SUSTAINABLE BUSINESS MANAGEMENT: TRIPOD OF SUSTAINABILITY ANDITS APPLICABILITY IN ORGANIZATIONS
Title is kind of long and technical but to the point and relevant.
SUSTAINABLE BUSINESS MANAGEMENT: TRIPOD OF SUSTAINABILITY ANDITS APPLICABILITY IN ORGANIZATIONS
Title is kind of long and technical but to the point and relevant.
The Sustainability Tripod is an essential strategic
I think this text would be more engaging if it included a discussion of the different interpretations and practical applications of the sustainability tripod. As it stands, much of the text is summary rather than critical engagement. Linton et al. (1994) emphasize that academic writing should move beyond knowledge-telling to knowledge-transforming by analyzing and critiquing existing frameworks. Similarly, Miller-Cochran et al. (2019) highlight the importance of integrating sources through comparison and evaluation rather than just reporting information. A deeper discussion of alternative sustainability models or challenges in applying the tripod would better align with these expectations.
(Silva, 2021).
These citations seem to support more general claims rather than using any specific numerical data- as mentioned before.
Currently, humanity faces significant environmental challenges, such as climate change,loss of biodiversity, air, water and soil pollution, as well as deforestation and ecosystemdegradatio
This seems to be more qualitative data opposed to quantitative data. Explains the lack of statistics.
Environmental management is an essential field in the search for a sustainable balancebetween human activities and en
Rather than direct quotations, I see a lot of paraphrasing.
(Lima et al.,2024; Lima et al., 2024).
1st citation. Definitely very early on, this introduction is very packed with information. Also in APA format.
METHODOLOGY
I notice there aren't any graphics here. Also lacking statistics (in my opinion)
SDG
Kind of a technological term though it is explained.
The triple bottom line approach,
Introduction is not off to a great start as we are 2 sentences in and already using jargon. This is briefly spelled out in the following sentence but is still pretty technical
Technology plays a crucial role in this context, offering innovative solutions to faceenvironmental challenges
Another 3rd person POV. This article seems to be predominantly 3rd person.
Companies are increasingly aware of their environmental footprint and the need toreduce carbon emissions
An example of not only a conviction but also an active voice. Also 3rd person POV
Costa, E.; Ferezin, N. B. ESG (Environmental, Social and Corporate Governance) e acomunicação: o tripé da sustentabilidade aplicado às organizações globalizadas. RevistaAlterjor, v. 24, n. 2, 79-95, 2021.Dourado, I. P.; Marques, A. O tripé da sustentabilidade brasileira: desafios históricos na lutaambiental, compromissos políticos e coletivos na educação ambiental. Rev. Gesto eDebate, v. 7, n. 1, 2023.Fonseca, S. A.; Martins, P. S. Gestão ambiental: uma súplica do planeta, um desafio parapolíticas públicas, incubadoras e pequenas empresas. Produção, v. 20, n. 4, out./dez., p.538-548, 2010.Lima, L. A. de O. et al. Sustainable Management Practices: Green Marketing as A Source forOrganizational Competitive Advantage. Revista de Gestão Social e Ambiental, São Paulo(SP), v. 18, n. 4, 2024. DOI: 10.24857/rgsa.v18n4-087.Lima, L. A. de O. et al. The Influence of Green Marketing on Consumer Purchase Intention: aSystematic Review. Revista de Gestão Social e Ambiental, São Paulo (SP), v. 18, n. 3, p.e05249, 2024. DOI: 10.24857/rgsa.v18n3-084.Machado, P. K. O.; Checon, B. Q. Análise do cumprimento de critérios de governançacorporativa por empresas ditas como Ambiental, Social e de Governança. FGV RIC Revistade Iniciação Científica, v. 4, n. 1, 2023.Mecca, M. S. et al. Sustentabilidade e ESG (Environmental, social and governance): estudo dasoperações turísticas de uma pousada na serra gaúcha. Tur., Visão e Ação, v25, n3, p425-444, Set./Dez. 2023.Mendes, L. S. Saber Ambiental: Sustentabilidade, Racionalidade, Complexidade, Poder.Revista Tocantinense de Geografia, [S. l.], v. 11, n. 23, p. 234–240, 2022.Santos, E. H.; Silva, M. A. Sustentabilidade empresarial: um novo modelo de negócio. RevistaCiência Contemporânea, jun./dez., v.2, n.1, p. 75-94, 2017.Silva, H. M. M. A sustentabilidade como vantagem competitiva: um olhar sobre o tripé dasustentabilidade. Revista Multidisciplinar de Educação e Meio Ambiente, v. 2, n. 3, 2021.
There looks to be a good amount of courses used, all of which are relevant to the article. There seems to be a good mix of references and original research.
the selected articles were subjected to a critical reading and a thorough analysis
Another example of a passive voice. Looks to be pretty mixed between active and passive voices in this article.
Fundamental principles guide sustainability initiatives
Kind of a passive voice. The subject is sustainability initiatives, and they are being guided by principles. The agent is not specified.
Environmental education also plays a vital role in raising awareness and changingbehavior towards more sustainable practice
Another example of an active voice being used. I am noticing a theme here...this article seems to be very direct and clear.
This approach not only protects the company's financial stability,but also contributes to inclusive and resilient economic growth
shift from present tense to past tense. Also an example of an active voice.
significantly
Another conviction, allows room for interpretation based on context.
not onlymitigate risks and improve their reputation, but also
Another conviction. Acknowledges multiple aspects of sustainability.
increasingly
Conviction. This suggests a growing awareness, but it doesn't claim that all companies are fully aware or have adopted sustainable practices.
1 INTRODUCTION
IMRaD Structure
To analyze the applicability of the sustainability tripod as a management mechanism in organizations
Objective/topic
Universidad de Ciencias Empresariales y Sociales (UCES), Paraguay 1401, C1061 Ciudad Autónoma deBuenos Aires, Buenos Aires, Argentina. E-mail: kennyanunesuk@gmail.com2 Universidade Federal de Ouro Preto (UFOP) Mariana, Minas Gerais, Brasil.E-mail: simone.rocha@ufop.edu.br3 Universidade Federal Rural de Pernambuco (UFRPE) Dois Irmãos, Recife, Brasil.E-mail: mariagabrielaufrpe@gmail.com4 Universidade Federal do Maranhão (UFMA) Açailândia, Maranhão, Brasil. E-mail: airtonleao@outlook.comOrcid: https://orcid.org/0000-0002-1444-56395 Instituto Federal de Educação, Ciência e Tecnologia de Pernambuco, Recife, Pernambuco, Brasil.E-mail: prof.zillcarvalho@gmail.com6 Universidade Federal do Piauí (UFPI), Teresina, Piauí, Brasil. E-mail: mairadanuse@ufpi.edu.brOrcid: https://orcid.org/0009-0000-9524-47347 Universidade Federal de Campina Grande, Centro de Desenvolvimento Sustentável (UFCG - CDSA), Sumé,Paraíba, Brasil. E-mail: anaveronicasn@gmail.com8 Universidade Federal Rural de Pernambuco, Dois Irmãos, Recife, Pernambuco, Brasil.E-mail: everaldocostas@gmail.com9 Universidade do Extremo Sul Catarinense (UNESC) Santa Catarina, Brasil. E-mail: gsm@unesc.netOrcid: https://orcid.org/0009-0008-6761-888010 Universidad del Sol (UNADES), Assunción, Paraguai, Brasil. E-mail: carloshenrique.gs@icloud.com
List of authors (10 total). Plenty of writers, all from different institutions within Brazil. Definitely a collaborative effort.