- Jun 2018
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Local file Local file
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it
apply them in practice
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level(s) of granularity
what granularity instead of what level(s) of granularity ?
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we can summariseseveral important points:
that's really cool
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SPAAAACE
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goodinitialisation
initialiSation... omg british till the end
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be expanded using crowdsourcing
could that also be done automatically ? text classifier.. just asking
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they use LDA
LDA reference & meaning ?
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e-related posts (i.e. posts collected usingmobile keywords) in which the tag appears, divided by thetotal number of posts in which the tag appears; this score hasto be greater than the tag relevance threshold that they setmanually. The second is the tag significance score, which isthe proportion of mobile posts with that tag, divided by thenumber of posts associated with the most popular mobile-related tag. This second score also has to be greater thana threshold they manually set.
Isn't that an opportunity to put some formalism & equations and offer some spacing again ? Just suggesting (phrases are clear)
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As a result, the main takeawaymessage of the paper, which is the superiority of micro-levelstudies over macro-level studies, is essentially demonstratingthe unsurprisingly greater impact of auditing compared toresearch in a field that is essentially defined by auditing.
Unless I miss a supplementary subtlety, this is pretty harsh no ? :P I mean that made me laugh and I loved the irony but if it's one of your selected papers maybe it should not be the last feeling you give on it
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the direction of
can be removed (direction is already used above btw)
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MOOCs
acronym introduction ? or not, just saying..
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is the main motivations
the main motivation
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Stack Overflow
reference
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works at the profession level are calledmacro-level, while works on the organisational level andbelow are called micro-level
As you refer to this heavily in the article, I'd have enjoyed just a little graph to clarify the different scales : macro/micro and how each of these maps to professional/organisational/department/individual. But maybe that's only me.
In all cases (general comment), it'd be great to just find a wise opportunity to insert more graph, it helps focusing and would give some air :-)
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II. MOTIVATION FOR OUR WORK
I have a slight feeling that this part should promote the usefulness of the project, more than describing already the directions you'll take. In my opinion, it'd be great to focus a little more on what's at stake : unemployment, education, and how crucial it is for companies / organisations to handle training needs.
Going already into the details of your dataset & limitations seems too early to me (wouldn't that fit more in the research directions ?). Although I admit it's great to just announce you'll work on Stack Overflow because then it further justifies the 2nd paper choice.
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along with its various aspects.
would remove that
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IT-
I guess there's no need to introduce the acronym ... but still
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suggests
suggest
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hey
researchers
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and this is assumed to be
presumably
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nt,
would remove that comma
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- Mar 2018
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www.microsoft.com www.microsoft.com
- Feb 2018
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www.bitbybitbook.com www.bitbybitbook.com
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