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  1. Jul 2017
    1. if it’s really worth saying, if it says what you wanted to say, and if a reader will understand what you’re saying.

      I like the three filters they give us to make sure what we're saying should stay or go.

    2. When you finish revising, that’s the time to proofread.

      I think that this is a little bit outdated advice. We have in-browser software that checks our grammar for us.

    3. Revision literally means to “see again,” to look at something from a fresh, critical perspective.

      I like how it says we need a new perspective. I tend to forget that when I'm revising my own work.

    1. specifically in metropolitan areas

      Why metropolitan areas? Don't people in cities walk more? Is it because there are more desk jobs and people are not getting the exercise they need? Or is it because they are a "go go go" fast food society?

    1. In reality, the best thing for obesity would be a national focus on what people drink in childhood and adolescence, when habits are formed.

      That explains why the article stated schools were cutting back on selling high calorie or high sugar drinks.

    2. The problem is that diet sodas aren't necessarily an improvement. Studies on the effect of diet soft drinks are mixed, but many suggest — surprisingly — that they are no better for reducing obesity than sugary drinks and are, in some ways, worse.

      I've heard this as well. That diet drinks are worse for you because of the chemicals in them and can cause blockage intravenously.

    3. America's sugary drink industry wants you to know that it cares about your health.

      I've seen the advertisements recently, mostly on Spotify, about drinks being clearly labeled, and how they want us to make healthier choices when choosing our beverages.

    1. After the meal, she appeared to doze, then opened her eyes and said,” What am I supposed to know? Do I know anything? Do I have a name?”

      This woman is suffering from some sort of mental illness.

  2. calscorneratmarginalmaddy.blogspot.com calscorneratmarginalmaddy.blogspot.com
    1. More and more frequently since I entered my fifties I have begun to see my father's hands out at the ends of my arms.

      He is seeing more of his father in himself as he grows older. Probably in many more ways than just his hands.

    1. AlthoughIknowhowtodoeverythingoneneedstoknow-changeairplanes,findmyexitofftheinterstate,chargegas,sendafax-thereissomethingmissing

      I feel like the author isn't just missing the mint dessert... he feels as if he is missing his family or family tradition.

    2. Mymothertookabiteofmintyiceandicecreammixedtogether.TheMintSnowballtastedlikewinter.

      This makes me think that the author hasn't tasted the desert for himself.

    1. Among Hillary Clinton’s supporters, 7 percent are white evangelical Protestant, 12 percent are white mainline Protestant, 11 percent are white Catholic, 30 percent are religiously unaffiliated, and 15 percent are black Protestant.

      Ummm... says who? I have a hard time seeing 7 percent of her backers as white evangelicals

    2. At the start of the 2016 general election season in early August,” the study says, “religiously unaffiliated voters expressed a strong preference for Hillary Clinton over Donald Trump (62 percent vs. 21 percent).

      The religiously unaffiliated tend to be more liberal and democratic... Why?

    3. A new study by the Public Religion Research Institute and Religion News Service finds that the largest faith category in the United States now is people who say their religion is “none.” Apparently, this marks the first time in U.S. history for the churchless to reach top status.

      Here is an argument against his premises.

    1. In Rowan County, on the other side of Kentucky, clerk Kim Davis spent five days in jail last year for refusing on religious grounds to issue marriage licenses to same-sex couples.

      Here is another example of Christians feeling persecuted.

    2. Clendenen saw “a lot of fear, a lot of anger” in his church after the Supreme Court ruling.

      I remember a lot of people felt violated by that ruling. I remember being told it was a turning point for the Christians in America.

    3. Younger Americans, including younger evangelicals, are especially accepting of same-sex relationships, which means evangelicals “have lost a generation on this issue,” Jones said.

      Younger conservative christians are much more accepting of same sex relationships and the LGBT community. Evangelicals were expecting their children to have the same opinion, and they do not.

    4. “Unfortunately, I think the misunderstanding lies at our feet as Evangelicals,″ he said. “If we come off angry, and we come off divisive, then our message is not really clear.”

