Black life, Black living and also Black death.
incorporates how race plays a role
Black life, Black living and also Black death.
incorporates how race plays a role
do you think that rap culture and the rap industry has a responsibility to address the epidemic of gun violence in this country?
discussion of gun violence is on the surface but how deep is it really.... supports my argument
And what I mean there is that the United States is an incredibly violent country
reflecting the narrative of the community in the music but can't be generalized in negative connotation
Violence is just a part of hip-hop culture, especially because it's something that rappers make songs about. What do you say to that assumption, this thinking that all these tragedies are just expected in this kind of music in this industry?
violence being a part of hip-hop culture
Violence and death seem to hang like a cloud over rap and hip hop, but we wanted to hear from someone who has been following the industry for a long time to try and go beyond the myths and stereotypes that have grown around this topic.
support my claims
And more recently, the list of rappers who have been killed has only continued to grow.
connection to deeper narrative
n media coverage of the industry.
systemically and stereotypically "violent" by media coverage
I want us to be careful to not make it seem like it's a quote-unquote, "rap issue" 'cause I really think it's a systemic, cultural issue.
how this underlying narrative is pushed but may not be exactly whats occurring
Is violence - particularly gun violence - a problem that's connected to rap? And is hip-hop culture itself to blame for that?
discusses the connection to the deeper narrative I aim to discuss
TAKEOFF: And you still remember me and still remember all the work we put in.
end of soundbite section
SOUNDBITE OF SONG, "FIGHT NIGHT"
beginning of soundbites from his songs
Fans gathered on Friday
describe the memorial for Takeoff and facts about his death
aims to prevent gun violence,
gun violence narrative..... but relates to hip-hop community since he's a member
"senseless violence and a stray bullet."
victim of gun violence in rap community narrative - word choice of senseless
Free tickets to the memorial service
call to action for readers
The Grammy Award-nominated trio Migos also included Takeoff's uncle Quavo and cousin Offset. All three were largely raised by Takeoff's mother in an Atlanta suburb.
information about victim
A sign announces the memorial service for late rapper Takeoff of the rap group Migos at Atlanta's State Farm Arena on Nov. 11, 2022. (AP Photo/Sudhin Thanawala))
photo of the memorial.... depicts Takeoff as a glamorous celebrity
. She said Takeoff’s death was heartbreaking because he was so young.
attribution from fan
memorial service to celebrate the rapper's life and music, and a massive sign outside the arena was lit up with the rapper’s image.
memorial, dedicated to his life.... feeds into victim of gun violence narrative
Migos, in a rainy downtown Atlanta near where the 28-year-old grew up. if (window && window.foxstrike && Array.isArray(window.foxstrike.cmd)) { window.foxstrike.cmd.push(function(Strike) { Strike.insertAd('mobile', 'ban1', 'mobile-mw-ad-ban1'); }); } else { console.error('Error: window.foxstrike not found'); }
added detail about the setting
Just sad another rapper, son, brother, and friend has been killed. God be with all those who feel the loss."
another rapper death narrative
Young men of color are killing themselves," he wrote. "They are pulling their guns and shooting and just like that someone(s) is dead. Who do we blame? Activists, rappers, family members, faith leaders must confront this reality. This cannot be our future when our young are dying young."
is it just young men of color???? no
"It is with broken hearts and deep sadness that we mourn the loss of our beloved brother [Kirshnik] Khari Ball, known to the world as Takeoff," the statement read. "Senseless violence and a stray bullet has taken another life from this world and we are devastated."
use of words
"People fled after the shooting and did not stick around to offer statement," he said. "All we can hope is you all will reach out and give us evidence to solve the death of Takeoff."
keep talking about how many people were there but no one is saying anything.... this is suspicious
everyone who was at the bowling alley has a responsibility to come forward. “I don’t give anyone an out,” he said. “If you were there and you saw something and you know something, you don’t get a pass. Everybody has to take responsibility.”
alluding to possibilities about why they won't come out and say anything to be possibly negative?
