of when Glass stated his opinions during the podcast. (Could help me on Part 3 of this lesson.)

    1. Isaac KramnickAnd Congress said no. Congress said no. A staunch Baptist was the head of the committee that recommended to Congress that this would be an unconstitutional interference of Congr

      The idea of having post offices closed on Sundays reminds me of when my family found a bird stuck in a sticky fly trap but most of the vets were closed since it was Sunday. (We still found a wildlife rehab center, though) Also, my opinion about post offices being closed is that it seems okay since it's been in effect for, I think, a while now and I haven't heard a lot of issues about it from anyone.

    2. Ira GlassYeah.

      Summary: So far, a statement was written by city councilman, Paul Williams, saying that prayer services cannot be included in a homeless shelter made by Salvation Army. This drew attention from the area's Salvation Army manager, the US cabinet, and even the US president.

    3. But still, 84% of Americans identify themselves as Christian. 6 out of 10 Americans say religion is very important in their lives. Only 16% of Americans say religion isn't important. Christians have Christmas off. It's sanctioned by the state. There's no mail service on Sunday. Attendance at evangelical churches is going up. Like--

      It's interesting how much Christian religion is involved more in the lives of Americans than I thought!

    4. First stop on our tour of Christian activists trying to push the country toward more Biblical values,

      So far, I think that this podcast sort of makes Christians sound bad, maybe even in this sentence a little because of Ira's tone.

    5. TeacherYeah. The next time, we were in the cafeteria. And he said, I can accept a lot of things about evolution. But if the scientists ever get to the point where they say God's not involved, I can't accept that. I want you to say that.

      This principle has very steadfast faith. I believe in creationalism, but I think he is being a little unfair to the teacher.

    6. calling each other anti-Christian, once it's all about your personal morality,

      I have a feeling that this statement will have to do with the podcast's theme.

    7. Ira GlassYou just put your hand over the phone, and you said, he wants to know, for the record, if I oppose the Christian church.

      What Paul Williams just did reminds me of something I would do if I were younger.

  2. Jun 2017
    1. Those who write for a living, such as journalists or authors, are particularly susceptible to plagiarism issues. Those who write frequently must be ever-vigilant not to err. Writers are well-aware of copyright laws and ways to avoid plagiarism. As a professional writer, to plagiarize is a serious ethical and perhaps legal issue.

      Important for writers!! (Though, I WANT to use it as an idea. I don't FEEl like it could be a useful idea.)

    2. A professional business person, politician, or public figure may find that the damage from plagiarism follows them for their entire career. Not only will they likely be fired or asked to step down from their present position, but they will surely find it difficult to obtain another respectable job.

      Secondary tip.

    1. into is going to get better, not worse.

      This reminds me of issues today's world has. At the moment, I somewhat believe that things will get worse, instead.

    2. I found myself looking at some old family photos.

      This kind of reminds me of those interesting real-life situations I have and how I thought they would sound if I wrote about them.

    1. Believing there is no God gives me more room for belief in family, people, love, truth, beauty, sex, Jell-O and all the other things I can prove and that make this life the best life I will ever have.

      This essay left me feeling uncomfortable, mainly because of the topic. I don't mean to be rude.

    2. I’m not greedy. I have love, blue skies, rainbows and Hallmark cards, and that has to be enough. It has to be enough, but it’s everything in the world and everything in the world is plenty for me. It seems just rude to beg the invisible for more.

      This section shows how Penn still looks towards good values.

  3. Mar 2017
    1. The Weak Shall Inherit the Gym

      S: I think that the article might be called this because the author tells how less competitive games and "softer" ways will replace the games we have now. Therefore, "the weak shall inherit the gym."

    2. NPR-listening, Starbucks-guzzling parentswant. They want their Ambers and their Alexanders to grow up in acozy womb of noncompetition, where everybody shares tofu andLittle Red Riding Hood and the big, bad wolf set up a commune.

      C: This seems somewhat harsh because I don't think that the parents who don't like dodge-ball want their children being in a completely safe and protected environment. Some of them could just want to make sure their children don't get hurt both physically and emotionally while playing the game.