      He's partly blaming his sect because they come off as a hateful, angry group of people when that's not what their message is. If you're angry expect an angry response is what I think he's trying to get at.

    5. “There’s nobody hated more in this nation than Christians,” Clendenen preached on a recent Sunday. “Welcome to America’s most wanted: You.”

      is this an assumption? Where's the backup?

    6. The 1960s ban on prayer in public schools is still a fresh wound. Every legal challenge to a public Nativity scene or Ten Commandments display is another marginalization.

      An example of how conservative christians feel they're being persecuted.

  3. May 2017
    1. .

      I'm a little confused as to the point of this article or podcast (whatever it is). He hasn't made his stance clear, he just gives us a bunch of facts that I don't really know what to do with and are all kinda jumbled in my head.

    2. Because although the rules say that they're supposed to teach evolution, that doesn't necessarily mean the school followed the rules.

      There was an example of this in my hometown. Evolution was being taught as a theory and the teacher made it very clear that it was just a theory and there were much better theories out there.

    3. you could only hold public office if you were Protestant

      That would've caused so many issues in today's world. No one would tolerate a single group of people ruling.

    4. The secular foundation of government is, in fact, eroded because of the Cold War. In the Cold War, America came to define itself as godly people, of course, fighting godless, atheistic Communism.

      This reminds me of the quote, "you are who you make yourself to be". I do not know who said it, but when Eisenhower started popularizing Christianity, I'm sure a lot of people followed his lead because that's usually what happens and America became a nation of believers.

  4. Apr 2017
    1. we need more!

      I agree we need more ways in school to vent, because school is a stressful place and if we do not take it out in approved ways, we end up usually hurting ourselves or someone else.

    2. Noooo! Youmean there's weak in the world? There's strong? Of course thereis,

      I like how the author mocks someone for saying something totally obvious, and making it sound stupid.

    3. Many more arethinking about it, like Cecil County, Md., where the schoolboard wants to ban any game with "human targets."

      Do you think this will include academic games? Like at a spelling bee or geography bowl they point questions at human students and expect them to answer them.

    4. Not to alarm you, but America is going softer than left-outbutter. Exhibit 9,137: Schools have started banning dodgeball.

      That is awful! I could not imagine going to school and have not a single possibility of hitting someone I did not like in a school approved way.

    1. I believe that my generation will see better things, too – that we will witness the time when AIDS is cured and cancer is defeated; when the Middle East will find peace and Africa grain, and the Cubs win the World Series – probably, only once

      this is really hopeful, maybe a little too much. But, he does make it seem possible, though he does not make me want to join the fight like some of the other things we have read did.

    2. a world he fears has a dark and difficult future – if it has a future at all.

      I understand a lot of people are concerned about this, this will be interesting to see what the author has to say about it.

    1. personal heartfelt definition of the word “elephant” includes mystery, order, goodness, love and a spare tire?

      He includes his own definition of elephant. His definition of an elephant does not make sense. Why did he include this?

    2. ’m beyond atheism. Atheism is not believing in God. Not believing in God is easy — you can’t prove a negative, so there’s no work to do.

      This strengthens his argument. But, in his essay he leaves no room for argument, he says that he thinks being proven wrong is fun, but he does not show that he is willing to see how others can believe in god. So this was a little troubling to me.

  5. Mar 2017
    1. I believe the thesis does not support the meaning of this essay, or it could be the other way around. Nathan spends two-thirds of his body paragraphs just explaining what AI is. To me that means this is what his essay should be about. In this essay he does not give any examples to support his thesis so far as I can tell. He should either alter his thesis to fit his essay, or alter his essay to fit his thesis, because they do not match.

    1. Some small between-arm differences in bone strength are found in non-athletes, likely because people favour one arm when writing or carrying a bag, for example. However, the differences found in tennis players are about ten times greater than those in non-players

      This could be an issue off the court. There will be a large difference, and the preferences arm might always be the racquet arm and this will cause a larger difference in the bone and muscle strength.

