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  1. Nov 2019
    1. Often the young people go home in tears, or in a tearless rage, when they have seen the child and faced this terrible paradox.

      Children often understand the unfairness and harshness of things better than adults think they do.

    2. If an orgy would help, don't hesitate. Let us not, however, have temples from which issue beautiful nude priests and priestesses already half in ecstasy and ready to copulate with any man or woman, lover or stranger, who desires union with the deep godhead of the blood, although that was my first idea. But really it would be better not to have any temples in Omelas—at least, not manned temples. Religion yes, clergy no.

      Reminds me a lot of "The Dispossessed," here and is thus a little hard for me to understand. I am reading this as if Le Guin is saying like, allow there to be pleasure, but not obsessive or prideful pleasure that comes from a place of ingenuity.

    3. But we do not say the words ofcheer much any more. All smiles have become archaic.

      Interesting to note that prior to this, despite wonderful colors and scenes being described, there are no words to indicate happiness or joy and cheer, only descriptions that made us assume joy and cheer. However, I will mention that the word "merry," is used.

  2. Oct 2019
    1. “Poor thing. She never hurt a soul. What beasts they are.”

      Contrasted from the 11 year old who had barely lived on Earth, versus the 85 year old woman who had lived on the Earth longer than many have. Someone is saying "poor thing," for the woman, that she never hurt anyone, but what about the 11 year old boy who literally never did hurt anyone? Where was the "poor thing," for him when the man who killed him was set free after only 13 years for taking a life that hadn't been given a chance to find and fulfill his purpose?

    2. raping an 85 year old white woman who is somebody's mother and as I beat her senseless and set a torch to her bed a greek chorus will be singing in 3/4 time “Poor thing. She never hurt a soul. What beasts they are.”

      Although harsh, brutal, and unjustified, these words are demonstrating the way in which society will beat her down, turn her into what they paint her to be unless she learns to harness her power. In the last line, it sort of brings this all to halt because you realize, or at least I did, that the author is only reacting the way in which she has been painted to. I mean the last line is literally someone saying "What beasts [THEY] are." The racism is always present regardless of what the situation it is to occur.

    3. the first real power she ever had and lined her own womb with cement to make a graveyard for our children.

      In saying "they convinced me," this woman is described as being brain washed and convinced into allowing her power of voice to say that she was convinced justice had been served. In her being so passive about the situation, it would seem she forgot about her "womb," her ability to be a mother, and she aided in a problem that has been attacking the lives of young Black people for what seems like forever.

    4. trying to make power out of hatred and destruction trying to heal my dying son with kisses

      Making power out of "hatred and destruction" is what turns the world upside down. When putting these words into visual context, I always see the author as a person wallowing in a place with her literal dying son, crying for his survival, but amazed at the lack of decades and centuries worth of oppression baring down on her back in this "desert."

    5. I am trapped on a desert of raw gunshot wounds and a dead child dragging his shattered black face off the edge of my sleep blood from his punctured cheeks and shoulders is the only liquid for miles

      I am always stunned by the raw and disturbing image written here because of what is implies about the author's experiences, where she has been, where she is in this moment, etc. This is someone you want to hear, whose words you need to listen to

    1. Spelling bees were a battleground where teachers trained me to wield language as a tool & fist & weapon & warning to those who would rather make an outline out of me.

      I love the way the title ties into the poem this way. "How to Fight," sounds aggresive and is misleading because it makes you feel like you're going to learn how to actually, physically fight. But then you get to the end and figure out that this author learned how to fight by learning and building up her language so that no one could ever make her an "outline," as in no one could ever tell her or other who she is, only she could do that.

    1. I am tryingto sell them the world. Any decent realtor,walking you through a real shithole, chirps onabout good bones: This place could be beautiful,right? You could make this place beautiful.

      THIS. This is the destination of this poem. We have all joked at one point that we didn't "ask to be born." But we were born. So like Smith, our parents have to sell us the world in order to keep our interest in it because if they told us how they really felt about it, we may not be so keen on putting the effort to go out into the world. The ultimate goal here is to tell kids (which represent the future) that they can make the world beautiful, they just have to fix it up. Although idealistic, because it is also very realistic, I like the meaning of "Good Bones."

    2. Life is short, though I keep this from my children.Life is short, and I’ve shortened minein a thousand delicious, ill-advised ways,a thousand deliciously ill-advised waysI’ll keep from my children. The world is at leastfifty percent terrible, and that’s a conservativeestimate, though I keep this from my children.For every bird there is a stone thrown at a bird.For every loved child, a child broken, bagged,sunk in a lake.