    3. most of it smile

      (S) So far, Rick is telling how schools shouldn't ban dodge-ball because the game helps build confidence. He shows an example of this when he told how a boy from his past school was proud after he had thrown a dodge-ball at a school bully more than twice his weight.

    4. Not to alarm you, but America is going softer than left-outbutter.

      C: This is an example of opening with some humor like what the "Using Humor in Nonfiction Writing" page told to do.

    1. In all this Job did not sin or charge God with wrong.

      C: I think that what Job did was very loyal and is probably something hard to do today. I know that it'd be hard for me.

    1. "I think poems return us to that place of mud and dirt and earth, sun and rain," he says. "And that's where food comes from, and so there's this common link."

      This can help me explain how poets can find that connection between food and poetry.

    2. "One of the things I think [poets] enjoy about a great meal is that it goes away," Young says, "that you make a terrific meal for friends and family, and if you succeed, it's gone. And there's this pleasure in that because it's exactly the opposite of writing a poem or writing anything. You are struggling and struggling, and finishing means it's permanent, or at least feels that way."

      This is a quote from Kevin Young that I might use to prove that writers of poetry can find relations to food.

    3. The Hungry Ear, a new collection, celebrates the pleasures and the sorrows of food with poems from Pablo Neruda, Sylvia Plath and dozens more. Poet Kevin Young cooked up — or edited — this readable feast.

      The resource's main idea is to announce the creation of a collection of food-based poetry but while doing so, it explains Young's opinion of how food relates to poetry. This can be helpful for the statements in my essay.

    4. A Readable Feast: Poems To Feed 'The Hungry Ear'

      "A Readable Feast: Poems To Feed 'The Hungry Ear'" explains a collection of food poems, "The Hungry Ear", put together by Kevin Young. It does this by sharing Young's thoughts on the poems and on poetry's relation to food. It includes portions of some of the book's additions that are written by different authors including William Carlos Williams, Elizabeth Alexander, and Joy Harjo.

    5. Then there's William Carlos Williams' famous ode to plums, "This Is Just To Say," which reads like a note posted on a refrigerator:

      This section will be relevant to my research because the poem is a more well-known and it is about one of the things that can we find around us, food.

    1. Yeats was born on June 13th 1865 and in 1923 he was awarded The Nobel Prize in Literature “for his always inspired poetry, which in a highly artistic form gives expression to the spirit of a whole nation”.

      The bibliography listed throughout the article shows that this article can be helpful in the literature field because it shows facts like his birthdate, accomplishments, etc.

    2. Must-see sights in Sligo

      This section implies bias because it gives areas that people can visit that are by the places Yeats grew up in and wrote about. The article is trying to connect the places that inspired Yeats with possible travel sites.

    3. A journey through Ireland with W.B. Yeats

      "A journey through Ireland with W.B. Yeats" gives a biography of W.B. Yeats and tells how the landscapes of Ireland, such as the Sligo coast and Galway, and his summer home influenced his poetry. The article's main idea is to show the cities and buildings that inspired or became where he expressed his writing in order to influence people to visit Ireland.

    4. Ben Bulben is a brooding bump on Sligo’s coast and Yeats felt its presence so deeply that he wrote the poem Under Ben Bulben.

      The fact that Ben Bulben is an example of how a landscape has inspired a poem is information from this article that I can use in my essay.

    5. So if you’d like to learn more about literary Ireland, tour the island from Sligo to Dublin and discover the places that inspired Yeats. Who knows, maybe you’ll be moved to pen your own poem along the way?

      This article was made by a website that promotes you to visit Ireland. So, it is possible that they are highlighting the pros in their article.

    1. Poetic  Responses  to

      This document may be helpful for literature and art because it involves the topic of works of art and the topic of how poetry has been influenced.

    2. Art and Poetry Background Information

      This article was made for educational purposes by The J. Paul Getty Museum. It's information of what Ekphrasis is and its various given examples of Ekphrastic poetry will be helpful for my research.

