This has happened to me so many times.

This goes back to having focus on your paper. Everything needs to flow.

It is so easy to get caught up in what you are writing that you lose focus of what direction you are going in and what you want the readers to experience.

This way you can see something you did not see before.

I always have a hard time making sure my words convey what I want them to say...so this is very important to know.

I think you should do this multiple times in order to get the best form of your paper that is possible.

Maybe he got a girlfriend from solving the rubber cube:)

When he talks about his problems reading, that does not sound cliche. It comes from his heart.

There are a ton of "I believe" statements that I think are said after a point or something inspirational was said.

This is an amazing story, and it is commendable how he talks about his struggles with dyslexia.

It would be nice if they explained what this is a little bit more than what they did in the last paragraph. I immediately thought of the Alliance that was made during WW1 and WW2.....and I don't think that is what they are referring to.

But not everyone is on board of these "calorie trends".

I don't really think this is a plan, but I mean, go for it.

What about caffeine? Or sugar? I know personally like to treat myself to a coke whenever I need the extra boost. What about other high schoolers that literally live off of caffeine? If this calorie cutting movement is meaning to get rid of Coke products ( I doubt it, and that would mean no caffeine;)) I don't think that will go over very well with a lot of people.

I personally thought our generation was about body image love and all that good stuff. Would't this kind of contradict some people's message? Or would this be to help people become healthier? I'd just like to know why they want to do this. Hopefully they will explain more fully later on in this article.

Pretty much advertising "if you drink this, you'll look like these really fit people on the commercial!!!". Nobody should fall for that kind of sham.

That seems like a lot of people who would not be happy with there being less soda.

This is connotative because it is implying that God could only do something so wonderful.

Yet he is an adult, he will still be a child that needs his mother. All of us always will be a child in the sense that are parents will always be our parents no matter how old we get, if that makes sense.

This is connotation because it implies they are being playful with each other. They are probably teasing each other.

The are more detonation words, because they are telling what the birds were doing. There is nothing implied.

This has such detail, and sounds so beautiful to see.

Something like a flock of birds flying made this man think of this, and speak it so eloquently.

Imagine how hard that might have been for the child, having to feed his/her mother. That is an act of unconditional love, in my opinion:)

Even during duress she still brings up questions that I am sure people want answers to- in life.

I do believe this woman is having some kind of mental breakdown, and I feel really sad that she has to go through that.

I think that he is really upset about this, as it connects so much to his heritage and who he is.

It sounds like this is one of the only things he knows about his great-grandfather...is there nothing else known about him besides his invention of Mint Snowball ice cream? I know the story is about the ice cream...but still. Is there nothing else?

He definitely wants this to become a reality.

Because of ice cream, he feels disconnected to the world? There must be a different reason...

I think this might have caused some drift between the father and son.

This story is probably being told by the child or a relative of the "mother".

I think that this implies that he wasn't too happy about this, but then maybe further along it showed that this was the best thing for him. We'll see, I guess:)

This is such a deep question. One that makes the reader think about the answer.

This is so descriptive. You can really see all of this in your mind.

I think he is hinting that he expects them soon.

It sounds like this is soothing for him, or habit.

I can infer that he has bad eyesight here.

This is very descriptive. You can imagine every detail in your mind.

He must have many memories with his father to remember his hands so vividly. Or he just has a great memory.

Perhaps others would find this piece interesting? It's nice that he gave the readers the warning, though.

This story was definitely in chronological order.

This is probably why there is not much information or pictures about her life, and no videos of her on YouTube.

Since she didn't answer the question, I guess the shrug is up for interpretation. I would understand her reasons for living off the grid if she didn't like being in the spotlight as a child, and such a major issue would become taxing on a child.

This still happens a lot in the media.

This definitely has a lot of narrative in this. It is still narrative without the quotations, right?

I thought this was very interesting.... Just that she said that her brother was going to agree with everything those sources said.

Kind of like this transcript. This has been clear cut and easy to follow.

So far, I don't think this is a persuasive speech. Maybe it is too early in the story, but no problem has been established or seems to need fixing.

I think this will be the central idea- unusual relationships and how they have affected us or not.

I did a little background search of him, and he is best known as being the originator of the principle of separation of church and state in the New World.

This would be a great opening sentence for people who are especially interested in history. For others, I am sure this could earn a bunch of groans. I guess this is where you need to know who your audience consist of.

Because of the lack of technology?

I knew the name sounded familiar.

So they think some things were created by an intelligent cause? How could that not be categorized as God? Or some higher being?