Houston police said on Friday that the shooting occurred after some at the party played a “lucrative” dice game and an argument broke out.
choice of words, attribution, "dice game" what kind of connotation does this have.... neg?
Takeoff was involved in the escalation of the dispute that led to his death. “We have no reason to believe he was involved in anything criminal at the time,” said Finner.
interesting that this is included information.... would people assume that he would be???
A dispute had taken place outside the bowling alley after a party, and “at least two guns were fired” during the incident, CNN reported at the time.
cnn is being cited
Offset, the third Migos member, wrote on Instagram that Takeoff’s death “left a hole in my heart that will never be filled.”
attribution from group member
targeted and that he had simply been “at the wrong place at the wrong time,” according to NBC.
metaphor and attribution
In August 2020, Takeoff was accused in a civil lawsuit of sexual battery and assault. However, in April 2021, the L.A. County District Attorney’s office declined to prosecute the rapper for the sexual assault allegations due to insufficient evidence. At the time, his lawyer told TMZ that “the allegations were patently and provably false.”
finishing this article that is about the loss of a famous person with his criminal background yet again..... leading to the dangerous bad boy narrative
described the slain rapper as “very peaceful, loving and a great entertainer.”
use of strong language like "slain" to describe a "peaceful man" but only after claiming that there was no criminal activity going on
“We have too many young men of color that are being injured or fatally killed, and their future is cut off and family members and friends are left to mourn,” Turner said during the briefing. “This does not have to be our reality and it need not be our future. “
race based gun violence
According to the Houston Police Department, officers responded to a shooting at 810 Billiards & Bowling shortly after 2:30 a.m. and one man was found dead on arrival.
facts about the scene
Takeoff is the latest member of the hip-hop community to fall victim to gun violence. Rapper PnB Rock was shot in South Los Angeles in September and rising Louisiana artist JayDaYoungan died after a shooting in July. As the press briefing continued, Finner called for action from rap artists.
gun violence narrative, second time mentioned in article
“I got many calls from Houston and outside of Houston, and every one spoke of what a great young man this is, how peaceful he is, what a great artist “ Finner said.
attribution from same police cheif troy finner
“The amount of non reported robbery attempts dealing with rappers are ridiculous.. hella rappers don’t even speak on it cuz some feel it’s embarrassing to admit or speak on. Rappers literally being targeted out there and ppl trying em in broad daylight,” podcast host and entertainer DJ Akademiks tweeted.
they are not as macho and masculine as the media makes them out to be
In 2017, he was nearly killed in a shooting incident in Hollywood. He spent weeks hospitalized after sustaining three gunshot wounds. Dolph told The Guardian in a 2018 interview that he wasn’t “a person that lives in fear.”
previous survivor of gun violence
describing his teen years as “high-risk, high-reward.”
^^^^^^
Nipsey was a member of the Rollin 60s Neighborhood Crips but spoke out against rappers who would boast of purported gang affiliations to stunt or look cool – not because he wished them any violence, but to remind them that for too many young people, joining a gang was about survival.
dangerous rapper narrative
The rapper was not without controversy
included info that supports the "dangerous rapper" narrative
Takeoff now joins the list of rappers who were victims of gun violence.
strong supporter of "victim/gun violence narrative"
Fellow writer Jemele Hill added, “I was in college when Biggie and ‘Pac were killed and thought there was no way we’d ever experience anything remotely close to that again. Now it’s happening so frequently that you barely have time to recover before someone else killed. RIP Takeoff.”
attribute from a writer about the past of this situation
“Too many young men of color are killing each other,” tweeted Houston Mayor Sylvester Turner. “Resolving their disputes by pulling their guns and shooting one another regardless of fame or fortune. Crazy.
