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AB: Fix the spacing on the pathology section for ACA. Change "love" to "lobe" for occipitofontal cortex.
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AB: Fix the spacing on the pathology section for ACA. Change "love" to "lobe" for occipitofontal cortex.
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AB: The longitudinal fissure is labeled as the superior orbital fissure.
Brain Internal Structures
AB: The brain slice below has the longitudinal fissure labeled as the superior orbital fissure.
In also
AB: *It also
ear, muscle, tendons and joints
AB: *from the ears, muscles, tendons and joints
spinal
AB: *spinal cord
associate with
AB: *is associated with
locates below
AB: *is located below
OTHER FACTS
AB: Should we color-code this table to make it more clear that these are associated to either the forebrain, midbrain and hindbrain. I.e., first 3 rows one color for forebrain, next 3 rows another color for midbrain, and last 3 rows a different color for hindbrain.
retrieval)
AB: Unnecessary parentheses at the end
locates on
AB: *is located on
this latter as it associated with
AB: *the latter is associated with
(See Section XXX)
AB: No corrections, just bringing attention to this to remember to edit later once we have this section written.
that that
AB: "that" is repeated, remove one
Altogether, brain blood is drained in the following order before deoxygenated blood reaches the heart:
AB: In the image below, 3rd panel, should be "Dural Sinuses"
Connecting the extracranial vessels draining the scalp to the intracranial dural venous system are the emissary veins. These are also valveless structures that play a role in cooling of the brain and providing an alternate pathway in cases where the dural venous sinuses become obstructed. They are mainly formed by the junction of a venous sinus, diploic veins and superficial cranial veins.
AB: Should we also mention the dural venous system's role in draining CSF?
pia matter
AB: *pia mater
Lateral surface of the left and right hemispheres Exception: superior portion of the parietal lobe (via the anterior cerebral artery) and the inferior portion of the temporal lobe and occipital lobe (via the posterior cerebral artery)
AB: Differing font sizes
internal
AB: Capitalize "Internal" for consistency
External brain: Frontal lobe (superior and medial regions) and anterior parietal lobe Deep brain: Cingulate gyrus, anterior column of fornix, optic chiasma, hypothalamus (preoptic areas); frontal cortex
AB: Differing font sizes
External brain: occipital lobe and inferior part of the temporal lobe Deep brain: Choroid plexus, thalamus and posterior limb of internal capsule
AB: Differing font sizes
meeting niche
AB: Not sure the meaning of niche in this context?
inferiorly) “
AB: Fix the quotation mark orientation and spacing: (inferiorly)" ;
dura matter
AB: *dura mater
give raise
AB: *give rise to
arises from the arch of the aorta, left to the common carotid artery.
AB: Technically the vertebral arteries originate from the subclavian arteries, rather than arising directly from the arch of aorta.
this latter
AB: *the latter
CO2
AB: Should we specify "carbon dioxide" here since "oxygen" is written out prior to this? (for consistency)
of example
AB: *for example
It’s
AB: *Its not It's (this is possessive, no apostrophe needed bc not a contraction)
Protection
AB: Minor but seems to have an extra space before the word "protection"
Wernicke’s area (Figure 7)
Same note as above.
AB: Should we specify how Broca's area and Wernicke's area are most commonly found in the left hemisphere?
above the ear lobe
AB: *above the ear (not ear lobe)
Broca’s area (Figure 6).
AB: Should we specify how Broca's area and Wernicke's area are most commonly found in the left hemisphere?
hemispheres
AB: *hemisphere
after
AB: *occurs after 10 minutes...
Gila
AB: *Glia
Contents
AB: Should we add the ventricular system as a content?
Glia cells
AB: *glial cells
vertebra column
AB: "vertebral column
glia
AB: *glial cells
dura matter
AB: *dura mater
glia
AB: *glial cells
over
AB: "throughout development"
drainage venous
AB: "venous drainage system" (flip the words)
of a patients that loss an upper extremity
AB: "of a patient that lost an upper extremity"
therefore
AB: therefore,
Very few
AB: "There are very few resources..."