28 Matching Annotations
  1. Nov 2019
    1. they all understand that their happiness, the beauty of their city, the tenderness of their friendships, the health of their children, the wisdom of their scholars, the skill of their makers, even the abundance of their harvest and the kindly weathers of their skies, depend wholly on this child's abominable misery.

      Even though the comparison is taken to the extreme here between Omelas and the real world, you can still find children living in deplorable conditions in a very similar situation, like the children who mine mica. Mica is a mineral dust used in a ton of makeup products and is one of the most unethically gathered resources. Mica mining is a huge child labor institution. Small children go into these steep dark holes in the ground and dig for day in and day out for this mineral. They work all day just like their parents to be able to provide basic necessities. Most of them never receive an education. We as Americans don't think about where our products come from and how they are made. We love to play the good-guy role and pretend that we're more ethical than anywhere else, but our consumerism promotes shady business practices and companies in other countries who exploit their workers for our benefit. Factory workers in China make so much of what we use and we pretend like these people aren't people just like us who would rather be enjoying themselves. I do not promote socialism, but capitalism at the extreme is also horrible. The capitalism that we live by today as Americans can still be improved upon by adopting more ethical practices. Being ethical requires spending more money to not underpay workers. As Americans, we don't like the idea of paying more and supporting ethical practices so we choose to ignore those who suffer on our behalf. If we could just ban worker exploitation in one go and make it disappear, then it wouldn't be a problem, but most big companies will always find a way to exploit their workers when they can and we have to start recognizing where and how this occurs if we do not want to support it.

    2. naked. Its buttocks and thighs are a mass of festered sores, as it sits in its own excrement continually.

      The people of Omelas can't even be bothered to clothe the child. I can't even imagine what the human body would look like if it never moved and sat in one place all day, eating corn meal and grease. The grotesqueness of this description is devastating.

  2. Oct 2019
    1. and one day I will take my teenaged plug and connect it to the nearest socket raping an 85 year old white woman who is somebody's mother and as I beat her senseless and set a torch to her bed a greek chorus will be singing in 3/4 time “Poor thing. She never hurt a soul. What beasts they are.”

      This is such a powerful image used in itself. We empathize with the 85 year old woman who might be our grandmother, but then we understand that this is not the poet's fault, because they were driven to the brink of madness by that white woman's culture, by her ignorance and by the majority of her people who let oppression just happen over and over again without saying a word.

    2. “They convinced me”

      This one line is incredibly sad. This woman was obviously coerced by a system of oppression. This is actually really scary, how the justice system still does this. Still pretends to be fair and pretends to give people choices.

    1. The arc end of the precipice grows 1.9% annually

      I think this is referring to the edge of whatever grows 1.9% annually so that whatever conflict/issue threatens people, people are 1.9% annually more likely to fall into whatever conflict is at hand.

    1. It helps to be between wars, to die a  few  times  each day to understand your father's sky, as you take it apart piece  by  piece  and can't feel  anything,  can't  feel the tree growing under your feet, the eyes poking night only to find another night to compare it to. Whoever   heard   of   turning   pain   into   hummingbirds   or   red  birds—

      I thought of these lines as saying it's better to have struggled and learned because of it rather than having everything easy and never understanding hardships and staying ignorant of the world's problems. People do their most growing when they have been cut down, unhappy, unfulfilled, and wronged. If everything were perfect, there would be no change and nothing is ever perfect.

    2. Ways of Rebelling

      I find it interesting that the poem's name is "Ways of Rebelling." I tried to find the ways that might be rebelling, and all I could come up with on my own are rebelling against common thought, against peace, against the easy route, against your country, or your country's wrongs. I also thought that maybe it's supposed to be sort of mocking the fact that the author themself can't find a way to "properly" rebel.

    1. Urban Affection

      It's an interesting title for the poem. It implies love in or for urban America, which is something not many people have. Like Walt Whitman, most people love to escape from America's urban side.

    2. We still live in an America where America still lives in us

      I actually don't think this was a strong ending line for this poem. I think that the rest of the poem was a lot more powerful. Xavier went down a list of true things that apply to America today and the injustices everyone has to face. This line is a little too broad and I think it was added a little bit hastily. Not that it isn't good, but I think he could have made the ending just as powerful as his previous lines to leave the reader with a bigger punch.

    3. We still live in an America where everything from thieves to dwarfs to fog to beetles deserve validity

      I agree with Isabel, that it's so hard for people to live without fear of judgement. People are so sensitive as well, it's hard to say anything without it offending someone.

    4. authoring disreputable books limit poets to a vagabond lifestyle

      This can be applied to more than just authoring books. People who speak out on disreputable subjects in general are viewed as vagabond people. Their morals are questioned just for their simple thoughts and opinions.