this seems biased based on racism in my opinion
but his loss is being felt well beyond the bounds of music as many chimed in to offer condolences and praise, while others questioned what needs to be done to stop the scourge of rappers being killed.
gun violence narrative "what needs to be done"
Takeoff’s death is the latest in a trend that stretches back to 2018. Each year since then, gun violence – whether through robbery or disagreement – has killed at least one rapper who was either already famous or on the cusp of crossover fame.
strong gun violence plus rapper stereotype narrative
slain
word choice
It’s happened again: America wakes up to news that a hip-hop star was fatally and senselessly shot.
contributes to the deeper narrative, yes victim narrative on the surface but also something more
Recently, Migos had been coy about its future as a group as Offset battled in court with the trio’s label. But in interviews, Quavo emphasized familial loyalty and said that he and Takeoff would continue as a duo, which they sometimes referred to as Unc’ and ’Phew.
group split, could this have anything to do with what happened to Takeoff?
In the summer of 2020, Takeoff was accused of rape in a lawsuit by a woman who said she was assaulted at a house party in Encino, Calif. A lawyer representing the rapper called the claims “patently and provably false” and said Takeoff was known for his “quiet, reserved and peaceful personality.” The Los Angeles County District Attorney’s Office declined to prosecute the case because of a lack of evidence, according to Pitchfork.
interesting that this anecdote was included in the story since it the overall tone has remained generally and relatively remorseful for his death - further painting the 'bad boy'/ 'dangerous rapper' narrative?
Working on a song for any longer “kills the vibe,” Takeoff said. “You gotta have fun with a song, make somebody laugh,” he added. “You gotta have character.”
shows how he approaches his passion
Southern rappers like Gucci Mane, T.I., Lil Wayne and his early group the Hot Boys, which provided a blueprint for Migos’s later success.
his inspirations, shows that he looked up to other rappers
Takeoff, whose real name is Kirsnick Khari Ball, was born on June 18, 1994, and grew up in Lawrenceville, Ga. He “always wanted to rap,” he told The Fader, a music magazine, in a 2013 interview, and found his group mates close to home: Takeoff and Quavo, his uncle, were raised by Quavo’s mother, Edna, a hairstylist. She is frequently shouted out in Migos songs as “Mama!”
his personal history
his often-downcast eyes lighting up. “It’s our time now.”
"often-downcast eyes" not the most positive description
The group’s subsequent 2017 album, “Culture,” debuted at No. 1 on the Billboard chart and earned Migos one of its two Grammy nominations.
history about the relevance of the group
was founded as a family bedroom act northeast of the city, in an area that Migos came to brand as the “Nawfside.”
underdog narrative
“When you’re around Takeoff, there’s a sense of peacefulness about his aura,” Mr. Findling said. “He listens to you, he looks at you, he’s more focused on what you have to say than what he has to say. The world was starting to learn about Takeoff. It was his time to shine.”
^^^^^^
Drew Findling, a lawyer for Takeoff and confidant to many rap stars, called his death “a devastating loss, particularly for Atlanta.”
attribution from lawyer Drew Findling
fan favorite
positive wording to describe him, explain how everyone loves him
Boujee.”
some history about the band
“When I heard the news it got me to tears,” Tatiana Battle, 23, said. “Migos’s music got me through breakups, graduation, celebrations. And now I can’t listen to them anymore because it will never be the same.”
attribute from fan, emotional
with some young fans trickling past a few bouquets of roses and lit candles.
appealing to emotions
we all need to stand together and make sure no one tears down that industry.”
in reference to the past gun violence narrative
“Sometimes the hip-hop community gets a bad name,” Chief Finner
attribution towards the "bad boy" narrative of the hip-hop community
“We have no reason to believe that he was involved in anything criminal at the time,” Chief Finner said of Takeoff.
attribute from Cheif Troy Finner from the Houston Police Department
An argument ensued and shots were fired from at least two weapons, they said, leading to many people fleeing.