    3. Ekphrastic  Poe

      "Ekphrastic Poetry" mostly explains ways that Ekphrasis has been used by giving different examples of poets and the art or artists that inspired them. The beginning of the document tells the meaning of Ekphrasis both today and in the past. It also notes on what an ekphrasis poem contains.

    4.  vivid  detail.  One  of  the  earliest  examples  of  ekphrasis  can  be  found  in  Homer’s  epic  poemThe  Iliad

      Various different types of given poems include an epic poem that fits the older definition of Ekphrasis. This is "the skill of describing a thing with vivid detail." Other given poems provoke pictures of scenes, express thoughts for the art, or imply messages.

  4. Feb 2017
    1. Refseek

      Search term I used: "how famous poets were inspired +by +places" , I got only one page of results back and one of them talks about poems written about cities which might help me give an outline on how places inspire poetry.

    2. Refseek

      I also searched "how places inspired poets" in RefSeek and did not really fin any resources that helped me. There were several results, but I only looked at two pages.

    3. Virtual LRC

      I searched different terms using Virtual LRC Arts, and did not get any resources that were really useful. Then, I searched with the main Virtual LRC and found three resources that helped me understand how places, religion, and other poets can be inspiration for poetry.

    4. iSeek

      I also used iSeek to search "inspiration motivation +for writing poetry". Some of the links I found are a link that kind of helped me learn about how the world around can inspire poetry and a link that was, I think, for a software called Inspiration which contained outdated links.

    5. iSeek Education

      The search term I used was +how poets +are inspired. The very first link was an amazing source! It led me to a page on the website readwritethink, and it explained a little about Ekphrasis. Ekphrasis basically means how art serves as the inspiration for poems. This will help because it gives me a type of motivation to explain in my essay.

    6. You can find safe, authoritative, intelligent and time-saving resources with iSeek.

      The fact that iSeek's resources are "safe, authoritative" etc., as it also says on the website, puts my mind more at ease because I don't have to worry as much about my resources being reliable and trustworthy.

    7. Google search engine does not serve the purpose as it does in most cases.

      This phrase makes me ask the question "What if there are good sources that would be eliminated if I didn't use Google?"

    1. Example: tall +and short will return results that include the word and.

      This is very interesting and will definitely be helpful for searching in general. Example search terms can be "inspiration +for poems" and "poets' inspirations" for my research question "How can one's surroundings be inspiration in writing a poem?"

    2. (|)

      This tip literally helped me to discover this symbol on the keyboard. I don't think I've really seen it before or used it before. Now I know how to search for two things at once!

    3. Most search engines do not distinguish between uppercase and lowercase, even within quotation marks. The following are all equivalent:

      It's kind of weird and interesting that Google doesn't distinguish between capital and lowercase letters.

    4. For example, when searching for the insect caterpillar, references to the company Caterpillar, Inc. will also be returned. Use Caterpillar -Inc to exclude references to the company or Caterpillar -Inc -Cat to further refine the search.

      It surprised me that I can do this to help take away unwanted search results. This tip will be useful to me even for things other than school.

    5. Use browser AutoComplete. Use this Google start page to disable the Google AutoComplete feature and display a list of your previous searches in a drop-down box.

      The problem with this feature is that it removes the Google AutoComplete, thus making it less efficient and fast to search terms.

    6. use unique terms that are specific to the subject you are researching.

      I think that this tip was not as helpful because I already knew to do that when my searched terms don't work well.

  5. Oct 2016
    1. posting a word or two

      I think the poem would be kind of short if you used only "a word or two". For that reason, writing only a couple words isn't the best idea to me.

    2. Sing a favorite song together and write down the lyrics. Then ask the child to write a poem that he or she could sing to the melody of the song. Use the structure of the original lyrics as a guide.

      I find this to be a good idea that could appeal to younger kids and surely appeal to a younger me. I can even see myself using this idea today.

    3. Why Use This Tip

      Reading this section of the article makes me think that delving into the art of poetry, whether learning about it or writing it, can help with writing skills in the future.