    5. We still live in an America where, unless you belong to a church, you are a religious skeptic believing in nothing

      This is a huge deal in a lot of religious families. Speaking from personal experience, my grandpa believes this and it's infuriating to deal with because no matter what you say, that type of thinking is just too stubborn to budge. I myself don't belong to any church, but that doesn't mean I don't think about religion or believe in it, because I do have my own thoughts and beliefs.

    6. We still live in an America where Christ and Dracula provide both excitement and fear for restless lives longing for a simple touch

      This line is worded really well. It plays on the fears of old American values, the people who judge others so harshly. The uber-religious hypocrites, and the non-religious who make fun of and chastise those who are all because they were hurt by it at one point. That's how I took this line, but it also is just a reference to the mixing of religion and pop culture that was once seen as incongruous and is still hard for people to accept.

    7. Otherwise, we still live in an America where the audacity to openly enjoy the pleasures of sex and being respected for wisdom are contradictions without reconciliation

      This is such a jab at slut-shaming, which is huge. People like to insult other people's sexuality. It's even worse for people who embrace their sexuality and celebrate it as a responsible adult, because some people can't get over the fact that sex can still happen and not be embarrassing or wrong.

    8. We now live in an America where blacks are not only allowed the right to vote but can become the Redeemer President of the United States

      This is the one redeeming quality of America in recent years. Our only redeeming quality as a nation is that the majority have woken up enough and gained enough sense to treat people like they should be treated. As equals.

    9. for Walt Whitman

      It's interesting that Xavier writes to Walt Whitman. It makes sense the further down you read, and from my understanding I think that Whitman who emphasized an escape to the natural world would be appalled at the lack of progress in America in a human sense. He would shake his head at the urbanization and the debri and the pretentiousness that covers up anything taboo, but be glad to see that things have at least changed to allow blacks to vote and hold great power, that there is still beauty in life.

    1. The caged bird sings    with a fearful trill    of things unknown    but longed for still    and his tune is heard    on the distant hill    for the caged bird    sings of freedom.

      Angelou builds a rhyme scheme as the piece goes, but it is sporadic. It reminds me of someone finding their voice, finding their rhythm as the poem goes, much like the caged bird.

    2. But a caged bird stands on the grave of dreams    his shadow shouts on a nightmare scream    his wings are clipped and his feet are tied    so he opens his throat to sing.

      There is a sort of helpless feeling from these lines. Even though all seems in vain, like no matter what the caged bird does there is no hope for escape, yet they persist. Enslaved people endured much of the same harsh reality and still fought and protested for their freedom which is amazing. It's sad that their pain was so great and passed down from generations of grief, but truly amazing that this hope endured.

    3. The free bird thinks of another breeze and the trade winds soft through the sighing trees and the fat worms waiting on a dawn bright lawn and he names the sky his own

      When Angelou talks about this free bird, her words are lighter, more pleasant, flowery and pretty. The caged bird is talked about a bit more intensely and roughly so as to contrast the free bird's life of ease and the other's life of struggle.

    4. of things unknown    but longed for still   

      Many people want things they do not have, cannot have, and don't know they want yet. People crave to become what they are not. Those who are oppressed wish to live like their oppressors. I don't mean this in a bad way, obviously people all want to have the same rights as those who have them. It's just that this is a never-ending struggle that has to do a lot with human nature.

    5. so he opens his throat to sing.

      Parallels can be made between this caged bird opening their throat and Angelou opening her own throat to find her voice after five years of being mute. It's a powerful image when seen in that way, as finding your voice to not just protest, but to sing.

    6. stalks

      "Stalks" is a word that holds intent. It creates an image of a bird who is not so complacent with their situation, almost like they're watching carefully and plotting their escape.

    7. and dares to claim the sky.

      This line right here was very powerful to me. It makes me think of white slave-owners daring to own people and daring to claim lands that aren't theirs, and just being really ignorant in general. It can even be translated today in white culture appropriating things from other cultures.

    8. and floats downstream    till the current ends

      This implies that free birds and free people do not have to struggle, that their lives are free of troubles. Oppressed people cannot just float downstream, they have to struggle against the current.

    9. A free bird leaps on the back of the wind   

      To me, leaping on the back of wind makes me think of those who are free having the support and backing of their community, the ease of just having opportunities at their grasp as opposed to those who do not.

    10. Caged Bird

      It's interesting how Angelou chooses a caged bird as her focus because it implies that birds are meant to fly and in using this as her analogy to people who are enslaved and oppressed, it implies that these people are meant to be free like birds as well. I think that it works really well as the title and main focus of her poem. Birds are wild and meant to fly. They are no different from the birds outside their cage.