two weapons
A 24-year-old woman and a 23-year-old man were taken to local hospitals with non-life-threatening injuries, the police said.
two other victims
singsong flow helped define Atlanta’s ever-evolving, influential rap sound
his impact
a subtle vocal technician and one-third of the chart-topping group Migos,
describing him in specific way
The rapper was killed in a shooting at a bowling alley in Houston overnight.Send any friend a storyAs a subscriber, you have 10 gift articles to give each month. Anyone can read what you share.
how he died
The estimate that 31 percent of U.S. adults own any gun is from an Ipsos KnowledgePanel survey of more than 31,000 adults
"estimate" is loose since it uses terms like "more than 31,000" not the most accurate
among 2,104 gun owners, including 399 AR-15-style rifle owners.
2,104 total gun owners but only 399 were AR-15 rifle owners
recruited through random sampling of U.S
random sampling is good
Source: Sept. 30-Oct. 11, 2022, Washington Post-Ipsos poll of 399 AR-15-style rifle owners with an error margin of +/- 5.5 percentage points.
margin of error = 5.5% only 399 people surveyed
The Washington Post
the washingston post and Ispos did this survey
, told NBC’s “Today” program last week. The story of the rescue had been reported earlier by The Washington Post.
metaphor- NBC being told, WP being reported to
“I felt like it was just a scene out of a movie,"
metaphor- comparison
felt like hitting a concrete wall.
metaphor- exaggeration
A sinking feeling
strong metaphor headline- a feeling can't sink like a ship
according to the United States Coast Guard
metaphor- coast guard can't speak
according to the company.
metaphor- company can't speak
“Technology saved our lives,”
metaphor- tech as human "saving life"
The Internet Saved Their Lives.
metaphor- internet as human
with an assist from a satellite internet signal.
satellite "assisting" human trait
rapid rescue would not have been possible without the battery-powered satellite device
metaphor??
How the shooting unfolded
this section is primarily based on most known facts up to current date. it also includes attributions from families or victims and others involved in the incident
At a vigil, Evelyn's sister cried as she said, "I don't want to be an only child."
attribution that plays on the emotions of readers
The investigation
this section is based more on informed opinion and speculation since the investigation is open. still provides insight on the direction the case is going.
According to the national Gun Violence Archive, there have been 130 mass shootings in the U.S. so far this year.
a fact that was included to support the claims stated in the article, which emphasize the rise of school shootings this year
"Our community is heartbroken," the school said in a statement on Monday. "We are grieving tremendous loss and are in shock coming out of the terror that shattered our school and church." National 3 children and 3 adults are dead in a shooting at a Christian school in Nashville
opinion of the school statement
Audrey Hale, who police identified as the shooter, bought seven firearms — including the three guns used in the attack — legally and was in treatment for an emotional disorder, Nashville Police Chief John Drake said Tuesday.
attribution of a credible witness, the Nashville Police Chief John Drake
Six people — including three children — were killed in the shooting, and the suspected attacker was killed by police within minutes of the first call of an active shooter.
A fact supported by evidence that 6 people lost their lives
Zebras are not considered exotic animals under Ohio law.
I found it very interesting that the author included this information to close the story. It's basically sending a message to readers that the owner technically is allowed to own this animal, even though people probably would never have expected that.
eventually was shot and killed.
I wonder why these police officers decided to shoot and kill this animal before trying to tranquilize it and possibly bring it to a zoo or habitat where it could live more peacefully.
deputies responded to the home and found the man in a fenced-in field, lying on the ground.
although the author describes the scene, it's not exactly specific and leaves me asking questions about the incident. Examples being who called the police, how injured was the man, can I have more context for the story?
zebra attacked its owner at an Ohio home
automatically appeals to readers by using the construct of unusualness in the story; why would anyone own a zebra in Ohio
CIRCLEVILLE, Ohio
shows relevance to proximity since we are also in Ohio