1. The passage to me was evidence of vivid detail

2. In this writing, the author used vivid detail numerous times throughout the passage. The use of vivid detail to me, brought the passage to life. I was able to get a better visual of what the author was seeing, and better explanation of what she was feeling. It made me feel as if I was there with her first hand.

3. I strongly believe the writer has effectively incorporated vivid detail throughout the essay, it was easy for me to read and understand the passage as she described exactly what she seen and she even went into describing the weather she stated' " The air was like a hot, moist blank" the use of vivid details made the reading experience more personal and I was able to gather a visual of her descriptions.

4. In my own writings, I do use some vivid details, but from reading this passage, I will add more description in future writings to allow readers to gather a better understanding of what I am trying to describe and hopefully this will allow them to gather a better understanding of my narrative.

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