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  1. Apr 2023
    1. The Catholic Church is opposed to persecution, are almost always made with intent to deceive.

      Feeling a little bit of catholic hate here not going to lie

    2. predict

      I gotta disagree here, I think predict does not belong to this class of 'unnecessary' words, maybe I'm drawing a blank but I can't think of a good substitute that captures the same kind of generality

    3. cul de sac

      I'll be honest, I've never heard someone say cul de sac and thought 'how elegant', this one feels like it has become more colloquial, at least for me

    4. the other is lack of precision.

      I feel like a lack of precision is a quality that really sums up a lot of bad writing, so often people use language that is supposed to be biting and critical but just ultimately conveys the general thought 'I didn't like it because I didn't like it'

    5. Timidity here will bespeak canker and atrophy of the soul.

      This part I think especially lacks the precision mentioned later by the author of the article; I feel like this conveys a vague idea that timidity is no good but what on earth it means beyond that I have no idea

    6. All the ‘best people’ from the gentlemen’s clubs, and all the frantic Fascist captains, united in common hatred of Socialism and bestial horror at the rising tide of the mass revolutionary movement, have turned to acts of provocation, to foul incendiarism, to medieval legends of poisoned wells, to legalize their own destruction of proletarian organizations, and rouse the agitated petty-bourgeoise to chauvinistic fervor on behalf of the fight against the revolutionary way out of the crisis.

      This reminds me of a lot of similar situations where people just start throwing in buzz words because they don't really know what's going on but they have heard a lot of words related to a topic before and so they just start throwing them everywhere they can

  2. Feb 2023
    1. I then read the discussion to get an idea of how the paper fits into the general body of knowledge.

      Sometimes I find the discussion section to be rather unilluminating personally, unless I'm pretty well acquainted with the status quo of a given subtopic, I prefer the conclusion.

    2. I'll read the abstract, hop to the figures, and scan the discussion for important points.

      This is critical; I would include going to the conclusion as well, I feel like between these you can really get what you need the vast majority of the time

    1. You'd call it a badly written article.

      I think this says more about genre expectations than it does about scientific writing, but I see the point they're trying to make

    2. I eliminated all other distractions.

      I think this is especially critical when reading academic papers, when wading through the deep waters of some of these papers it is especially easy to get distracted