Was there a deliberate discussion on what to leave out? Did this involve other faculty and what were the reactions? This may be outside the scope of the paper, but is one of the factors you allude to that inhibits change. If there was push-back how did you process this both intellectually and emotionally?
I am interested in this personally since I have received very strong push-back on trying to make change that was seen as somehow undermining implicit canons of engineering. My experience, as perhaps that of many others, was…traumatic. It was difficult to process that trauma since it occurred in an environment where allies were difficult to find. I would just like to point out that Murmurations is a space to discuss such issues.