    2. “Making (bones) stronger and bigger in childhood, especially in adolescence, means that you’re less likely to have breaks when you get older.

      If the bones get strong enough this should help with stress fractures later.

    3. Researchers at Manchester Metropolitan University found that regular exercise when young has a far greater protective effect on bones than physical activity in adulthood.

      why?

    1. The tighter dimensions are also bringing older people to the courts.

      I know that a lot of seniors enjoy playing pickle-ball for this reason. It is a lot easier for them because the courts are much smaller and pickle-ball is usually played doubles-style.

    2. Instead of just one or two volleys on big, intimidating adult courts, kids now stay better engaged with much longer rallies on smaller courts.

      Learning to rally is one of the key developing points in a young tennis players career. Once the child learns to rally they can progress to learning how to finish points and serve well.

    3. But thanks to a retrofit of court sizes and new racket and ball technology, tennis has become a kid-friendly sport.

      This may have something to do with the overemphasis on young athletics. The sport has now become more accessible to young players so now there are expectations to be filled and a lot more opportunities.

    1. Whatever an athlete’s age, playing through pain is a bad idea. Pain is the body’s signal that something is awry.

      Some coaches take the phrase "no pain, no gain" a little too seriously. This will cause some serious injuries to their players.

    2. A major factor in the rising injury rate is the current emphasis on playing one sport all year long, which leaves no time for muscles and joints to recover from the inevitable microtrauma that occurs during practice and play.

      This has led to an increased amount of cross-training where I live. Cross-training is very popular and people are always on the hunt for the new "best" way to cross train.

    3. In 1952, the National Education Association took aim at the “high-pressure elements” and “highly organized competition” in youth sports that gave youngsters “an exaggerated idea of the importance of sports and may even be harmful to them.”

      I suppose history really does repeat itself!

    4. Clearly we’ve gone too far when the emphasis on athletic participation and performance becomes all-consuming and causes injuries that can sometimes compromise a child’s future.

      This has become an issue at some average sports academies. The athletes are stupid and once they get permanently injured, they have no future. I have seen this firsthand since I used to go to a tennis academy. Once I got injured they coaches let me go because my intelligence was of no use to them. They needed an athlete with full capabilities to become famous for them.

    5. “Overuse injuries, overtraining and burnout among child and adolescent athletes are a growing problem in the United States.”

      Maybe this is why intramural sports were created. Because athletes specialize so much, there is no room for the intermediate and beginning players of each sport.

    6. As adults become more and more involved, he noted, “with each passing season youth sports seem to stray further and further from its core mission of providing healthy, safe and character-building recreation for children.”

      I do not know why he attributing this just to adult involvement. There is a pressure on young athletes being created by their peers and themselves too.

  6. Feb 2017
    1. Refseek

      This did not show me the sources I was looking for. Most of what I saw were advertisements. I do not know if this is sponsored by some advertising company, but it wouldn't be surprising.

    2. Virtual LRC 

      I searched "tennis and children" and this time there were a few irrelevant articles, but a majority were about the effects of tennis on children.

    3. iSeek

      I searched "tennis and children" it had many returns some of them were about the careers of professional tennis players and what they have done for the game, especially children. Then there were some articles published by the USTA about children's tennis.

    1. Common words and punctuation marks should be used when searching for a specific phrase inside quotes.

      I did not know that they should be used inside quotes. I thought they were always ignored. This is good to know.

    2. sing quotation marks around a phrase will return only those exact words in that order.

      This is so true! It has helped with my research in so many classes over the years!

    3. you know how to use a good search engine,

      Using a good search engine is key. We cannot just use google for everything, when a lot of the articles on google are not academically correct or good to use. There are engines that were created specifically for scholarly use.

    1. Heat Stress Children are at an increased risk during tennis in the heat. Children have a lessened ability to dissipate heat and are more susceptible to heat injury. Thus, young players should carefully observe the guidelines for extreme heat conditions and even more conservative measures may be applied.

      tennis may be great... but there are still hazards!

