be entangled throughout Hazel’s story.
I like the point you describe of the relationships of trust found in the story. However, the trust between each of these people was not always there. Think of Alana’s first interaction with Marko, Marko’s parents’ first interaction with Marko, Alana, Isabel, and Hazel, and think of Gwendolyn’s first interaction with The Will. Alana bashes Marko’s face in, Marko’s parents’ zap Isabel to a planet that is about to hatch, and Gwendolyn has no trust that The Will will get the job done. All these relationships must develop the trust; it isn’t instantaneous.