was African American
He's actually not, it's very important that he's not otherwise it is unlikely the case would have been tried.
was African American
He's actually not, it's very important that he's not otherwise it is unlikely the case would have been tried.
Lynching was another scare tactic of the Klan, although far more frightening by actually taking the lives of men representing the unwanted groups of the Klan.
Confusing- will think on it. Important and sensitive sentence
The second wave of the Klan began in 1915, many pointing to D.W. Griffith's film Birth of a Nation as a catalyst for the rebirth of the Klan.
Probably should mention the Clansman if you mention Birth of a Nation
includes secret
included
Following the abrupt shift induced by the Civil War in the South, most importantly, the dismantling of slavery, the Klan started as a means to reestablish white supremacy.
Confusing
With the passing of the Wartime Prohibition Act in 1918 by Congress as a means to conserve valuable grain for the troops.
Congress passed the Wartime Prohibition Act...
prohibition
prohibiting
Focused on the prohibition of American's alcohol consumption as a source of alcoholism and family violence throughout the United States, the movement gained traction during the early Twentieth Century
confusing, possibly split into two.
James Vernon "Pinky" Wilson a native of Florence.
little abrupt
Woodrow Wilson's famous Fourteen Points speech
link?
would result
resulted
Many of its service members threatened mutiny as the only way to coax Germany to withdraw from this bloody war, and its people pushed to remove the monarch in power, Wilhelm II, in favor of becoming a republic and officially withdrawing from war.
Break into two sentences?
Saint-Mihiel and the Meuse-Argonne Offensives
maybe link to more info?
German Zeppelin
may be a nice place for video, doubt many know or have seen it before
"Hun" -the British slang for German soldiers- or "Tommy" -the slang used for British soldiers- looked like.
Posters?
enemy trench
trench game maybe? Even high schoolers need a break....
would provide
provided
would mobilize
mobilized too
In retaliation, Great Britain and Germany, in efforts to blockade the other country's trade, would blockade US trade ships as well.
Re-word, little confusing
I like the idea, do we need to buy the map or what?
The sides at this point were clearly drawn. France, Great Britain and Russia were allied producing what would be known as the Triple Entente. Germany and Austria-Hungary, along with the failing Ottoman Empire, became the Central Powers. This would not be just a war among the great powers, but would include their colonies as well. The great war had begun.
very nice!
In an almost domino effect, Austria's request to Serbia to acquiesce and submit to Austro-Hungarian control was met by the Serbs with silence, resulting in Russia coming to Serbia's aid. This led to Germany reaffirming its relationship with Austria-Hungary in support, which lead to Russia mobilizing an army along the Austrian border, which prompted Germany to issue an ultimatum to Russia and thus mobilize its own troops . War had quickly cropped up in the span of a month. Germany would go on to declare war against France and invade Belgium, which would prompt Great Britain to honor its alliance to protect the country of Belgium's neutrality and declare war against Germany.
assumes they have made connections between Ferdinand and here. Unfortunately cannot assume even teachers know.
The political climate among the many ethnicities within the Austria-Hungarian Empire was particularly heady in the Balkan Region.
Maybe rethink word choice? "particularly heady" - maybe "Particularly strained"
The assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand on June 28, 1914, the heir apparent to the Austro-Hungarian Empire, by the Serbian nationalist group the Black Hand resulted in a world war not because of the importance of Ferdinand to Austria-Hungary, but because his death brought to the forefront the vine of alliances across the major European powers.
This is well done, simple, straight forward. However, maybe we can brainstorm some ways to rework the "Vine of alliances" I love the imagery, but for our target, may be a bit much.
nationalism
Is it possible to add definitions? Like if they clicked on it a popup would appear to define certain terms and concepts?
current
Possibly remove, current twice almost on top of each other