    2. 18. work ethic because improvement through lessons or practice reinforces the value of hard work 19. discipline since you learn to work on your skills in practice and control the pace of play in competition 20. mistake management by learning to play within your abilities and realising that managing and minimising mistakes in tennis or life is critical 21. one-on-one competition because the ability to compete and fight trains you in the ups and downs of a competitive world 22. accept responsibility because only you can prepare to compete by practicing skills, checking your equipment and during match play by making line calls 23. management of adversity, by learning to adjust to the elements (e.g. wind, sun) and still be able to compete 24. effective accommodation of stress because the physical, mental and emotional stress of tennis will force you to increase you capacity for dealing with stress 25. learning how to recover by adapting to the stress of a point and the recovery period between points, which is similar to the stress and recovery cycles in life 26. planning and implementation of strategies since you naturally learn how to anticipate an opponent’s moves and plan your countermoves 27. learning to solve problems since tennis is a sport based on angles, geometry and physics 28. performance rituals before serving or returning which help control your rhythm of play and dealing with pressure. These skills can transfer to taking exams, conducting a meeting or making an important sales presentation 29. learning sportsmanship since tennis teaches you to compete fairly with opponents 30. learning to win graciously while losing with honour. Gloating after a win or making excuses after a loss doesn’t work in tennis or in life 31. learning teamwork since successful doubles play depends on you and your partner’s ability to communicate and play as a cohesive unit 32. developing social skills through interaction and communication before a match, while changing sides of the court and after play 33. having FUN… because the healthy feelings of enjoyment, competitiveness and physical challenge are inherent in the sport

      mention these too!!

    3. 1 aerobic and cardiovascular fitness while maintaining higher energy levels 2. anaerobic fitness through short, intense bursts of activity during a point, followed by rest, which helps muscles use oxygen efficiently 3. acceleration by practicing sprinting, jumping and lunging in order to move quickly 4. powerful first steps, by requiring anticipation, quick reaction time and explosion into action 5. speed through a series of side-to-side and up and back sprints to chase the ball 6. leg strength, through hundreds of starts and stops which build stronger leg muscles 7. general body coordination since you have to move into position and then adjust your upper body to hit the ball successfully 8. gross motor control, through court movement and ball-striking skills, which require control of your large muscle groups 9. fine motor control by the use of touch shots like angled volleys, drop shots and lobs 10. agility by forcing you to change direction as many as 5 times in 10 seconds during a typical tennis point 11. dynamic balance through hundreds of starts, stops, changes of direction and hitting on the run 12. cross-training by offering a physically demanding sport that’s fun to play for athletes who also participate in other sports 13. bone strength and density by strengthening bones of young players and helping prevent osteoporosis in older ones 14. immune system through its conditioning effects that promote overall health, fitness and resistance to disease 15. nutritional habits , by eating appropriately before competition to enhance energy production, and after competition to practice proper recovery methods 16. eye-hand coordination, because you constantly judge the timing between the on-coming ball and the proper contact point 17. flexibility due to the constant stretching and manoeuvring to return the ball toward your opponent

      mention the girl having these in one part of the book

    4. These health benefits are particularly important for a child’s physical, emotional and mental development. However, the human system can be trained and improved at any stage of life, so these health benefits apply to adults and seniors too!

      As the girl in my story grows up, she will see how much tennis is helping her. Also, she will see the developments in her character in the end.

  7. Oct 2016
    1. Tennis is more than hitting a yellow ball over a net. It is about hard work, disappointment and grace in winning and losing. This is the way life is. I hope she learns about life through tennis.

      this is an important topic to include in the childrens book.

    2. Too many kids (and adults for that matter) will swing at a moving tennis ball in ways that seem comfortable or what “seems right” for them to get the ball over the net and towards a target. Until you get them to be comfortable and familiar with a good swing path, you will see them swing in ways that are usually not productive to good tennis strokes.

      one of the most important parts of tennis is creating correct stroke patterns. If they do not have the correct stroke they could get injured or not improve.

    3. The most important thing one can do to nurture a young child at this stage is to keep it fun.

      include some fun parts of tennis to make it enjoyable and attractive to the reader.