      (couldn't highlight smaller portions for some reason so I am going to put a few annotations here) "Life is short, and I've...keep from my children." The author seems to clearly admit that she's made her fair share of mistakes that she wouldn't take back but she wouldn't pass forward either to her children.

      "The world is at least...from my children." As the poem continues, it seems like the author wants to hide the bad from her children so that they go into the world more positively than she sees it at the moment in time she is writing this.

      "For every loved child, a child broken, bagged, sunk in a lake." For every good thing, there is one bad thing. It is important to note that while there is bad, there is also good, and vise versa.

    1. as you take it apart piece  by  piece  and can't feel  anything,  can't  feel the tree growing under your feet, the eyes poking night only to find another night to compare it to.

      When your attention is diverted, you forget to take a look at the things changing, you forget to inspect things around you happening. When the author says before this section "it helps to be between wars," it amplifies the the meaning highlighted. This sort of reminds me of people who watch the news and allow themselves to become so involved in what is happening on the screen that they forget to look at the world beyond it.

    1. to pinch the meat of their young red tongues.

      I may or may not be reading this wrong but the way I see these two lines at the end, I see it like the hands of the dead oppressors coming up from the ground to silence the words and mouths of those who would say otherwise about what occurred on the grounds marked by the historical marker.

    2. and the byway’s historical marker beckons them to the site of an Indian village—   Where trouble was brewing. Where, after further hostilities, the army was directed to enter. Where the village was razed after the skirmish occurred. Where most were women and children.

      At first, I was unsure of what this poem was about, where it was really going. Despite my confusion, I really like the way Da handles the topic of passiveness on the part of those who do the oppressing. This is where you see the importance of teaching children to avoid using passive language so as they get older, they learn a lesson in taking responsibility and accountability in their own actions. This is really where the poem connected for me.

    1. We still live in an America where America still lives in us

      I think that this is such an important ending to this poem because of what it implies. America was supposed to stand for revolution in itself, being different from the rest, and succumbing to things we don't find right (although if I remember correctly, this revolt came about because certain people were upset that certain other people were the only ones to capitalize off slave trading... anyway). And yet there are so many aspects of America in which freedom comes with conditions and limits, all of which perpetuate the standing system that is in place. To be different is as Xavier says, "trademarks of a pretentious ass." And yet, even in the bad there is good. "We still live in an America where America still lives in us," could be bad in that all of the injustices America has committed and allowed itself to continue to commit still affect so many of us on deep, psychological levels. But it could also be good in that the idea of America, the idea of freedom and unity still lives in all of us as well, it is where we find hope. I really like this line for some many reasons, obviously.

    1. Please remain calm, or we can’t be held responsible  for what happens to you. 

      And as per usual, this last line highlights the biggest problem, and crime to exist against minorities in the United States, that being that no matter what the case is, if you're a victim of the "authority," suddenly no one is responsible for your person or body.

    2. Step aside, please, while our officer inspects your bad attitude. 

      Being scrutinized and analyzed for the attitude that comes with being falsely accused, and chosen off a bias. How can you blame someone for being pissed off when you are wrongfully detaining them?

    3. In order to facilitate our procedures, please limit your carrying on. 

      This line is so important to discuss because what is essentially being said is, "In order to do our job, you have to stop living." All I have to say is that, in my head, I see Botham Jean sitting on his couch watching TV, and Amber Guyger the moment she entered his home.

    1. I've walked there picking mushrooms at the edge of dread, but don't be fooled this isn't a Russian poem, this is not somewhere else but here, our country moving closer to its own truth and dread, its own ways of making people disappear.

      This stanza causes me to reflect on the world today, and our country at different points in time. This country was built off the backs of slaves and indigenous peoples, and their blood is what nourished the land, and caused it to flourish. As time has passed, this has not really changed, but I do feel that as more people become aware through the generations, this country's reckoning is coming quick and soon, and the erasure of the damages caused will soon be called to the stage.

    1. But a bird that stalks down his narrow cage can seldom see through his bars of rage his wings are clipped and    his feet are tied so he opens his throat to sing.

      In relation to the previous stanza, the difference here is that the caged bird's environment is described as a cage, but from the lines "his bars of rage," we can clearly tell that this cage is metaphorical. It is a state of mind, and this bird is not free; the good news is, the caged bird is opening "his throat to sing," so all hope is not lost, this bird wants to be free.