True. It is good to understand these topics, even if you don't believe in them. This can further solidify your own beliefs, etc.

Just as it is not prohibited to speak of other religion's viewpoints on creation, it is not as well accepted or discussed as evolution is. That is just my opinion.

I think people have a problem with it being taught as fact, and not just a theory.

I thought it was nice they gave the definition of evolution in here. It was quite detailed and offered what exactly the article was standing by, I think.

This has been a topic discussed for a very long time.

I realize this was made many years ago, but this shows how long this has been an issue. I guess we'll see if some of this information is outdated or not. :)

Hasn't it been said that high school years can be the most influential and troubling times of someone's life? This would mean students might be more receptive to receiving the Gospel.

I know many nice, Christians teenagers in public school. They are certainly not "lost". I guess this opinion depends on the family and/or student.

Did they include cyber bullying in this statement? You could still be bullied if online resources are used. Then again, maybe not.

I wish they would list the Bible verses so people could look them up themselves.

I have honestly never heard of him, but I did look him up to get a quick background of him. he was never actually an ordained minister, but a Christian psychologist. He was named, "the nation's most influential evangelical leader".

A very strong and clear opening sentence. This would probably draw people in that agree and disagree with this article.

Does this have any special meaning for the rest of the story?

This discussion will never end. There will always be different opinions. There will always be someone who is unhappy with the way things are. I think it is necessary to understand different religions, though, in order to solidify your own beliefs or give you the opportunity to ask questions about what you believe.

Did he say, "Repeat after me?"

I understand where she is coming from though.

Why can't both be taught side by side, and one not on just taught as fact? Let the people decide what they believe.

I can definitely see why this would anger people.

I think this is the main point of the story. Thinking that tomorrow will be a better day.

This makes it sound as if he doesn't eavesdrop much, but maybe he does?

I love the humor in the opening sentence.

I think people do this even when they believe in God.

This might push the list a little. :)

They are literally listing every game should be banned because of the same stupid reasons they banned dodgeball. This is a great source.

This is so true, and so hilarious!

This is probably one of the stupidest (and funniest) thing I have heard in a while. I see no difference between the two phrases for this game.

Wow. I can't believe even in fiction they would have something like this.

So cute!

Usually there are ruins of famous ancient cities, but I don't think there are any ruins from this city.

The ruins still exist today.

This is not always true, and there are disagreements as to wether this ball is actually necessary in the learning process.

This is only has a little higher compression than the foam ball. So beginners could begin with this ball as well.

This is the beginning ball most people use. It is extremely squishy.

This is the ball that is used in 10 and Under tournaments (sometimes 12 and Under too). This is the ball parents and coaches are upset about.

There are many different levels of pressureless balls.

This is a problem with the pressureless balls. More force must be used in order to get the ball over the net.

This is good for little kids because they can learn set up properly.

This depends on the ball, but the bounce does decrease over time no matter what ball it is.

They can also used to practice shot consistency for higher level players.

It is also good to use the faster paced balls for learning as well. The player can get used to the fast paced ball and not have a hard time adjusting to it in the future.

This is an important distinction of balls for different types of courts. It could make a difference while playing.

This would be a very good source to use- especially if it is simpler than Google.

This would be a very good site to use for people who get distracted by sponsored links.

Aren't the other sites high-quality as well?

This is good thing to be able to use when you need more information for you research than you already have.

This sight gave great sites to make sure we have 'genuine and reliable sources'.

I knew there are more search engines besides Google, but I did not know some were specially designed for academic research. Are they any better than Google though? Even though they are designed for academic research?

This is very helpful because there is no more wasted time typing what can show up while your typing.

This is so true. If you don't really know what you're doing, then the tool won't work. It is crucial to understand what your doing so that you can get the best results.

This would be very useful when you don't want sites with both, but want sites with one or the other. Very helpful.

I did not know this, and I think this would be very beneficial to everyone if it was more known.

It is great Google is fanatical about speed, but maybe that speed overlooks some very important information that could useful? I takes a very detailed search at times to find what you are looking for. So maybe researching the 'old-fashioned way' through books when you can't find anything useful would yield more information?

How? I haven't noticed any major differences.

He has always had the opportunity.

Everyone thought he was going to be the next big star for a awhile.

Hopefully he will keep improving! I really want him to win something.

Who wouldn't? After all of the effort and time he has put into being this good?

Doesn't he have children?

I bet it does get overwhelming at time, and not thinking about the pressure may help actually him play better. Who knows?

GO MURRAY!

I had forgotten about this...