    2. A free bird leaps on the back of the wind    and floats downstream    till the current ends and dips his wing in the orange sun rays and dares to claim the sky.

      What I love about this stanza is the personification in nature, which ultimately brings together this notion of the free and caged birds existing in their environments which are just as alive as they are, and therefore reflect or rather emanate the same sorts of vibes and feelings respective to each bird.

  3. Nov 2018
    1. Armadillo

      I think this poem excellently delivers a message of survival by using the Armadillo to deliver it. These illegal fire balloons are beautiful in theory but in reality, they appear to cause such harm and loss.

    1. Somebody embroidered the doily. Somebody waters the plant, or oils it, maybe. Somebody arranges the rows of cans so that they softly say:esso—so—so—so to high-strung automobiles. Somebody loves us all.

      I enjoy this lack of naming, and lack of specific roles to this family, and even the lack of relationships despite knowing otherwise it is a family. I feel that it perfectly resonates with Bishop's longing for a place to fit in, whether it be with a family or elsewhere, hence the "Somebody loves us all." I also thought it was interesting that in the recording, people laughed at the lines of the plant possibly being oiled because I didn't necessarily see the humor in the poem or just those lines until it happened.

    2. Some comic books provide the only note of color— of certain color.

      Color doesn't seem to be abundant in this poem, and so the fact that these comic books are the only source of "certain" color could suggest that this family possibly doesn't have much, the kids are older, and these comic books are the only source of enjoyment around

    1. Roosters, what are you projecting?

      If it isn't already clear, the Rossters and Hens are metaphors for men and women, and it seems to be that Bishop is openly asking Roosters (men) why they inconvenience and intrude on the lives of the Hens (women), they already get to have multiple wives, what makes them more qualified to deliver orders, etc. referring back to Holly's point of considering the role of women in this poem

    1. Oh, think not I am faithful to a vow! Faithless am I save to love's self alone. Were you not lovely I would leave you now: After the feet of beauty fly my own.

      It seems as though Millay is working through the stages of love here, wrestling with loving and having lost love, and trying to rationalize one's feelings and actions

    1. Renascence

      I think this title is very fitting for this poem, as Renascence means revival of something that's been dead a long time I believe. It appears to be about the revival of one's body and soul, the message being delivered excellent.

    2. The rain, I said, is kind to come And speak to me in my new home. I would I were alive again To kiss the fingers of the rain, To drink into my eyes the shine Of every slanting silver line, To catch the freshened, fragrant breeze From drenched and dripping apple-trees. For soon the shower will be done, And then the broad face of the sun Will laugh above the rain-soaked earth Until the world with answering mirth Shakes joyously, and each round drop Rolls, twinkling, from its grass-blade top.

      Seemingly regrets wanting to die. Describes rain so descriptively and joyously that I can feel she wants out of death.

    3. The creaking of the tented sky, The ticking of Eternity.

      What I enjoy most so far about this poem is that is reader like a fable, and sort of nursery rhyme, making it not only more enjoyable to read out loud, but also memorable

    1. "Is something the matter, dear," she said, "That you sit at your work so silently?" "No, mother, no—'twas a knot in my thread. There goes the kettle—I'll make the tea."

      I think this poem was inside of Millay's personal thoughts, the ending being her pull back into reality. I enjoy this idea that she was so drawn to other places and activities in her mind, as well as her walking until she can't anymore. She is expressing a need to stay on the move, to never settle,

    1. all my pretty follies flung aside That won you to me, and beneath your gaze, Naked of reticence and shorn of pride, Spread like a chart my little wicked ways.

      Plentiful were the silly thing to gain the interest of her lover, they saw right through her soul

    1. Where certainly none will follow after.

      Beautifully tragic is the phrase that comes to mind reading this. To write of someone who dreamed of what appears to be hinted at, death, is hard, and most certainly doesn't seem easy on the heart, but Bogan writes so beautifully simple here, it is hard to not be infatuated by it.

    1. Now that I have your heart by heart, I see.

      I think the repetitiousness of this line and its variations is supposed to represent getting to know this love interest she speaks of, and memorizing certain details of them, which is why she keeps saying "by heart."

    2. Music that is not meant for music’s cage,

      I love this line in particularly because it insists that all music is suffered to fit within a lyrical rhythm, and pattern, implying that rhythm and pattern as a cage, however, these "black chords upon a dulling page," aren't meant to fit within these patterns of the time.

    1. An Autumn Sunset

      The poem is beautifully descriptive, but Wharton seems to have a negative view of the sunset, or rather, not negative but she overall describes it in terms of a sort of battle, with battle terminology, such as "advancing mob," "Valkyrie," and "Dead to all shames, forgotten of all glories."

    2. Lagooned in gold,

      I admire her descriptiveness when it comes to imagery, thinking of a sunset as "lagooned in gold," is not only beautiful, but it is lyrical, making it that much more magical

  4. Oct 2018
    1. And I shall whisper my thoughts and fancies As always, From the pages of my books.

      The idea that even after she is gone, the things she loved most will carry on her life as if she never left is so beautifully tragic

    1. Christ! What are patterns for?

      Beautiful poem, as a first time reader of it I know that there is so much to break down and much more to search for clues in, however I feel I received the main message of the poem, that being that patterns are best broken.

    2. And I walked into the garden, Up and down the patterned paths, In my stiff, correct brocade.

      The more I read this poem, the more I find that Lowell appears to be critisizing patterns, and has a favor for difference. It would seem that patterns are associated with negative things the more this goes on

    3. Just a plate of current fashion, Tripping by in high-heeled, ribboned shoes. Not a softness anywhere about me, Only whale-bone and brocade.

      She doesn't seem to have very fond views of the current fashion she is wearing, and although she mentions a bunch of materials and colors associated with being soft, she specifically writes "Not a softness anywhere about me," leading me to wonder whether or not she is calling out her differences between her and the woman of societal standards of the time.

    1. And were the painted rosebuds    He tossed his lady Of better worth Than the words I blow about you To cover your too great loveliness    As with a gauze Of misted silver?

      Proposing whether or not words from the genuine heart are worth more than materials, such as these "painted rosebuds"

    1. And put it into my lunch-box, For I have time for nothing But the endeavour to balance myself Upon a broken world.

      The imagery Lowell uses in this poem opts for a beautiful Autumn day not able to be enjoyed because of the war at hand, thus she is metaphorically packing it away in her mind to enjoy at a time when she has time to revel in it.

    1. I painted the leaves of bushes redAnd shouted: “Fire! Fire!”But the neighbors only laughed.“We cannot warm our hands at them,” they said.Then they cut down my bushes,And made a bonfire,And danced about it.But I covered my face and wept,For ashes are not beautifulEven in the dawn.

      Seems to be acknowledging her distaste for destroying things even for something as "beautiful" as a fire. The metaphor being that death in no shade of light is ever beautiful.

    1. This poem was beautiful in a young love kind of way. The first meeting and coming together, the iconic "love at first sight," was an excellent beginning, and the lost love at the end, made it so sweetly beautiful. My personal favorite lines are "There is no comfort here. No peace is left./ Now you are gone I find the scratch is mortal," because it these lines seem so simple, but they hold so much emotion and truth to them to those who have been in and lost love. May Sarton has an excellent way of touching on reality and turning it into a story for everyone to relate to.

    1. One of my favorite poems I've read by Sarton. My favorite lines from the poem are "I sit here, open to psychic changes,/ Living myself as if I were a land," because as the poem comes together, it reminds me of people who always say they're a slave to their work, and they're constantly dreaming and day dreaming about the undiscovered world they live in. She says she open to psychic changes, meaning she is open to her pattern of thought being altered, then she claims she is living as a land, suggesting she is living larger than life itself. These are the emotions and feelings a writer experiences when they create entire new worlds in poems and stories. For writers and anyone in general who has dabbled in all sorts of creative poetry, this was a very relatable piece.

    1. "Turning towards us in our self-made desolation, May teach us all through suffering so much What Might have been learned through imagination"

      What I loved about these last three lines is that they bring the poem together and to a close, sort of as a warning sign. This poem seemed to be a cause and effect sort of thing, telling how things used to be so nice, people used to love, appreciate, and care, and now due to selfishness there are wars and battles to fight because people had rather act wrong than take a second to think about how their selfishness could have effected the rest of the world.

    1. No one has seen it happen, but inside the bark Another circle is growing in the expanding ring.

      Suggesting that happiness isn't something to behold, it's a source of life that continues to grow.

    1. Because You saturated Sight –  And I had no more Eyes

      Could Dickinson be implying that she did not see Paradise or Heaven? She could have been possibly written this in a time of her life where she felt hopeless and full of despair, a reason for not being able to see the lights of Heaven.

    1. But trifles look so trivial As soon as you have come

      March is clearly a breath of fresh air and a relief for the speaker of the poem, "trifles look so trivial," Dickinson's way of expressing pure joy and happiness at the arrival of March, thus being determined to enjoy it.

    1. It makes the parting tranquilAnd keeps the soul serene,That gentlemen so sprightlyConduct the pleasing scene!

      Dickinson is getting at the fact that the world is driven and continued on by men, and although claiming this to be a peaceful thought one can keep at the end of their days, frames it as a dig. The poem in its entirety appears to be about the cycle of life, how it continues on even after you're six-feet under, and no matter what, men will keep it going. It's holds a bit of soft sarcasm

  5. Sep 2018
    1. Of whispering lovers upon unknown strands, And suns that die to gladden rosier sails;

      Comforting, reminiscent of a summer love, and summer emotions in general. Each season brings different feelings and attitudes, this has a loving touch.

    2. GIVE.

      At the same time, I like and dislike the idea of "giving" to be a womanly trait discussed and personified within this poem because on one end, it love the acknowledgement that a trait such as this is womanly because it says a lot about our character, but on another end, I wish everyone would learn to be more giving. Maybe that's too deep of a thought, however, it is what I took of giving at first.

    1. "Needn't tell me that cussin' don't do neither good nor harm. I shouldn't want to marry amon'st the Holts if I was young ag'in! I r'member when this young man was born that's married to-day, an' the fust thing his poor mother wanted to know was about his hands bein' right. I said yes they was, but las' year he was twenty year old and come home from the frontier with one o' them hands -- his right one -- shot off in a fight. They say 't happened to sights o' other fellows, an' their laigs gone too, but I count 'em over on my fingers, them Holts, an' he's the third. May say that 'twas all an accident his mother's gittin' throwed out o' her waggin comin' home from meetin', an' her wrist not bein' set good, an' she, bein' run down at the time, 'most lost it altogether, but thar' it is, stiffened up an' no good to her. There was the second. An' Enoch Holt hisself come home from the Chiny seas, made a good passage an' a sight o' money in the pepper trade, jest 's we expected, an' goin' to build him a new house, an' the frame gives a kind o' lurch when they was raisin' of it an' surges over on to him an' nips him under. 'Which arm?' says everybody along the road when they was comin' an' goin' with the doctor. 'Right one -- got to lose it,' says the doctor to 'em, an' next time Enoch Holt got out to meetin' he stood up in the house o' God with the hymn-book in his left hand, an' no right hand to turn his leaf with. He knowed what we was all a-thinkin'."

      The "curse's," effects finally being shown. Could be a coincidence, but clearly the older women are thinking it's much more than that.

    2.      "Hannah's eyes always makes me creepy now," Mrs. Downs confessed uneasily. "They don't look pleadin' an' childish same 's they used to. Seems to me as if she'd had the worst on't."

      Her misfortunes have hardened her. This line emphasizes the possible emotions she's been harboring within her, emotions possibly not commonly seen in women, which is why they appear to be creepy.

    3.    Hannah looked wistfully at the treasures. She rebuked herself for selfishness, but she thought of her pinched girlhood and the delight these things would have been.

      Jewett contrasting innocence and maturity again as she often does within her stories. In a sense, this helps readers connect with the characters because the line between innocence and maturity is so thin, we often always find ourselves looking back and looking forward, sort of how Hannah is doing here.

    4. She had formed a pacific habit of suiting her remarks to his point of view to save an outburst.

      Although she's sacrificing her truth to avoid her husband's tantrums, the previous sentence states that she knows his temperament well enough that she alter her statements. This may be strategic on her part, rather than simply sacrificing her freedom of speech.

    1. Dick was liberated, of course; and they settled down together on the old Tyler Farm.

      I am not sure if I could personally be as close to a family member again after this ordeal, mistake or not. Dick Tyler lost a good portion of his life and the love of his life, all over a misunderstanding. It seems cruel and very harsh

    2. The people generally all liked him best, for Dick was rather odd, and had little to say.

      The old-as-time stereotype that the quiet ones are the ones you have to worry about... I wonder if that's true in this case.

    1. She was a tall, large woman, who had a direct, business-like manner, -- what the country people would call a master smart woman, or a regular driver, -- and I liked her.

      I love that Jewett has written Georgie's aunt, and her main character to not be fragile and follow the usual stereotype given to women of this time period. It is very telling of her background and thoughts as a feminist writer.

    2. such a little fellow, between those two great oars!

      She seems as though she will mention the fact that he's "little" quite often throughout the story, this could be a possible hint and foreshadowing to what may come to happen to him as the story progresses.